ok here is one have

There are so many things can say
To make you feel the same way
Girl you are like a pearl so beautiful
But I want to know will you go wit me
Make me feel like the boy that I was sapusta to be
Girl I can be the key to set your soul free
You may think I am playing but if you choose me
You will see what the key can open for you

If you don't have a clue
A boy like me came out of the blue
And wanted to talk to you
Cuz I like you since I saw you
You had this thing that I could not explain
It nearly drove me insane
That was it that little thing
That made you appealing to my feeling

'Twas pretty good . . .
Here's one of mine.

<span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Holy War</span></span>

Angels descend from the heavens,
And Demons from the ground.
The fight will soon begin,
For the humans chained and bound.
They stand there ready and willing.
All standing their grounds.
The battle will be everywhere,
The Supernatural has no bounds.

A single sound of the shofar,
Has just begun the war.
The Angels with their righteous cry,
And the Demons with their roar.
The sounds of clashing blades,
Echo as the Light,
And the Darkness battle,
For eternity

i can free style now its time to show my poetic skillz...lol


roses are red
violets are blue
ehhh forget it i aint no dam poet

[quote:post_uid0="Razz"]'Twas pretty good . . .
Here's one of mine.

<span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Holy War</span></span>

Angels descend from the heavens,
And Demons from the ground.
The fight will soon begin,
For the humans chained and bound.
They stand there ready and willing.
All standing their grounds.
The battle will be everywhere,
The Supernatural has no bounds.

A single sound of the shofar,
Has just begun the war.
The Angels with their righteous cry,
And the Demons with their roar.
The sounds of clashing blades,
Echo as the Light,
And the Darkness battle,
For eternity

down the alleys and down the streets.
territory for the gangs to keep.
watch what u say, watch what u do.
or sum1 will bust a cap in ur ass. :biggrin:

cops in full force, fat as they may be.
always at dunken doughnuts with a trainee.
the black man cant drive down the streets.
hell, they already commited a crime: being black with a benz for keeps. :biggrin:
whites in the suburbs, blacks in the slums.
at least the hughleys r lucky, as well as the klumps.

U.S at war. bush is insane. :biggrin:
saddam hussein? he's so damn insane.

i think thats good.

here is a good one i have

Love

What is it to you
is it when i say i love you
or is it when they make it through
is it when i kick the ill will game to you
to make you feel the same
well i don't know so i ask you
what does it take to make you my L-O-V-E
so is when they understand your view
if only you knew what i could do for you
then you know i why i am misunderstood
is cuz my love is true cuz i am one young of
poeple who are mature to understand
what love is....




this was what i did when i was in love wiht this girl even though i am 13

NATURE BEYOND THE THICKNEES OF WATER

I set where I am in a calm state of mind,
No fears,no failures that bond me,
Just the sounds of voices that echo truth,
A truth that demands reason,
Reason that has to be answered,

I seat on this rock...as though I'm on top of the world,
My mind is clear I can see my victories,and learned battles,
My soul is an eruption in a small container,
The deepness of the sounds around me come so clearly,
Dap...Dap... I can hear the rain..

The same touch and feel I can imatate now is my peaceful state of mind,Nothing can break it not cliques,Prejudice ignorance doesn't move me from my rock,I remain firm and calm....


I don't feel like writing any more right now.

Oooh, Sbyrd, pretty funky!

Oh, and thank you kindly, Blossom!
I don't have any more poems, but I do have a few songs. Here's one.

<span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Crash and Burn</span></span>

Verse 1
Everything I

[b:post_uid6]ALONE OUTSIDE[/b:post_uid6]


Alone Outside

Through childhood...one wants to belong,
To feel the inbracement of peers,
Through any means...even join cliques,
Yet inside our souls are dreary,

My soul demands to have it's own unique taste,
Yet we tend to deny from giving our soul....food,
We poison them...in being followers in which we disbelieve,
I'm one of GOD's SONS...in what I believe..

I'm a bouncer in the tides of my homeland,
Supposed as an ignorant follower without direction,
I remain silent even though I scream tears inside,
Which is the direction of the tide?
Is it really my choice to fight the tide...

My parents...never gave me direction,
Yet I'm alone in ideas of this world of war,and production,
I'm outside writing my soul to paper..soon it will reach other souls,
Those to far to be reached by my oral words...maybe my writing can reach them...

Perhaps,...yet will they respond in agreeing or in uncomprehending manner.....

Look at my banner it shows my rage,
And hate,and even my will to keep my pride,
Now..I see pride as ignorance,
To be pride full you will only lose,

Enlightment is a long road to walk,
Yet I come closer to it by each passing day,
The road to Enlightment is a road that must be traveled alone,
So I'm outside in this world of culture,and machines,

And I realize everyone walking past me is going there own direction,

It's time I walked mine,

I won't shame my last name in that direction either,
I will have the dreams of my father..my mental sibling,and myself to insure now,

When my father died he was angry..angry because he didn't have the strenght to control his life.
He looked at me his only son to have success were he had fallen weak,and defeated.
When he had seen me fail he wanted me to have perfect success with my goals.....

From what I was taught to believe my father won't join me in me in Thugz Mansion.
No matter how I live my life from this day onward it will be to my best,

When I die..if he is judged to be with me after that death..then he will see that his son was a boy,and became a true man.
Thats what I'm striving for....If we can't be together then he will look above and see a mans tears crying for him to ease the pain of his heart....and him alone...must be the way the fates played our cards...

Because some how...I'm going to make right of my life...

and....I'm still outside...walking my journey...accept this time I'm going somewhere....

yall is mad deep feel yall