Poems - dorks poems what do u think :P

girlNferno666 · 08-18-2004, 09:47 PM

well i wrote something for all the warriors in sfo ^_^ and i know it's not the best but i tried for u guys so i hope u guys like it to all the fighters out there this poems for u ^_^

I need to know the man behind the dark eyes
The secrets and lies
The warrior who fights an endless battle with his soul
The lover who keeps this on going war
I need to know the shadows that lurk in his heart
Which he wants to keep in the dark
The man I know so well
And the shadow that lurks beneath
The man who can love so much
His hand a tender caress
And the fighter who's hand a deadly touch
2 souls trapped in one body like day and night
Your soul longs to find that balance between the warrior and the lover the
Caretaker and the destroyer
Needing seeking looking for that answer that

EvilAkuma · 08-19-2004, 06:57 AM

i love it. ur poem is great and if i need help with poem i'll contact u

gouki2008 · 08-19-2004, 07:14 AM

very good congratulations I like enough the footpath of the warrior jejeje

Gambit036 · 08-19-2004, 07:15 AM

wow! i'm not very good when it comes 2 writing poems, but urs was gr8!

girlNferno666 · 08-19-2004, 01:58 PM

y thankies *blushes and looks down all shy* i never thought anyone would like it or it'd be consider great by anyone. it means a lot to me that u guys like it for it was written for all u fighters in sfo ^_^ much love to the dark warriors out there. take care ofurselves and good luck with all that u do.

Sportschick155 · 08-19-2004, 02:17 PM

yeah that was good..i wrote this one last nite..while i was listening to my boyz ll men cd..hmm
im not to good myself but hey wat the fack!

there are times
i wish i wasnt here
here im always in fear
my dying heart is in so much pain
right now it just feels like the end
with you by my side you make it so much easier
like my life is worth more then it seems
its a journey between me and you
itll never end, i hope this is true
it feels so right when im chillen with you
im getting scared it feels too good to be true
here i lie in my bed
wondering why? how?
never had a friend like yu before
your the best and i love ya for that
its like i can give a smack and yu can still joke about that
things are too perfect
but still i ask myself how? someone like you?" are you fo real?
yeah her name is mirella
shes the best of the best
my best friend for life
nothing can come between us
cause its best friends for life

Edited By Sportschick155 on Aug. 19 2004 at 17:23

alamgir · 08-19-2004, 02:20 PM

Nice poems nferno and sports. Damn u guys are good.

Sportschick155 · 08-19-2004, 03:08 PM

kool thx

akuma_forever · 08-19-2004, 05:23 PM

Great poems. Bravo. :thumbsup:

girlNferno666 · 08-19-2004, 05:50 PM

^_^ nice poem sports. ur a better poet then i can ever wish to become *smiles* ^_^ well heres another one for u all

Like lovers entwined on a Grecian vase
Like a poster of a beautiful face
In captured in ever lasting time
I hold u close and call u mine
Like soft rain that falls with grace
Like lilies that adorn the surface of a lake
My fingers gently trace those soft lips I wish to kiss
Those gentle eyelids upon your face
Like summers last warmth that slips to fall
Like my heart that

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08-18-2004, 09:47 PM	#1
girlNferno666 Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 346 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	well i wrote something for all the warriors in sfo ^_^ and i know it's not the best but i tried for u guys so i hope u guys like it to all the fighters out there this poems for u ^_^ I need to know the man behind the dark eyes The secrets and lies The warrior who fights an endless battle with his soul The lover who keeps this on going war I need to know the shadows that lurk in his heart Which he wants to keep in the dark The man I know so well And the shadow that lurks beneath The man who can love so much His hand a tender caress And the fighter who's hand a deadly touch 2 souls trapped in one body like day and night Your soul longs to find that balance between the warrior and the lover the Caretaker and the destroyer Needing seeking looking for that answer that __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img9.imgspot.com/u/04/280/07/girlnf.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

08-19-2004, 06:57 AM	#2
EvilAkuma Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 2,847 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	i love it. ur poem is great and if i need help with poem i'll contact u __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://www.boomspeed.com/resident3/logo.gif[/img:sig_uid] ^It's up running. CLICK ON IT

08-19-2004, 07:14 AM	#3
gouki2008 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: spain Posts: 829 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	very good congratulations I like enough the footpath of the warrior jejeje __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v255/ryzcvk2711/Requested%20Sigs/gouki2008copy.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

08-19-2004, 07:15 AM	#4
Gambit036 Junior Member New Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 21 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	wow! i'm not very good when it comes 2 writing poems, but urs was gr8! __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://lordaoshi.250free.com/Gambit036.jpg[/img:sig_uid] You ready to play with Gambit?

08-19-2004, 01:58 PM	#5
girlNferno666 Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 346 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	y thankies blushes and looks down all shy i never thought anyone would like it or it'd be consider great by anyone. it means a lot to me that u guys like it for it was written for all u fighters in sfo ^_^ much love to the dark warriors out there. take care ofurselves and good luck with all that u do. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img9.imgspot.com/u/04/280/07/girlnf.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

08-19-2004, 02:17 PM	#6
Sportschick155 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Winnipeg Posts: 2,783 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	yeah that was good..i wrote this one last nite..while i was listening to my boyz ll men cd..hmm im not to good myself but hey wat the fack! there are times i wish i wasnt here here im always in fear my dying heart is in so much pain right now it just feels like the end with you by my side you make it so much easier like my life is worth more then it seems its a journey between me and you itll never end, i hope this is true it feels so right when im chillen with you im getting scared it feels too good to be true here i lie in my bed wondering why? how? never had a friend like yu before your the best and i love ya for that its like i can give a smack and yu can still joke about that things are too perfect but still i ask myself how? someone like you?" are you fo real? yeah her name is mirella shes the best of the best my best friend for life nothing can come between us cause its best friends for life Edited By Sportschick155 on Aug. 19 2004 at 17:23 __________________ whoever said the struggle would stop today, alota niggas are dead or locked away, teenage women growing up with aids, that's the life when you're living in the ghetto

08-19-2004, 02:20 PM	#7
alamgir Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 5,865 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Nice poems nferno and sports. Damn u guys are good. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v209/alamgir/advancedborder-ice.jpg[/img:sig_uid] When your the number one public enemy, who do you turn to?

08-19-2004, 03:08 PM	#8
Sportschick155 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Winnipeg Posts: 2,783 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	kool thx __________________ whoever said the struggle would stop today, alota niggas are dead or locked away, teenage women growing up with aids, that's the life when you're living in the ghetto

08-19-2004, 05:23 PM	#9
akuma_forever Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: The World Posts: 4,392 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Great poems. Bravo. :thumbsup:

08-19-2004, 05:50 PM	#10
girlNferno666 Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 346 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	^_^ nice poem sports. ur a better poet then i can ever wish to become smiles ^_^ well heres another one for u all Like lovers entwined on a Grecian vase Like a poster of a beautiful face In captured in ever lasting time I hold u close and call u mine Like soft rain that falls with grace Like lilies that adorn the surface of a lake My fingers gently trace those soft lips I wish to kiss Those gentle eyelids upon your face Like summers last warmth that slips to fall Like my heart that __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img9.imgspot.com/u/04/280/07/girlnf.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

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