Poems - dorks poems what do u think :P - Page 24

`Crystal · 12-02-2004, 05:52 PM

hold u can post any type of poems right? not juss sad love and stuff like dat?

Riseabove · 12-02-2004, 06:45 PM

anything you want bro....yeah i know, alot of love stuff. that seems to be the motivation for most writers these days.

say whatever you want tho. thats why i am jsut writing things up on the spot.

Jewel03 · 12-05-2004, 08:32 AM

i like those poem.becuz i cant really write poems that good

SBYRD5 · 12-06-2004, 07:11 PM

Grass was cyan,
Desire was in the air,
The winter wind swirled in the curls of her hair.
The trees embraced the land..like straightened hair,
And the grass hazed as a goatee...for everyone to see.

I waltz into the world...alone my soul wasn't alive.
Till I began to walk...I ventured from homes.
Everyone told me thier stories..and invited me to remeber thier memories...

With thier soul came experience....with experience came wisdom.
I was only a teenager with the hair of a drunken master,
So much wisdom I have gathered for only being 1 month from Adultry...

This is my story....supplied by me..byrd....not a poultry....

Edited By SBYRD5 on 1102389190

Sportschick155 · 12-14-2004, 04:42 PM

hmm,,

SBYRD5 · 12-15-2004, 12:39 PM

She said she could treat me better,but she abandoned me,
Sticked my heart then decided to hand it to me,
Evey woman in my life abandons me,
Drives lunatics like me near insanity,
I'm not a toy soldier...when I break I break,
I'm not from harlem...when I'm cold I shiver..I don't shake,

I smoke in my longevity,
Jimi Hendrix "Purple Haze" is my gravity,
That keeps me to earth grounds....from riding an escalada to heaven bounds,
This isn't a rap this is my own sound...my heart is distroyed...when well that guy in a robe..descend from heaven to end it all...maybe now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:down:

Edited By SBYRD5 on 1103143274

12-15-2004, 12:58 PM

[quote

ost_uid0="Sportschick155"]hmm,,[/quote]
Well i like those poems they are realy good.Here is myn

Every thing is dark purpl and blue
The girl who i love is looking rgith at you
i think in my head how dare you
i looke at the guy who tooke my gurl mad and blue
I just want to rush your head and stab you
but if i do the gurl in purple in blue will miss you
then she will go boo hoo

Short but it was ok.

SBYRD5 · 12-15-2004, 01:01 PM

I was angry today..better take it out in another post here...

MY eye's searching like an eagle,
My hands tensed ready to let the marrow escape,
My heart is burning red...my pulse is quick,
MY ears are being eaten alive by haters an exlovers that bring words that break my clique..I took so long to build my heart with bricks,

So bad love is the big bad wolf..blowing our hearts down,
Or is it just my humanity being questioned on this lifestream,

I MEAN "Who am I." "like phuck who am I"
A lad making ends meet on a burger King Salary...my escape being my words,
If I was mute I'd have nothing...like a painter that paint's landscapes being blind,

My depression creates insects whenever I close my eyes and try to think with my mind,

I got tooth decay from kissing a princess so sweet even a queen of spades couldn't resist her...

And now I'm something less to her....
Once I meant more to her than my mother's birthright to my last name,
All a young man like me can do is just tie on his du-rag tight...and keep wearing his chain....=/

:dozingoff:

Edited By SBYRD5 on 1103235354

12-15-2004, 07:06 PM

[quote

ost_uid0="SBYRD5"]I was angry today..better take it out in another post here...

MY eye's searching like an eagle,
My hands tensed ready to let the marrow escape,
My heart is burning red...my pulse is quick,
MY ears are being eaten alive by haters an exlovers that bring words that break my clique..I took so long to build my heart with bricks,

So bad love is the big bad wolf..blowing our hearts down,
Or is it just my humanity being questioned on this lifestream,

I MEAN "Who am I." "like phuck who am I"
A lad making ends meet on a burger King Salary...my escape being my words,
If I was mute I'd have nothing...like a painter that paint's landscapes being blind,

My depression creates insects whenever I close my eye's and try to think with my mind,

I got tooth decay from kissing a princess so sweet even another queen of spades couldn't resist her...

And now I'm something less to her....
Meant more to her than my mother's birthright to to my last name,
All a young man like me can do is just tie on his du-rag tight...and keep wearing his chain....=/

:dozingoff:[/quote]
That was a good poem and sbyrd you looke like carmello lol. thats my name 2 i looke just like him i realy do.well thats what all the girls say.

theWhale · 12-16-2004, 02:08 PM

id post my pic but i cant find student card..........damn..
ill post this instead:

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12-02-2004, 05:52 PM	#231
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12-02-2004, 06:45 PM	#232
Riseabove Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Long Island NY Posts: 116 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	anything you want bro....yeah i know, alot of love stuff. that seems to be the motivation for most writers these days. say whatever you want tho. thats why i am jsut writing things up on the spot. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v371/Riseaboveone/omgf.jpg[/img:sig_uid] <marquee> Textbook ownage right here... http://www.media.ebaumsworld.com/ind...e=jockbeat.wmv

12-14-2004, 04:42 PM	#235
Sportschick155 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Winnipeg Posts: 2,783 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	hmm,, __________________ whoever said the struggle would stop today, alota niggas are dead or locked away, teenage women growing up with aids, that's the life when you're living in the ghetto

12-15-2004, 12:58 PM	#237
75-1103076306 Guest Posts: n/a Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): Thanks (Received): Likes (Given): Likes (Received): Dislikes (Given): Dislikes (Received): Points: 0 Mentioned: Post(s) Tagged: Thread(s) Quoted: Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="Sportschick155"]hmm,,[/quote] Well i like those poems they are realy good.Here is myn Every thing is dark purpl and blue The girl who i love is looking rgith at you i think in my head how dare you i looke at the guy who tooke my gurl mad and blue I just want to rush your head and stab you but if i do the gurl in purple in blue will miss you then she will go boo hoo Short but it was ok.

12-05-2004, 08:32 AM	#233
Jewel03 Member New Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: home Posts: 37 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	i like those poem.becuz i cant really write poems that good

12-06-2004, 07:11 PM	#234
SBYRD5 Banned Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: North Carolina Posts: 6,549 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Grass was cyan, Desire was in the air, The winter wind swirled in the curls of her hair. The trees embraced the land..like straightened hair, And the grass hazed as a goatee...for everyone to see. I waltz into the world...alone my soul wasn't alive. Till I began to walk...I ventured from homes. Everyone told me thier stories..and invited me to remeber thier memories... With thier soul came experience....with experience came wisdom. I was only a teenager with the hair of a drunken master, So much wisdom I have gathered for only being 1 month from Adultry... This is my story....supplied by me..byrd....not a poultry.... Edited By SBYRD5 on 1102389190

12-15-2004, 12:39 PM	#236
SBYRD5 Banned Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: North Carolina Posts: 6,549 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	She said she could treat me better,but she abandoned me, Sticked my heart then decided to hand it to me, Evey woman in my life abandons me, Drives lunatics like me near insanity, I'm not a toy soldier...when I break I break, I'm not from harlem...when I'm cold I shiver..I don't shake, I smoke in my longevity, Jimi Hendrix "Purple Haze" is my gravity, That keeps me to earth grounds....from riding an escalada to heaven bounds, This isn't a rap this is my own sound...my heart is distroyed...when well that guy in a robe..descend from heaven to end it all...maybe now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :down: Edited By SBYRD5 on 1103143274

12-15-2004, 01:01 PM	#238
SBYRD5 Banned Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: North Carolina Posts: 6,549 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	I was angry today..better take it out in another post here... MY eye's searching like an eagle, My hands tensed ready to let the marrow escape, My heart is burning red...my pulse is quick, MY ears are being eaten alive by haters an exlovers that bring words that break my clique..I took so long to build my heart with bricks, So bad love is the big bad wolf..blowing our hearts down, Or is it just my humanity being questioned on this lifestream, I MEAN "Who am I." "like phuck who am I" A lad making ends meet on a burger King Salary...my escape being my words, If I was mute I'd have nothing...like a painter that paint's landscapes being blind, My depression creates insects whenever I close my eyes and try to think with my mind, I got tooth decay from kissing a princess so sweet even a queen of spades couldn't resist her... And now I'm something less to her.... Once I meant more to her than my mother's birthright to my last name, All a young man like me can do is just tie on his du-rag tight...and keep wearing his chain....=/ :dozingoff: Edited By SBYRD5 on 1103235354

12-15-2004, 07:06 PM	#239
75-1103076306 Guest Posts: n/a Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): Thanks (Received): Likes (Given): Likes (Received): Dislikes (Given): Dislikes (Received): Points: 0 Mentioned: Post(s) Tagged: Thread(s) Quoted: Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="SBYRD5"]I was angry today..better take it out in another post here... MY eye's searching like an eagle, My hands tensed ready to let the marrow escape, My heart is burning red...my pulse is quick, MY ears are being eaten alive by haters an exlovers that bring words that break my clique..I took so long to build my heart with bricks, So bad love is the big bad wolf..blowing our hearts down, Or is it just my humanity being questioned on this lifestream, I MEAN "Who am I." "like phuck who am I" A lad making ends meet on a burger King Salary...my escape being my words, If I was mute I'd have nothing...like a painter that paint's landscapes being blind, My depression creates insects whenever I close my eye's and try to think with my mind, I got tooth decay from kissing a princess so sweet even another queen of spades couldn't resist her... And now I'm something less to her.... Meant more to her than my mother's birthright to to my last name, All a young man like me can do is just tie on his du-rag tight...and keep wearing his chain....=/ :dozingoff:[/quote] That was a good poem and sbyrd you looke like carmello lol. thats my name 2 i looke just like him i realy do.well thats what all the girls say.

12-16-2004, 02:08 PM	#240
theWhale Junior Member New Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: the big CANUK....ya im cool B\| Posts: 28 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	id post my pic but i cant find student card..........damn.. ill post this instead: __________________ i am almighty i am _the(/\)\|-\|/-\\|_E_ [img:sig_uid]http://www.creativeforkids.com/Merchant2/ckm/muralgallery/images/jonah/Jonah%20&%20the%20Whale%20full%20view.jpg[/img:sig_uid] fear me or DIE!!!! [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v629/theWhale/duck-breakdance.gif[/img:sig_uid]