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SBYRD5 · 02-08-2003, 02:50 PM

HOLY WAR...Razz you know that time is close...very well said...

I hope I can see my father again that day...it doesn't matter what side he's on....

EYO · 02-08-2003, 06:08 PM

man all those poems where deep.......now ma turn

*AHEM*

"paper"

first you get a paper
any kind of paper
but i prefer a dried swiffer

"how to get cash"

now you put da ashes
the ones they call golden scratches
on the paper to make some cashes ($$ching$$)

"busted"

when you get caught youl get some lashes
for those ashes
dat you sold for your cashes ($$ching$$)

"ways not to pay"

it aint a big deal
cause it gave you some meal
but wen you get da bill run for the hill (peace)
cause you know dey will kill

*claps all around him*

if ya think dis about drugs or sumtin, you may be right
but the main thing about this says is dont do drugs.....i think

Sportschick155 · 02-08-2003, 06:57 PM

Lmfao, i just suck at poetry, give me a few years to write a decently good one

darkmasterX · 02-08-2003, 07:13 PM

i thought it would never end there is no one to tend so
i live the bowles of the earth so i am in all was in search
for someone to turn to for help since i think
i might go insane i can not explain what it is like
i try to put on my flight but it is to tight there is nothing in sight
but wait i see the light i try to touch try to cluch it
but it keet moving it left me with out a clue then out of the blue
i see a wanderer moving towards me i ran it ran i hope it had a plan
then it stop then it said then end of forever is now and it ended.....

this one is phat

WhiteTigerClaw · 02-08-2003, 07:22 PM

i got one...it's called you suck

You Suck...
You Suck Little Ducks..
After You Suck Little Ducks..
You Want To You Know What To Little Ducks...
Now Forget This Little Poem...
Before I Do To You Know What In The Butt

:laughlong:

Sportschick155 · 02-08-2003, 07:27 PM

did u kno that poems, DONT NEED TO RHYME, so in ur case white tiger, dont ryhme lol

EYO · 02-08-2003, 07:55 PM

*AHEM*
"a drug addicts pain"

i use to be a alcholic
i use to be narcotic
now i just use dem

for pleasure and pain
which cause great amount of strain...

wen ever i see them, it drives me crazy
for these moments always causes me to go frenzy

da only thing i see is now crazy bunnies
and for these bunnies had great amout of energy

ok......this poem talk about "bbbaaaddd" drugs
never use them cause they cause u pain and strain, sometimes pleasure

darkmasterX · 02-08-2003, 08:05 PM

you need to finsh it had a good start

EYO · 02-08-2003, 08:24 PM

another one of my great poems.....

*AHEM*

"wen ever i get high"

wen i get high
things go die
for i have no controls
over my mind
this crazy momemts
makes me feel bad
cause i have no dad

drugs cause u to do bad stuff

mooo1 · 02-08-2003, 08:34 PM

alright,let me show you how it's done.
Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise!
yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem.

Cow
There once was a cow from Main,
Who ate almost half of Spain.
He devoured the stores
and munched on the floors
And finally flew back in the rain.

well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried.

Edited By mooo1 on Feb. 08 2003 at 23:34

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02-08-2003, 06:08 PM	#12
EYO Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: ma place Posts: 363 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	man all those poems where deep.......now ma turn AHEM "paper" first you get a paper any kind of paper but i prefer a dried swiffer "how to get cash" now you put da ashes the ones they call golden scratches on the paper to make some cashes ($$ching$$) "busted" when you get caught youl get some lashes for those ashes dat you sold for your cashes ($$ching$$) "ways not to pay" it aint a big deal cause it gave you some meal but wen you get da bill run for the hill (peace) cause you know dey will kill claps all around him if ya think dis about drugs or sumtin, you may be right but the main thing about this says is dont do drugs.....i think __________________ http://www.angelfire.com/anime5/eyo65/gfx-eyo2.gif click on the banner to join HellShadowX clan

02-08-2003, 06:57 PM	#13
Sportschick155 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Winnipeg Posts: 2,783 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Lmfao, i just suck at poetry, give me a few years to write a decently good one __________________ whoever said the struggle would stop today, alota niggas are dead or locked away, teenage women growing up with aids, that's the life when you're living in the ghetto

02-08-2003, 07:13 PM	#14
darkmasterX Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 416 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	i thought it would never end there is no one to tend so i live the bowles of the earth so i am in all was in search for someone to turn to for help since i think i might go insane i can not explain what it is like i try to put on my flight but it is to tight there is nothing in sight but wait i see the light i try to touch try to cluch it but it keet moving it left me with out a clue then out of the blue i see a wanderer moving towards me i ran it ran i hope it had a plan then it stop then it said then end of forever is now and it ended..... this one is phat __________________ eye for an eye will make the whole world go blind

02-08-2003, 07:22 PM	#15
WhiteTigerClaw Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 579 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	i got one...it's called you suck You Suck... You Suck Little Ducks.. After You Suck Little Ducks.. You Want To You Know What To Little Ducks... Now Forget This Little Poem... Before I Do To You Know What In The Butt :laughlong: __________________ http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfold...load5/ken2.jpg If you don't know how to play, don't play at all.

02-08-2003, 02:50 PM	#11
SBYRD5 Banned Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: North Carolina Posts: 6,549 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	HOLY WAR...Razz you know that time is close...very well said... I hope I can see my father again that day...it doesn't matter what side he's on....

02-08-2003, 07:27 PM	#16
Sportschick155 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Winnipeg Posts: 2,783 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	did u kno that poems, DONT NEED TO RHYME, so in ur case white tiger, dont ryhme lol __________________ whoever said the struggle would stop today, alota niggas are dead or locked away, teenage women growing up with aids, that's the life when you're living in the ghetto

02-08-2003, 07:55 PM	#17
EYO Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: ma place Posts: 363 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	AHEM "a drug addicts pain" i use to be a alcholic i use to be narcotic now i just use dem for pleasure and pain which cause great amount of strain... wen ever i see them, it drives me crazy for these moments always causes me to go frenzy da only thing i see is now crazy bunnies and for these bunnies had great amout of energy ok......this poem talk about "bbbaaaddd" drugs never use them cause they cause u pain and strain, sometimes pleasure __________________ http://www.angelfire.com/anime5/eyo65/gfx-eyo2.gif click on the banner to join HellShadowX clan

02-08-2003, 08:05 PM	#18
darkmasterX Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 416 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	you need to finsh it had a good start __________________ eye for an eye will make the whole world go blind

02-08-2003, 08:24 PM	#19
EYO Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: ma place Posts: 363 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	another one of my great poems..... AHEM "wen ever i get high" wen i get high things go die for i have no controls over my mind this crazy momemts makes me feel bad cause i have no dad drugs cause u to do bad stuff __________________ http://www.angelfire.com/anime5/eyo65/gfx-eyo2.gif click on the banner to join HellShadowX clan

02-08-2003, 08:34 PM	#20
mooo1 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 457 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	alright,let me show you how it's done. Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise! yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem. Cow There once was a cow from Main, Who ate almost half of Spain. He devoured the stores and munched on the floors And finally flew back in the rain. well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried. Edited By mooo1 on Feb. 08 2003 at 23:34 __________________ Sometimes the biggest obstacle can be the smallest thing.