Poems - dorks poems what do u think :P

[blanka09]

Tell me why you had to quote my post Evil-Blanka... O_O

oh and coolplayer2k2.. wonder why no one cares?? This is Random Insanity.. my guess is, everything goes :biggrin:

[Evil-Blanka]

[quoteost_uid0="blanka09"]Tell me why you had to quote my post Evil-Blanka... O_O

oh and coolplayer2k2.. wonder why no one cares?? This is Random Insanity.. my guess is, everything goes :biggrin:[/quote]
[color=# f7F00]ok sorry blanka what are you talking about im a free minded person well i dont know im kinda weird well i am not as bad as i use t to be double posting spamming doing every thing lol ok here is another



why do we do what we do why dont i do what i told i try to find things but i have to un fold un fold when i open it i find gold im blanka and i like chanka chanka and blanka goes with each other i hate her and she loves me chanka leave me the hell alone and let me be free free is for me and your a slave to open your mind you must be brrave[/color]

[girlNferno666]

well done meanie on the poems evil blanka thankies for sharing ur poem with us *smiles*

[girlNferno666]

well this ones for evil_blanka ^c^ i hopes u like it

slowly day in and day out
this demon that lives with in me wishes to get out
this darkness that no one knows
that consumes my soul
the secrets and lies that hides inside
the evil that no one sees
wishes to be set free
slowly it eats at me
whispering to me i should let it be
the shadow is all i need
and slowly it sweeps
from it's dormant sleep
fude by old age rage
breaking free of it's cage
the beast within
now roams free in this world of sin



Edited By girlNferno666 on 1093397801

[Evil-Blanka]

[quoteost_uid0="girlNferno666"]well this ones for evil_blanka ^c^ i hopes u like it

slowly day in and day out
this demon that lives with in me wishes to get out
this darkness that no one knows
that consumes my soul
the secrets and lies that hides inside
the evil that no one sees
wishes to be set free
slowly it eats at me
whispering to me i should let it be
the shadow is all i need
and slowly it sweeps
from it's dormant sleep
fude by old age rage
breaking free of it's cage
the beast in me has been unleashed. . .[/quote]
[color=# f7F00]i like it it was nice i am not realy like that i just like posting poems with hatred in it lol looke at my ghost face :ghostface:[/color]

[dragon_cloud]

[color=#000000ost_uid2]:alien: :stupid: GIRLNFERNO'S R THE BEST :buttrock:[/colorost_uid2]

[Riseabove]

Yeah as you begin to write for many years. You notice that your writing goes thru phases. I have had about 3 or 4 meanie phases and several lesser meanie phases. Rejection phases, acceptance phases, contemplative phases, reminiscing phases, wishing phases, dreaming phases, damn man. poop gets soo deep. I prsonally try not to draw from one inspiration for too long. but i always find myself getting stuck on the subject of romance like many poets. but hey, i know i aint the only romantic in this world. So heres one i recently wrote. :hehe:


Pain picks at pleasure like painted passion from pressed lips.
All your anguish anger astonishment arms are out asking for answers.
Iniside it lies intertwined in illuminated illusions.
Numb and nodding nervously nursing noxious nubile narcotic need.

Innocently inclined to the inescapable isolated idea.
Silently sleeping surrounded by solemn sounds of solitude.

Left like dried leaves loosely lying as lonely as autumn's love.
Overly ope novertunred to a noverture of oncoming waves and oceanic tides.
Vindicated and voluptuous as violet, valued voraciously in volumes.
Enchanting elegance as eve enters early light's embrace.



P.S. Nice work girl inferno. I havent read all of it yet, but i liked what i saw so far. Caretaker and destroyer..hehehehe. i was reading that one like YOU GO GIRL!

P.P.S Yo im having a problem with spaces and such......and O's look at the line where it says a noverture of oceanic tides and al that poop> the O line, i corrected those typo's twice and they still switch back like that...same thing happened with the marquee on ym sig, i couldnt get them to stay spaced...every OTHER time i would edit it, It would take out the double spaces between words and also make some O's and B's lowr case.../shrugs it was odd. but it was one of the first things i noticed since the forum's make over.



Edited By Riseabove on 1093417013

[girlNferno666]

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[blanka09]

The world around me
My foolishness before me
The pain inside me
The bitterness within me
It's so sad to know the truth
that your work proves nothing but a lie
and even being called a fool
doesn't justify the good for which you thought you tried
And although I ask myself why
There's no "correct" answer for the errors.. with the fate that woe betides
I only wish and hope that those would take hold of me
and stop me from falling and actually hurting me
That the one whose B's and hellos..
would charm me like a sweet meadow
for nothing else seems to choke
like her voice in which only an angel can cloak
That the one whose dork knighting
wouldn't stop stop her loving
and that the Nferno, wouldn't stop "it's" burning
You never know.. until you realize
that you're a fool even when you hurt inside
Nothing can at this point justify my woes
and not even I can contend with my foes
but I know this one truth
that a survivor never gives up without a fight
and though it may seem that I will certainly loose
Ahead of One day and One dream shall be my light
Even with the Shinjitus no uta
I have come to realize that there's no one as fitting as her
so as I always end my words of despair
I will thrust this one spear
into the hearts of those who beckon against my dear
and then I shall lay
and wait for the day
she shall come my way...


... LOL.. that felt.. really good :biggrin:



Edited By blanka09 on 1093481388

[SBYRD5]

Nice blanka,but I see a word error in your poem...seems to recieve your real life...though...you do seem to contiue regardless very strong man.


Ave...today I realized that I died with the blood of shiva running through my viens.

Hindu....Shrines to a GOD of carnation....

My pockets are warm because I hide my needed hands in them with passive gesture....

A poor mans hands are firm....

I carried a walking stick the day I died...and used it as a blind man.....but a blind man that didn't know himself..

no one knows themselve better than a blindman...

Sense I have real sight I stared at the sea in the sky wishing it would rain pruple....breathing at the sky righting my name in the air with my breath.....

Seeing only Red through my malicious colorblindness....so when it rains for me i see the blood of the virgin mary...

Mellow shades of blue cruised through my mind and for a moment I was in Nirvana....

Was my nirvana in the skies...?

I smirked...as if I new of my own awakening...

And in this golden Age of sin...there isn't much to smile about...

Broken smiles...with broken christian dreams...

So when you lose your dream you die...

I don't dream anymore...

That's why I think I'm dead...



Edited By SBYRD5 on 1093482521