Poems - dorks poems what do u think :P

blanka09 · 08-25-2004, 05:45 PM

The world around me
My foolishness before me
The pain inside me
The bitterness within me
It's so sad to know the truth
that your work proves nothing but a lie
and even being called a fool
doesn't justify the good for which you thought you tried
And although I ask myself why
There's no "correct" answer for the errors.. with the fate that woe betides
I only wish and hope that those would take hold of me
and stop me from falling and actually hurting me
That the one whose B's and hellos..
would charm me like a sweet meadow
for nothing else seems to choke
like her voice in which only an angel can cloak
That the one whose dork knighting
wouldn't stop stop her loving
and that the Nferno, wouldn't stop "it's" burning
You never know.. until you realize
that you're a fool even when you hurt inside
Nothing can at this point justify my woes
and not even I can contend with my foes
but I know this one truth
that a survivor never gives up without a fight
and though it may seem that I will certainly loose
Ahead of One day and One dream shall be my light
Even with the Shinjitus no uta
I have come to realize that there's no one as fitting as her
so as I always end my words of despair
I will thrust this one spear
into the hearts of those who beckon against my dear
and then I shall lay
and wait for the day
she shall come my way...

... LOL.. that felt.. really good :biggrin:

Edited By blanka09 on 1093481388

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08-25-2004, 05:45 PM	#11
blanka09 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 3,884 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	The world around me My foolishness before me The pain inside me The bitterness within me It's so sad to know the truth that your work proves nothing but a lie and even being called a fool doesn't justify the good for which you thought you tried And although I ask myself why There's no "correct" answer for the errors.. with the fate that woe betides I only wish and hope that those would take hold of me and stop me from falling and actually hurting me That the one whose B's and hellos.. would charm me like a sweet meadow for nothing else seems to choke like her voice in which only an angel can cloak That the one whose dork knighting wouldn't stop stop her loving and that the Nferno, wouldn't stop "it's" burning You never know.. until you realize that you're a fool even when you hurt inside Nothing can at this point justify my woes and not even I can contend with my foes but I know this one truth that a survivor never gives up without a fight and though it may seem that I will certainly loose Ahead of One day and One dream shall be my light Even with the Shinjitus no uta I have come to realize that there's no one as fitting as her so as I always end my words of despair I will thrust this one spear into the hearts of those who beckon against my dear and then I shall lay and wait for the day she shall come my way... ... LOL.. that felt.. really good :biggrin: Edited By blanka09 on 1093481388 __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://www.boomspeed.com/blanka09/banner2.jpg[/img:sig_uid]