Poems - dorks poems what do u think :P

-Ski- · 08-31-2004, 05:55 PM

this is a russle simmions type poem ( a poem about truth and has a type of rapish tune ) but it is poetry

this is also a personal fear of mine laugh if youwant

such hate in diz rhymes i wants to go back in time to where da rymes i here neva made me fear to step on my porch or to walk in da street neva fearin to be shot o f my feet from some weed smokin fool who thought that it would be kool to shoot a friend to his knees but instead of him it was me and i cursed his name as i began to bleed

Im starin at da sky hearin da sirins ring as i lay in a pool of a red type thing. My head starts to lighten and I begen to see how a bullit wit someones name hapen to hit me and now i believe its da music we here and da music we fear that devistates me

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-Ski- Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Maryland Posts: 905 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	this is a russle simmions type poem ( a poem about truth and has a type of rapish tune ) but it is poetry this is also a personal fear of mine laugh if youwant such hate in diz rhymes i wants to go back in time to where da rymes i here neva made me fear to step on my porch or to walk in da street neva fearin to be shot o f my feet from some weed smokin fool who thought that it would be kool to shoot a friend to his knees but instead of him it was me and i cursed his name as i began to bleed Im starin at da sky hearin da sirins ring as i lay in a pool of a red type thing. My head starts to lighten and I begen to see how a bullit wit someones name hapen to hit me and now i believe its da music we here and da music we fear that devistates me __________________ <center> [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v455/fickmiesterficki/setg.gif[/img:sig_uid] gfx record w 24 L 3</center>