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azncat · 10-15-2004, 08:41 PM

Roses, exquisitely
fragrant
Overpowering me in
the garden of love
Their secret delight,
delightful
Spinning in aromatic
pleasure
Breathing in deeply
of their complexity
Their scent of pleasure,
dreams of paradise
Dazzling, glistening
exotic petals in
sunbeam days
The pleasure everlasting
in my mind of
those roses
Fragrant roses to
soothe my soul
Fragrance to delight
my senses
Fragrant roses of love

.... o o..... For a certain friend close to me... very close

Edited By azncat on 1097898302

shy_gurL21 · 10-15-2004, 09:04 PM

[quote

ost_uid0="party_gurl"][quote

ost_uid0="shy gurL21"]i'm here sitting quietly
waiting for him to notice me
i'm falling in love with this guy
i want to approach him but i'm too shy
so i just ask myself with anticipation
what do i have to do to win his attention?
does he realize my presence?
is he bothered by my absence?
if i disappear will he even care?
does he miss me when i'm not there?
i find my happiness when he's around
every pain that i feel he relieves
i know in his eyes i'm just a face in the crowd
but i'm sure when everyone else leaves
i will be the only one to stay
and never let him go astray.[/quote]
omgoSH!! my sweety is sOooO talented..=T!!

girlnferno yours is awesome !! cant make any good poems compare to yooh guys.. :love:[/quote]
lol. let me see a sample of your poem. it doesn't matter if it's good or not. :cheesy:

nice poem azncat.

girlNferno666 · 10-15-2004, 10:02 PM

^_^ aww cats got a sweet side and he's not just 100% crazy :P like i thought he was *huggles the cat* kisses ya on the cheek* hey nice poem silly u should share more offten u have quite a talent ^_^

dominicankid098 · 10-15-2004, 10:10 PM

Quote:

azncat Posted: Oct. 15 2004,11:41

Roses, exquisitely
fragrant
Overpowering me in
the garden of love
Their secret delight,
delightful
Spinning in aromatic
pleasure
Breathing in deeply
of their complexity
Their scent of pleasure,
dreams of paradise
Dazzling, glistening
exotic petals in
sunbeam days
The pleasure everlasting
in my mind of
those roses
Fragrant roses to
soothe my soul
Fragrance to delight
my senses
Fragrant roses of love

Not to embarrass anyone in this place but I read that poem azncat posted before.

Oh lookie, I got a link of it. =)

http://www.seekermagazine.com/v0798/sun.html

Now unless your name is Michael David Coffey, then I don't think you wrote that.

Edited By dominicankid098 on 1097905356

evilhadoken · 10-16-2004, 02:16 PM

heres one that i saw somewhere :

Roses are red
violets are blue
they'll need dental records
to identify you.

Necro2k2 · 10-16-2004, 03:20 PM

Plagerizing is an illegal form of writing young azn cat. Would you know that I could call the police and if the writer wanted to put any charges against you, you could get sued for a TON of money. It's just something I'd like you to know. Young girls like you shouldn't be getting into any type of controversy like that, now should you?

Edited By Necro2k2 on 1097965332

girlNferno666 · 10-16-2004, 09:50 PM

i haven't slit my wrist but y is there pain
theres isn't any blood but yet i see the red stains
no ones dead but i hear morners
as i sit here in this dark coner
my world torn and shatter
and nothing any more in life matters
time is of no essesence
i've learned all of lifes lessons
there is nothing more for me here but tears
the hurt my soul bears
i am broken inside
so i wonder y am i still alive
y won't u let me die
i've forgotten the warmth of the sun
or how it's like to laugh and have fun
my soul is numb
and to me life is done
so let me go
hold me not here supsended in pain
let all those memories of me slide down the drain
there is nothing left for u and me
so let it be
you've broken me

mastergrim8 · 10-18-2004, 12:22 PM

Nice poem and the panda is cute

mastergrim8 · 10-18-2004, 12:30 PM

I got a poem so dont read it, it's crazy

Love,
A better sweet feeling
its the best of life
nothing brings more joy
through near the end
it shall be in there
to whom it gives
yall dont know
wat is meant
is meant to be
it aint bought
every soul has a true 1
be patient
patient
till the day comes
u wont know wat true love is
when that day comes
u will truly be free
I will do all for love
I am not worth living
with the love ofu.

Written by the one and only. Dedicated to my love

Edited By mastergrim8 on 1098128763

girlNferno666 · 10-18-2004, 02:31 PM

may i ask who's love that is ur talking about ^_^ it's a rather intresting poem you've written there grim ^_^ thankies for sharing it

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10-15-2004, 08:41 PM	#201
azncat Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: in my own lil world but it ok they know me here!! Posts: 3,202 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Roses, exquisitely fragrant Overpowering me in the garden of love Their secret delight, delightful Spinning in aromatic pleasure Breathing in deeply of their complexity Their scent of pleasure, dreams of paradise Dazzling, glistening exotic petals in sunbeam days The pleasure everlasting in my mind of those roses Fragrant roses to soothe my soul Fragrance to delight my senses Fragrant roses of love .... o o..... For a certain friend close to me... very close Edited By azncat on 1097898302 __________________ free candy just click here! http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?azncat morons...

10-15-2004, 09:04 PM	#202
shy_gurL21 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Los Angeles, CA Posts: 712 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="party_gurl"][quoteost_uid0="shy gurL21"]i'm here sitting quietly waiting for him to notice me i'm falling in love with this guy i want to approach him but i'm too shy so i just ask myself with anticipation what do i have to do to win his attention? does he realize my presence? is he bothered by my absence? if i disappear will he even care? does he miss me when i'm not there? i find my happiness when he's around every pain that i feel he relieves i know in his eyes i'm just a face in the crowd but i'm sure when everyone else leaves i will be the only one to stay and never let him go astray.[/quote] omgoSH!! my sweety is sOooO talented..=T!! girlnferno yours is awesome !! cant make any good poems compare to yooh guys.. :love:[/quote] lol. let me see a sample of your poem. it doesn't matter if it's good or not. :cheesy: nice poem azncat. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/shy_gurL21/mybaby_sbanner.jpg[/img:sig_uid] [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/shy_gurL21/shygurlbanner.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

10-15-2004, 10:02 PM	#203
girlNferno666 Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 346 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	^_^ aww cats got a sweet side and he's not just 100% crazy :P like i thought he was huggles the cat kisses ya on the cheek* hey nice poem silly u should share more offten u have quite a talent ^_^ __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img9.imgspot.com/u/04/280/07/girlnf.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

10-16-2004, 02:16 PM	#205
evilhadoken Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,617 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	heres one that i saw somewhere : Roses are red violets are blue they'll need dental records to identify you. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload9/v3_for_me.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

10-16-2004, 03:20 PM	#206
Necro2k2 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 480 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Plagerizing is an illegal form of writing young azn cat. Would you know that I could call the police and if the writer wanted to put any charges against you, you could get sued for a TON of money. It's just something I'd like you to know. Young girls like you shouldn't be getting into any type of controversy like that, now should you? Edited By Necro2k2 on 1097965332

10-16-2004, 09:50 PM	#207
girlNferno666 Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 346 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	i haven't slit my wrist but y is there pain theres isn't any blood but yet i see the red stains no ones dead but i hear morners as i sit here in this dark coner my world torn and shatter and nothing any more in life matters time is of no essesence i've learned all of lifes lessons there is nothing more for me here but tears the hurt my soul bears i am broken inside so i wonder y am i still alive y won't u let me die i've forgotten the warmth of the sun or how it's like to laugh and have fun my soul is numb and to me life is done so let me go hold me not here supsended in pain let all those memories of me slide down the drain there is nothing left for u and me so let it be you've broken me __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img9.imgspot.com/u/04/280/07/girlnf.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

10-18-2004, 12:22 PM	#208
mastergrim8 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: AH LOCATION BROOKLYN.NEWYORK Posts: 1,560 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Nice poem and the panda is cute __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v626/mastergrim8/Protoman_Banner.jpg[/img:sig_uid] IF YOU DO GOOD YOU ARE REWARDED FOR YOUR GOOD IF YOU DO BAD YOUR PUNISHED FOR YOUR EVIL ITS TRUE ABOUT WHAT THEY SAY WHATGOES AROUND COMES AROUND EVERY ACTION HAS ITS OWN WAY TO MAKE IT BACK TO YOU THAT TAKES ITS OWN COURSE

10-18-2004, 12:30 PM	#209
mastergrim8 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: AH LOCATION BROOKLYN.NEWYORK Posts: 1,560 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	I got a poem so dont read it, it's crazy Love, A better sweet feeling its the best of life nothing brings more joy through near the end it shall be in there to whom it gives yall dont know wat is meant is meant to be it aint bought every soul has a true 1 be patient patient till the day comes u wont know wat true love is when that day comes u will truly be free I will do all for love I am not worth living with the love ofu. Written by the one and only. Dedicated to my love Edited By mastergrim8 on 1098128763 __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v626/mastergrim8/Protoman_Banner.jpg[/img:sig_uid] IF YOU DO GOOD YOU ARE REWARDED FOR YOUR GOOD IF YOU DO BAD YOUR PUNISHED FOR YOUR EVIL ITS TRUE ABOUT WHAT THEY SAY WHATGOES AROUND COMES AROUND EVERY ACTION HAS ITS OWN WAY TO MAKE IT BACK TO YOU THAT TAKES ITS OWN COURSE

10-18-2004, 02:31 PM	#210
girlNferno666 Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 346 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	may i ask who's love that is ur talking about ^_^ it's a rather intresting poem you've written there grim ^_^ thankies for sharing it __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img9.imgspot.com/u/04/280/07/girlnf.jpg[/img:sig_uid]