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underlaie · 10-12-2004, 05:27 AM

nice poem girlNferno666

girlNferno666 · 10-12-2004, 01:32 PM

aww y thankies underaie ^_^ *huggles* see u around sfo ^_^

shy_gurL21 · 10-12-2004, 10:09 PM

i'm here sitting quietly
waiting for him to notice me
i'm falling in love with this guy
i want to approach him but i'm too shy
so i just ask myself with anticipation
what do i have to do to win his attention?
does he realize my presence?
is he bothered by my absence?
if i disappear will he even care?
does he miss me when i'm not there?
i find my happiness when he's around
every pain that i feel he relieves
i know in his eyes i'm just a face in the crowd
but i'm sure when everyone else leaves
i will be the only one to stay
and never let him go astray.

dominicankid098 · 10-12-2004, 10:52 PM

I really liked that poem shygurL. Very nice and emotional.

dragon_cloud · 10-13-2004, 12:09 AM

i like ur poem alot i think it tell alittle about u do it shy ^.*

shy_gurL21 · 10-13-2004, 09:47 AM

thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud.

Evil-Blanka · 10-13-2004, 09:56 AM

[quote

ost_uid0="shy_gurL21"]thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud.

[/quote]
who was that poem about lol

girlNferno666 · 10-13-2004, 10:09 AM

the man i see is not whole his heart is broken and his soul is numb
with lifes many truths does this come
he grew up in a broke home
all the yelling, fighting, and beatings is all he's ever know
a mothers tender touch her loving grace
he can't even recall her face
much less know a mothers role
when she let him go
for all his life she was a no show
the harsh realities r cold
in and out of his life many come and go
many will love him for simple reasons then leave
and those that stay usually go astray
yet he still searches and looks for that one girl that'll stay
who will love him till his dying days
to heal the hurt thats in his heart
to teach him the loving arts
and teach him something he's never known
how it's like to have a loving home

shy_gurL21 · 10-13-2004, 10:11 AM

[quote

ost_uid0="Evil-Blanka"][quote

ost_uid0="shy gurL21"]thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud.

[/quote]
who was that poem about lol[/quote]
hmm... someone.. lol.. my bf

rabbitalien · 10-13-2004, 10:56 PM

i like shy gurls poem more then girlnferno's (sry girlnferno) mayb cuz shy gurl ends her sentences with the same suffix as the previous sentence... girl nfernos is nice 2 but some sentences dunt connect. theyr both good ^.^

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10-12-2004, 05:27 AM	#181
underlaie Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 626 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	nice poem girlNferno666 __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v476/underlaie/un2.jpg[/img:sig_uid] [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v476/underlaie/underlaie_cool.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

10-12-2004, 01:32 PM	#182
girlNferno666 Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 346 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	aww y thankies underaie ^_^ huggles see u around sfo ^_^ __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img9.imgspot.com/u/04/280/07/girlnf.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

10-12-2004, 10:09 PM	#183
shy_gurL21 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Los Angeles, CA Posts: 712 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	i'm here sitting quietly waiting for him to notice me i'm falling in love with this guy i want to approach him but i'm too shy so i just ask myself with anticipation what do i have to do to win his attention? does he realize my presence? is he bothered by my absence? if i disappear will he even care? does he miss me when i'm not there? i find my happiness when he's around every pain that i feel he relieves i know in his eyes i'm just a face in the crowd but i'm sure when everyone else leaves i will be the only one to stay and never let him go astray. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/shy_gurL21/mybaby_sbanner.jpg[/img:sig_uid] [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/shy_gurL21/shygurlbanner.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

10-13-2004, 12:09 AM	#185
dragon_cloud Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: detroit!!!!!!!!!!!! Posts: 318 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	i like ur poem alot i think it tell alittle about u do it shy ^.* __________________ [quote:sig_uid]( .......0.0 ...... -.-"......Omnislash!!)[/quote:sig_uid] DRAGON CLOUD home (tmyapp is kool with me) [img:sig_uid]http://tinypic.com/5es7kl[/img:sig_uid]

10-12-2004, 10:52 PM	#184
dominicankid098 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Miami, FL Posts: 1,430 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	I really liked that poem shygurL. Very nice and emotional.

10-13-2004, 09:47 AM	#186
shy_gurL21 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Los Angeles, CA Posts: 712 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/shy_gurL21/mybaby_sbanner.jpg[/img:sig_uid] [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/shy_gurL21/shygurlbanner.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

10-13-2004, 09:56 AM	#187
Evil-Blanka Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,549 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="shy_gurL21"]thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. [/quote] who was that poem about lol __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://www.chez.com/futuramazone/autres_img13.gif[/img:sig_uid]

10-13-2004, 10:09 AM	#188
girlNferno666 Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 346 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	the man i see is not whole his heart is broken and his soul is numb with lifes many truths does this come he grew up in a broke home all the yelling, fighting, and beatings is all he's ever know a mothers tender touch her loving grace he can't even recall her face much less know a mothers role when she let him go for all his life she was a no show the harsh realities r cold in and out of his life many come and go many will love him for simple reasons then leave and those that stay usually go astray yet he still searches and looks for that one girl that'll stay who will love him till his dying days to heal the hurt thats in his heart to teach him the loving arts and teach him something he's never known how it's like to have a loving home __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img9.imgspot.com/u/04/280/07/girlnf.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

10-13-2004, 10:11 AM	#189
shy_gurL21 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Los Angeles, CA Posts: 712 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="Evil-Blanka"][quoteost_uid0="shy gurL21"]thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. [/quote] who was that poem about lol[/quote] hmm... someone.. lol.. my bf __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/shy_gurL21/mybaby_sbanner.jpg[/img:sig_uid] [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/shy_gurL21/shygurlbanner.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

10-13-2004, 10:56 PM	#190
rabbitalien Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,484 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	i like shy gurls poem more then girlnferno's (sry girlnferno) mayb cuz shy gurl ends her sentences with the same suffix as the previous sentence... girl nfernos is nice 2 but some sentences dunt connect. theyr both good ^.^ __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload8/money.jpg[/img:sig_uid] \|DeviantArt\|\|Neurotion\|