Dark and scary sentences and poems - Look in here...

gameboymaster · 10-11-2004, 06:11 PM

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ost_uid5]I like dark and scary sentences and poems. I made alot of them up, but I put them in a notebook and I can't find them. I remembered some of them so can you rate each sentence and tell me what I need to change?

1. Essence...Soul...Dead Spirits..those words shout out in my mind. It's talking to me...trying to say No Mercy...trying to say DIE!

2. You know why I like all of you? Because you're humans....and I like the taste humans..day and night....

This is a weird dark sentence 3. You want a cookie? It'll cost you your soul!!

4. Remember your worst nightmare? Remember who it was that haunted you? Remember when you saw his dark scary eyes? Don't you remember? Yeah..you do...You remember that evil laugh and that evil smile..You remember who it was..you know it'll come back and you know exactly what it will do to you

5. You never liked me...You wanted me to be betrayed..you wanted me to be abandoned...you wanted me to be dead..you wanted me to be killed!!

6. I like the smell of your blood...too bad it's gonna be my drink for dinner...Maybe I can have your flesh to go with my dinner

I am planning on making more soon. So please rate and tell me anything I need to work on.[/color

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Edited By gameboymaster on 1097544547

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gameboymaster Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Georgia Posts: 438 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[color=#000000ost_uid5]I like dark and scary sentences and poems. I made alot of them up, but I put them in a notebook and I can't find them. I remembered some of them so can you rate each sentence and tell me what I need to change? 1. Essence...Soul...Dead Spirits..those words shout out in my mind. It's talking to me...trying to say No Mercy...trying to say DIE! 2. You know why I like all of you? Because you're humans....and I like the taste humans..day and night.... This is a weird dark sentence 3. You want a cookie? It'll cost you your soul!! 4. Remember your worst nightmare? Remember who it was that haunted you? Remember when you saw his dark scary eyes? Don't you remember? Yeah..you do...You remember that evil laugh and that evil smile..You remember who it was..you know it'll come back and you know exactly what it will do to you 5. You never liked me...You wanted me to be betrayed..you wanted me to be abandoned...you wanted me to be dead..you wanted me to be killed!! 6. I like the smell of your blood...too bad it's gonna be my drink for dinner...Maybe I can have your flesh to go with my dinner I am planning on making more soon. So please rate and tell me anything I need to work on.[/colorost_uid5] Edited By gameboymaster on 1097544547 __________________ Ferme maintenant la bouche!! Je ne veux pas ecouter @ toi...