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well i wrote something for all the warriors in sfo ^_^ and i know it's not the best but i tried for u guys so i hope u guys like it to all the fighters out there this poems for u ^_^
I need to know the man behind the dark eyes The secrets and lies The warrior who fights an endless battle with his soul The lover who keeps this on going war I need to know the shadows that lurk in his heart Which he wants to keep in the dark The man I know so well And the shadow that lurks beneath The man who can love so much His hand a tender caress And the fighter who's hand a deadly touch 2 souls trapped in one body like day and night Your soul longs to find that balance between the warrior and the lover the Caretaker and the destroyer Needing seeking looking for that answer that |
i love it. ur poem is great and if i need help with poem i'll contact u
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very good congratulations I like enough the footpath of the warrior jejeje
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wow! i'm not very good when it comes 2 writing poems, but urs was gr8!
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y thankies *blushes and looks down all shy* i never thought anyone would like it or it'd be consider great by anyone. it means a lot to me that u guys like it for it was written for all u fighters in sfo ^_^ much love to the dark warriors out there. take care ofurselves and good luck with all that u do.
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yeah that was good..i wrote this one last nite..while i was listening to my boyz ll men cd..hmm
im not to good myself but hey wat the fack! there are times i wish i wasnt here here im always in fear my dying heart is in so much pain right now it just feels like the end with you by my side you make it so much easier like my life is worth more then it seems its a journey between me and you itll never end, i hope this is true it feels so right when im chillen with you im getting scared it feels too good to be true here i lie in my bed wondering why? how? never had a friend like yu before your the best and i love ya for that its like i can give a smack and yu can still joke about that things are too perfect but still i ask myself how? someone like you?" are you fo real? yeah her name is mirella shes the best of the best my best friend for life nothing can come between us cause its best friends for life Edited By Sportschick155 on Aug. 19 2004 at 17:23 |
Nice poems nferno and sports. Damn u guys are good.
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kool thx
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Great poems. Bravo. :thumbsup:
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^_^ nice poem sports. ur a better poet then i can ever wish to become *smiles* ^_^ well heres another one for u all
Like lovers entwined on a Grecian vase Like a poster of a beautiful face In captured in ever lasting time I hold u close and call u mine Like soft rain that falls with grace Like lilies that adorn the surface of a lake My fingers gently trace those soft lips I wish to kiss Those gentle eyelids upon your face Like summers last warmth that slips to fall Like my heart that |
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