Your custom character / the story - The story begins

[SBYRD5]

[ooc]SSJKarma=Alright, Karma your right your character did teleport away,but when I posted Karma moving at the speed of light I kinda meant he teleported.(I should've been more clear).

SolidSnake=When I was reading your post I found out that Choas Dragon has a father named Delrith Dragon(King of Dragons).When I read the post about Angelwings fighting Choas I thought it would be cool to include his father.

TJ5=Have you started another story?

Angelwings=Oh, I draw alot it's not the best picture,but we can understand who is in the picture,and the emotions in the picture so it's fine.(Your character is drawn the best)

I suppose I will do some editting now. [ooc]
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EDIT= Choas Takes Phoenix Prisoner
(Sorry for missing with your story Angelwings)
Phoenix's Capture/Chase To Lord Khan's Ship

KHCloud=How do we reach the spaceship,and find solidsnake?

*Everyone is silent for a moment*

Logan=We could follow the dragons to the spaceship,but how would we ever get them from attempting to kill us.

*Logan reaches into his pocket,and pulls out a lighter,and some C4*

Logan=Look we have to have a divergen...Phoenix you seem to be the strongest here.

Phoenix=Me

Logan=Yes YOU! You seem to be the only one of us that can stand up to the attack of those dragons.

Phoenix=I might can defeat Choas,but Delrith....he seems so powerful.

KH,Chuck= Thats true.

Logan=I don't need you to fight the dragons just distract them,and surive in the mean time we will us the C4 packets.We have to aim a direct attack at both of them.For it to count.

Chuck=Sounds dangerous,but it sounds like a winning plan.

KH=Hmmm How close do we have to be to use the C4.

Logan=We are going to send Phoenix in first with explosives to distract the dragons then we toss the C4 out of the hanger for a surpise attack.

KH=So we have to fly above them?

Chuck=Hmm I think this is to dangerous for phoenix maybe a I should do this.

Phoenix=I can handle anything mortal.I'll be your distraction,but be sure not to get spotted.

Chuck=I'll fly this ship so we can move in stealth.

KH=This is my ship Chuck!!

*Chuck and KHCloud have a staring contest,but is interupted when Logan speaks*

Logan=I'm flying this mission...sit down,and shut...upz.

KH/Chuck=Whatever..

*So the gang of fighters are informing each other on the set up of the attack when something makes the "The Whale"(The space ship) shake villiantly*

KHCloud=What the hell was that!!

Phoenix=It must be the dragons...

Meanwhile(outside the ship)

Delrith=You are my son I know you can tackle harder than that.

Choas=ARRRGGGgggHhhhh

*Choas Dragon tackles the "The Whale"(The space ship) again*

Choas=Phoenix...OH PHOENIX...COME OUT AND PLAY!

Delrith=I'm returning to the spaceship to see what torture has befallen this SolidSnake fellow.

Choas=Where is LiquidSnake?

Delrith=LiquidSnake is part of SolidSnake's torture program.

Choas=Thats rich being beaten to near death by your stronger self...that will never happen to me Choas Son Of Lord Of Dragons.

Delrith=Thats right.I'm leaving defeat those rebels,and make me proud.

Choas=As you wish father.

*Delrith flys away from the location of Choas*

Choas=Of course I'll defeat them,but I want to make this defeat hurt...HAAAA...YOU HEAR ME PHOENIX!!!!

Meanwhile(inside the spacship)

?? ?? ??=[echo]YOU HERE ME PHOENIX....

Chuck=What was that?

Phoenix=It's.....It's Choas.

*Phoenix begins to tighten her fist and starts to walk towards the air hanger door*

Logan=Your going to distract him right?

Phoenix=No...I'm going to defeat him...

Everyone(Besides Phoenix= :shocked:

*Phoenix flys out the space ship to confront the vile dragon*

Phoenix=Choas!!! It ends here!

Choas=Bring it on Phoenix!

*Both begin to power up,and seem evenly matched...is this part of the plan*

Phoenix="Cry Of The Phoenix"

*Phoenix transforms into a large fire bird and fly's toward Choas*

Choas="Physco Chrusher Beam Assult"

*Choas begins to shot beams of energy from his eyes,and mouth that seem to cover the whole sky with a light show*

Choas=You can't surive this attack no one has.

Phoenix=We'll see....

*Everything turns blinding white*

Meanwhile(Inside the ship)

KHCloud=This is our chance to fly above the battle.

Chuck=Yea, Logan hurry up.

*Logan is staring at the battle betweem Phoenix,and Choas with aww*

Logan=Amazing how can a girl move so fast,and with so much force.

KHCloud=First she wasn't a normal girl to begin with secound there is a spirit in her body controling her called the "Phoenix."

Logan=I know all that KH stop trying to be a smart ass I'm just inpressed with that movement.

Chuck=Nah, you just think Phoenix is hot.

Logan=Alright, I'll fly this damn thing above the battle get the C4 ready.

KH/Chuck=Right!
Meanwhile(outside the ship)

Phoenix=*Weezing* That wasn't that bad for something with such bad hygene.

Choas=My breath isn't....HEY!!!.

Phoenix=Take this..(Throws some C4 at Choas)

Choas=Ahh what the..

*Choas evades the attack and counters so fast Phoenix could not detect his movements*

Choas="Choas Distroyer!!!!!!!"

*A beam flashes from the chest of the dragon,and aims head on for phoenix*

Phoenix=Uh Oh....ARGGGhhh.....

*Phoenix is hit by the blast and now APPEARS unconiscious,and is now falling downward*

Choas=I win...HAAHAA again.

*Choas swoops down and catches Phoenix*

Choas=I'm going to take you back with your friends...Hey wait a minute... :shocked: where are those rebels.

*Choas looks around,but fails to see the ship above his head*

Choas=Oh well I'll just bring back Phoenix,and show her to dad...then he'll tell me the coolest way to kill her..MHAAAAA

*Choas begins to fly away*

Phoenix=(Thinking=This better work...oh I better us telepathy to tell the gang I'm still alive.)

Meanwhile(Inside the ship)

Logan=Why didn't you launch out the C4?

KHCloud=Logan he had Phoenix captured if the explosives got him it would've gotten her too.

Chuck=Yea....

Logan=Well it doesn't matter if you had dropped the C4 down on Choas she's died anyway..

Chuck/KH= ???

*Inside everyone's mind they all hear a small voice*

?? ?? ??=Oh really you think I would die so easyily Logan?

Logan=dubya tee eff!

Chuck=Did you hear that KH.

KH=I heard it,and I don't like ghost.

?? ?? ??=It's me phoenix listen I'm still alive I'm using telepathy to contact you right.

Logan=Hmm telepathy.

Phoenix=Follow Choas and me to Lord Khan's space ship guys...I'm losing my connection...HURRY...*Connection broken*

Chuck=Phoenix!

Logan=We better hurry.

KH=Indeed.
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To be continued