Poems - dorks poems what do u think :P

[dragon_cloud]

[color=# f0000]there all good......my head hurts from all the reading !!![/color]

[girlNferno666]

wow very powerful both ofuguys well done *is speechless*

[dragon_cloud]

[color=# f0000ost_uid1]i miss my happness:

some times it feel like its pain from the rain deep in side my head deep in side
i do so cry and that the rain is the tears i shed but then i look up at u and
all the storm with in me go away to rain anther day
that the day i wish that cause last the most i no it cant come true i no i miss u
and the rain comes back
deep in side i have that hope that it will go away again but this time never
come back but when i see ur reflection
in the rain i no that its going to shine just the same
i wait in side my house looking out
wondering when u come once again
to use that smile once more its all the more make me explode from waitin g
to see that glow in ur eyes makes the stars twinkle and the moon shine
as i wait 4 ur return i die alittle deep in side lusting 4 more ofur presents
as my heart go away deep in darkness not even trusting its shadow
but only ur light shining shows the way that saves me from my sorrow

i wrote that when i was talking to girlnferno[/colorost_uid1]



Edited By dragon_cloud on 1093483643

[blanka09]

[quoteost_uid0="girlNferno666"]wow very powerful both ofuguys well done *is speechless*[/quote]
If only.. if only you knew.. :biggrin:

[Ludacris]

man... I'd post my poems.....but all in french........and I don't like sharing my feelings.........cuz all my poems are about me or the people surrounding me...........

[blanka09]

Put it this way.. A poem is the easiest way of actually posting what you feel.. without letting others know how you feel.. :biggrin: .. I'm not one to post how I feel for the whole world to see.. and besides, I'd enjoy it more if 2 or 3 ppl know how I truely feel

but with a poem.. they see the mixture of words and the rhyming.. but never actually get a good peak at ur soul :biggrin: .. only a gifted few can actually do that.



Edited By blanka09 on 1093484417

[Ludacris]

yah but still..........my poems are good but easy to get, I mean people can find out everything about me..........and I don,t want that lol......... I mean some things are really deep............even for me

[girlNferno666]

aww silly it's what u feel there should be no shame in that so what if people understand i bet you'd be surprise how many people actually can relate to u but then you'll never know till u post well heres a poem for u guys about life


where this road leads no one knows
continuous like the moon cycles and tides
it'll never end till life dies
with it's crimsion sun rise
and golden skies
of tomorrows
walking this lonely road
with many of lifes sorrows
one feet in front of the other
they say
one step at a time each day
live for the moment before it pass
cheerish it for it won't last
nights come to soon
days end to fast
before u know it
it'll be consider the past
when tomorrow comes
and today is done
so let the road take u where it may
lifes to short to chart out everything along the way
so live it day by day

[dragon_cloud]

[color=# f0000]that lovely!!!!.....(wait 4 it).....silly

tears of the heart...i no ur here:

i always no ur here in my heart but
at the same time im wishing 4 some
thing i can not have.. when i do i feel the
pain and it makes me want to die just so i can
feel again but always know that i know your there
even if it is or is not for me...your my happness and my sadness cause when your here you give me a smile
but at the same time you give me my tears ...
when u say good bye or when u say i love anther and
its not ur mother but were friends and at lest we are happy
...yes its ture but it dont hurt to want more
or does it.....i....think i know[/color]



Edited By dragon_cloud on 1093514583

[girlNferno666]

very lovely as usual dragon well done smiles* well heres a poem i wrote for joejoe and his gf. many happy wishes for u guys may u guys always be blessed with many happy moments together forever.

your lips like roses
who's petals so soft
my fingers can't help but caress
your eyes like a mirror that reflects my soul
thats why i love you and can't let go
your skin so soft and fair
i can't help but want to touch when your near
your smile that you give so free
melts my hearts and makes it hard to breath
the kindness of your heart
sets u apart
from all the rest
you're the reason for that which beats in my chest