Poems - dorks poems what do u think :P

[mastergrim8]

great poem. Too bad I'm too dumb to read it just kidding :blues: but I have my goals

[dragon_cloud]

shy that was a nice poem ken...u got problems....haha im joking its good and girlnfero i love ur poem it was great but the ending was sad........i hope u find peace....cause someone like u and shy should never fell.....pain................(puts up hood turns around pull me cape and walks away in the misty moon lightwith a tear down my cheek.)

[shy_gurL21]

hah! thanx dawg...

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love once broke me down
now it's turned my life around
i'm the same old me but brand new
the only reason why i'm here is you
i've loved and lost many
and i know this is my destiny
sometimes i know you get hurt
and it's not what you deserve
to me the world is what you worth
i wish i can always be there
to take away the pain that you bear
it's only you that i wanna live for
i've opened up the magic door
and i found you my angel on the other side
you always know when i'm hurting inside
you're here to save me from my loneliness
because of you i know i'm truly blessed.



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1100842645

[KenDaShoto]

shy are these poems to a boyfriend or somethin cause if i was gettin stuff like this a girl would have me on a leash

[shy_gurL21]

yessir, they are. well sort of...
btw... is that bad or wat? ???



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1101020297

[KenDaShoto]

no its not bad at all
i was just wonderin but i wish some of my girlfriends would write stuff like that for me
or maybe they did and i didnt kno
does ur bf kno u write that stuff

[Riseabove]

think ill call you autumn's whisper
tell me something of a winter's love
i love the way you show your soul
i love the way we crash like leaves
blown together by october's breeze
you dont know what you mean to me
we play our games yet i see
there is so much love for you
still left in me.

dear autumn.

i am so thankful to have you in this life
here with me or someplace else
i love god for creating you
who else could tame me
so glad god gave me
you in this life
your smile is
the sunrise
you are
my sky.



I wrote this for my high school sweetie. I have known her since jr high. I miss her so much it hurts. She's visiting me in NY in exactly 31 days. :xmas:



Edited By Riseabove on 1101360383

[Nantuko Joe]

Viciously attacking the living
Asking unanswerable questions
Masking their true feeling
Preying on the weak and fool-hearted
Indiscriminately killing all who cross their paths
Returning the bodies lifelessly
Envying our mortal souls
Suffering throughout eternity alone

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Tearful eyes hide in the brain
Mourning the loss of a brilliant light
A light to bring joy to the darkest regions of sorrow
To rend chaos into order
To forge order into chaos
but the fire is waning
The forge has grown cold
And the tears flow deep in darkness

[blueseyes]

rose are red violets are blue umm..... lets get some fried chicken

[Riseabove]

Ill just make one up on the spot.

I call it, Hey Rise.



I paid Tmy so my gi's can be black.
It says it next to my name
Every time i enter the chat.
They see the name Rise
Everyone quickly steps back.
Knowing that i will own, every time.
My name is heavy on their minds.

That is why i only fight ####s.
####s dont know who i am.
I chew em like gum, because i can.
They tend to get stuck beneath my shoes.
I consume ####s like daddy with booze.
I step on your pride, i laugh, you cry.
Your tears make me feel happy inside.

This is what happens when you say "Hey Rise"

Merry Christmas to all my children :xmas:



Edited By Riseabove on 1101623462