Hey custom character posters the story begins fill ur character in with the story any time u can chose good or evil but u cannot just simply kill someone off u must first consult the person who made the character and then see if they choose to be killed off - This is like an anime so some characters die.

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Narrator -
In the ruins of a destroyed south city stands a 21 year old man with an emmense power and a strong will to avenge the inhabitants of his city.


TJ - * powers up * I swear to you my friends family and people of south city I will avenge you by destroying the person or people who did this !


Narrator - TJ remembers the day clearly this is what happened long ago on that fateful day -

Man A - Who is that ?!

Woman B - Oh my god its one of the ......... * silenced *

Man B - OH my god He just killed her * runs * *then hit with a massive beam destroying 10 buildings *

Man A - RUn for your lives ! Try to save the children !

?.?.? - Leaving so soon ? * grabs man A and kills him instantly *

- At TJ's house - age 13

* loud battle sounds are erupting from the city as TJ is preparing to run from the city, screams echo in the night of the massacure upon south city *

TJ - * grabs short sword from closet and backpack with capsules in it, and runs for the door *

* door slams down *
Evil soldier A - Well lookie here its a little brat

Evil soldier B - Lets destroy him !

TJ - * pulls out sword * Get away from me stay back !

Evil solider b - DIE * rushes TJ *

TJ - you first * stabs him in chest unknowingly *

Evil soldier A - *powers up a beam * prepare to die foolish brat !

Unknown voice - Eat lead ! * shoots soldier in head *

TJ - Ahhhhhhh what the hell ?!

Unkown voice - Its ok TJ its me ricky !

TJ - ok lets get out of here !

Ricky - wait where are your parents ?

TJ - They went outside to escape, they thought I already got away :(

Ricky - Lets go !

Narrator - As TJ and ricky leave they see TJ's parents blasted.

TJ/ricky - Noooooooooooooooo !

TJ - * gets angry *

Ricky - * feels a strong power from tj * TJ r u ok ? I didnt know you could use energy !

TJ - *runs towards the soldier who blasted his parents and is knocked away *

?.?.? - I am no ordinary soldier kid I am the commander of Pre...

ricky - * starts shooting like mad at ?.?.? *

?.?.? - You dare face Wal....

ricky - * shoots him again *

?.?.? - * dissapears and then reapears behind ricky *

TJ - Ricky behind you !

?.?.? - *Grabs ricky by the neck and engulfs him in energy *

TJ - * runs up to ?.?.? and punches like mad but not harming him *

?.?.? - * smacks TJ away and finishes ricky off *

Ricky - TJ go get out..... * falls to ground lifeless *

TJ - * runs out of city gates * * sniff * my family and the whole city was destroyed ......... * sniff * This isnt fair... Why did I live ?

Narrator - as TJ walks down the path he comes to a military base called <^> .

TJ - *knocks on door*

Soldier A - * answers door * who are you kid ?

TJ - * i escaped from south city it is now destroyed *

Soldier A - Oh no......... * doesnt look like he cares * come inside.

TJ - * walks inside and goes to elevator *

Soldier a - come in the elevator .

narrator - As TJ goes up and up in the elevator he stops on a floor that says "presidential area"

TJ - what is this ?

Soldier - This is where president syphan is.

TJ - oh kewl I get to meet the president.

* door opens *

Soldier - * salutes * MR president This is a boy from south city claimed to be the last survivor.

President - Well Your a lucky boy to have made it out of that massacure .

TJ - thank you sir.

President - can u describe what the killer looked like ?

Tj - Long white hair, tan, eyepatch,

President - Oh ok I belive we can help you. * snickers *
Go to space colony zero and train ! then come back and join my army !

TJ - It would be a honor sir.

narrator - soldiers escort TJ to the launch area

Soldier - Ok your going to space colony zero some ppl are already there and are waiting for more fighters.

TJ - I cant fight.... with energy ..........

Soldier - U will learn how.

* TJ walks into launch pod and makes his way to space colony zero *

---- Present TJ age 21

TJ - Alright chuck lets go we have some things to take care of now.

Chuck - OK Cuz !

* they both walk down the path out of south city * And dissapear from sight *
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Ok add ur characters to the story u can either be evil or good or neutral. GOod luck with the story ppl

on the planet gagno, aroshi fills his canteen while his master takes a nap. it's been 13 years since aroshi first met his master, wei lee. aroshi was on a refugee ship when he had first met wei in a commercial space port

to be continued............

When TJ did this is <^> he was talking shield the military group my character was in.
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KHCloud enters the story

*The story begins when KHCloud is in a bar drinking a some fine wine when one of his military superiors enter the bar looking for him.*

G.Srewan=Soldier where are you?

KHCloud=(Thinking=I can't even have time to myself just to have a brew.)Yo sarge I'm over here.

*The sarge walks over,and grabs KH by the neck collar.*

G.Srewan=You were to report back to base at 1300 hours soldier it's 1500 hours answer?

KHCloud=First let go of my shirt.

*The sarge let's go off KH's shirt*

KHCloud=I've put in some overtime lately I need some off time.

G.Srewan=Are you quiting Shield soldier?

KHCloud=I don't know what I'm going to do,but I'm going to come back to base in a few,and weigh my options..

G.Srewan=No your going back now!!!!

*The sarge picks up KH,but KH flips the sarge against a wall,and whispers something in his ear.After hearing this the sarge runs in terror*

Bartender=What did you say this time KH.

KHCloud=The usual.

Bartender=Oh I'm surprised he didn't wet himself.

KHCloud=Yea....listen he was right I'm headed back to base.

*KHCloud takes out an golden coin and flips it at the bartender,and leaves*

*Bartender catches the coin*

Bartender=Later KH.

hey i am not in

Good story's guys keep it up !
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Narrator - As KHcloud is walking out of the bar -

* bam ! the door bursts open and 2 guys stand at the door *

Bartender - ....... Who is that...... Oh its just TJ and chuck.

TJ - Walks past KHcloud and gives him a quick glance raising his head in a hello motion * sits down * Hey Bar guy I want a coke .

Chuck - ANd gimme a bud !

TJ - * smacks chuck upside the head * ur not 21 u idiot....

Chuck - OK then I want a glass of milk, ON THE ROCKS ! ( lol )

TJ - *smacks chuck upside the head again * dummy.....

Chuck - Ok gimme a coke dude !

* TJ and chuck drink thier glasses *

TJ - Ok Im heading back to <^> ( shield ) u comin chuck ?

Chuck - Naw Im gonna check out the town a bit.

TJ - Alright, Dont go gettin into fights with those guys again ok ?

Chuck - Ok Cuz !

TJ - * TJ walks out of bar and heads back to shield *

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Ok pplz what will happen next ?

[quote:post_uid0="ajtimbs"]hey i am not in[/quote]
make ur own damn part.

now for mines
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sarge: they came this way. hurry
snake: logan, c'mon.
logan: u wanna carry this missile launcher?

*snake and logan are running to the heliport, trying to stop a chopper*

snake: lets go to that vent.

*snake shoots it open*

snake: hand over the launcher.
logan: here. you carry it.

*they both crawl in and make it to the heliport that overlooks the amazon.*

snake: goodbye blofield.

*snake fires. a direct hit.*

logan: yes.

*gaurds come up from behind and open fire. they pump bullets into logans back*

logan: aaaaahhhhh. aaaahhhhhhhrrrrrrgggggg.

*he stumbles and fall from the heliport*

snake: logan. LOGAAAN!!
gaurd: get him.

*snake quickly runs to the other side of the heliport and jumps down into a river. he swims out and onto land, hiding in the jungle*

sarge :c'mon, i want a search team down there. he stole the plans for the boss's space station and destroyed the clone labortory. he must be killed.

*down in the jungle snake looks at his map*

snake: ok, i have to make it to borba. just head a mile and a half north and i meet up with colonel there.

snake begins the hike.............

Good story's good story's - Which side are u on snake president's ? Ur own group ? Or just a rebel ? just wondering. I read ur story its good
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Narrator - TJ finally makes it to <^> base .

TJ - * uses fingerprint access code on door and walks in *

President syphan - Hello TJ I have been awaiting your arrival.

TJ - * salutes * Hello sir.

President - Did you find out anything on the destruction of south city ?

TJ - * shakes head * No..... I didnt. :(

President - Im sorry TJ I know it has been a hard time for you, but as I promised I will help you find out who did this !

TJ - THank you sir.

Narrator - Wallzer walks in looking grumpy as usual

Wallzer - President syphan I need to talk to you.

President - About what wallzer ?

Wallzer - * gives the president a evil glare * I need to talk to you sir.

President - oh I know what ur talking about. Be right back TJ, oh and feel free to go to the VIP dining area until I come back.

TJ - ok sir * salutes *

Narrator - Wallzer and the president walk away.

TJ - * walks behind the president and wallzer on the way to the dining area *

Wallzer - * whispers * President is he following us ?

President - * wispers * No hes going to the dining area.
* wallzer and president go into the presidents room *

TJ - hmmm I wonder what wallzer wanted ...... * stands by the door for a while *
narrator - TJ hears the conversation because wallzer is talking loudly ....

TJ - Why is wallzer yelling at the president ?!

Wallzer from inside room - Those dragon balls heh are important we cannot let them fall into any rebel hands.

President syphan - Yes wallzer they give supreme power !

Wallzer - Do u have the plan ready ?

President - yes I do. heh heh heh

Wallzer - ok thats all sir goodbye

TJ - *runs to the dining area and watches wallzer walk out of the room * Dragon balls ? But I thought when the guardians died they were lost forever ?! Could there be a new guardian ?

Narrator - The presidents 2 soldiers rocko and winston walk in with a prisoner *

Rocko - We caught the rebel leader wolfgang !

Winston - We are gonna get a big raise from syphan today ! HA HA HA HA !

TJ - So hes the rebel leader ? * looks at wolfgang *

Wolfgang - * eyes glow a eerie green * Get away from me you presidential scum ! Your evil will be stopped !

TJ - Evil ?! your the ones who attacked us !

Winston - * puts a chip on wolfgangs neck and he goes unconcience * DOnt mind him we heard he is pshycotic he attacked us with a bloody scythe !

TJ - He must be dangerous, what does the president plan to do with him ?

Rocko - Put him in the basement jail or have him executed in the dark pit.

TJ - Dark pit ?!

Winston - Its a deep pit filled with acidic liquid nothing can survive it not even a super human.........not a sayain or anything once ur in ur not coming back.

TJ - Damn.... * looks at wolfgang *That sounds like a harsh death.......

Rocko - No they die quite fast no suffering once they are in they either disentigrate or just lay in there forever........

TJ - Well tell the president I strongly disapprove of the exicution. cya later guys * goes to the dining kitchen to get food.

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:plain: lol kewl huh ? next person up.

*Well I'm going to already be in the VIP dinning room because I'm an inportant soldier you saw how I had my sarge in check. :laughlong: *
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TJ Enters The Dinning Room

*KHCloud seeing TJ stands up from his table and walks over to TJ*

KHCloud=So TJ where's your sidekick Chuck?

TJ=He wanted to wonder around town,and check things out.

KHCloud=Hard to believe you and I both lost our families to the group of people.

TJ=......

KHCloud=Sorry man.Look try some of this.

*KHCloud picks up a plate of Doubled Eggs*

TJ=No thanks they don't agree with me.

KHCloud=Suit yourself,but listen I'm going to bust this guy out.

TJ=Who don't you know I could report you.

*KHCloud grabs TJ and takes him to the bathroom.Inside the bathroom the two soldiers begin to talk.*

KHCloud=There is an innocent man that has been framed.

TJ=What's his name.

KHCloud=Wolfgang.

TJ= :shocked: (Thinking=I was shocked to hear that from KHCloud I just meet wolfgang something fishy is going on here.)

KHCloud=So I'm going to bust him .....

*The bathroom door opens,and Rocko and Winston walk in*

Winston=You two are enjoying your self right?

KHCloud=Sure get some btter wine next time.

Rocko=We will...phewwww.

*Umm remember we are in the bathroom what do people do in there...take a wild guess*

Winston=*Rising hands*Umm TJ I want you to come by my office later.

TJ=For what?

Winston=For some briefing thats all.

TJ=Very well.

Rocko=*Rising Hands* I want you to come to the prision halls with me KH.

KHCloud=Alright.

Rocko&Winston=Enjoy the rest off your day.

*Both leave*

KHCloud=TJ something is going down.We better be ready for anything.

TJ=.....(Thinking=He might be right....)
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to be continued

Good story sbyrd
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Narrator - After TJ and KHcloud talk TJ thinks about it more clearly

TJ's room night time -


TJ- hmmmm that wolfgang guy called me evil.... Why ? I guess KHcloud was telling the truth but I cant help him bust wolfgang out of jail... The way wolfgang looked at me was..... just freaky........ KH did lose his family in the massacure too but....... The president is helping me find out who did it.... I will just watch KH's back for now.

narrator - Chuck walks in scared :shocked:

Chuck - TJ TJ TJ !

TJ - What man dubya tee eff ?

chuck I was in the prison cell area and there was this guy he was in the cell doing some magic ##### ahhhh freaky man its just freaking scary !

TJ - Magic ##### ?! ( lol )

Chuck - U know what I mean ! Well he made this dark orb form and he was watching ppl in it.... I saw the president in his orb......

TJ - chuck, just stay away from the prison basement tonight....

Chuck - Why ?

TJ - Just listen to me.....

Chuck - Ok cuz..... I guess I can listen to u for 1ce ( lol )

TJ - Chuck im serious !

Chuck - ok cuzzin im sorry . im going to my room cya tomorrow.

TJ - cya chuck.

Narrator - intercom in tj's room sounds -

Winston - TJ I TOLD U TO COME TO MY OFFICE 10 min AGO COME ON !

TJ - ok man im comin I had to change !

Winston - Just hurry up.

narrator - TJ walks to the office of winston .

Winston - Hello TJ

TJ - Hey why do u want me here this late ?

Winston - THe president Wants u to go check out something tomorrow.

TJ - TOmorrow ? I cant tomorrow !

Winston - Well why the F___ not TJ

TJ - never mind I will go.. so what is it ?

Winston - There was a sighting of a mysterious figure running through the jungle earlier today, we belive he is one of the rebels, I want u to check if they have a base set up there. Some of the presidential soldiers will go with you.

TJ - Alright I will go tomorrow at 6:00 in the morning

Winston - Good luck your one of the best we have !

Narrator - TJ walks out of room and goes to the elevator.
winstons intercom sounds and he talks to someone.

Mysterious voice - IS he going on the mission ?

Winston - Yes sir.

Mysterious voice - Good. lets hope nothing happens to him out there heh heh heh.

winston - Yes lets hope that. ha ha ha !

narrator - TJ secretly sneaks into the basement prison on the elevator.

TJ - I want to go talk to this wolfgang guy he might know something about the south city incident .

* elevator stops on basement prison level *

Rocko - Who is that ?!

TJ - Just me . I want to talk to this wolfgang guy.

Rocko - ok u scared me man I thought u were wolfgang.

TJ - what ?

Rocko - I let him out to play cards with me and he kinda did some wierd stuff, showing off some dark powers.....

TJ - Dark powers ?

Rocko - Yea, but our cells are energy proof no powers can go through them heh.

TJ - oh ok lemme talk to him.

rocko - ok * opens prison hall doors * U wanna go alone ?

TJ - Yea.

* TJ walks down the hall to wolfgangs cell *

TJ - * bangs bars * Yo wolfgang!

Wolfgang - * looks up at tj * What do you want ?

TJ - I want to know if you know anything on what happened to south city !

Wolfgang - SOuth city was destroyed .... I know that.

TJ - I lived there Im serious tell me what you know !

Wolfgang - My city was destroyed too you know.... By a man with an eye patch long white hair and tan skin..... I felt his power.... I even feel it now..... He is close.. terribly close

TJ - What ?! That person destroyed south city !

Wolfgang - So our objectives are the same.. How about we work together ?

TJ - After you called me evil scum ? Anyway your a rebel and I am a presidential fighter and plus I look foreward to fighting in the Zeonic city tournament of champions I cant risk the tournament , and the president is helping me find out where this guy that destroyed my city is..... Im sorry but I cant.

Wolfgang - Oh I see..... But you told rocko.... TO tell the president not to kill me !

TJ - You were unconcience you couldnt have heard me !?!?!

Wolfgang - I am a master at dark magic but I am more deadly with my scythe, but that bumbling guard rocko has it in the weapons cache now.

TJ - Well your in luck I will just tell you that.
* TJ walks away *

Wolfgang - Where are you going ?!

TJ - Im done talking I know everything I need to know, you werent involved in the destruction of south city so im done.

Wolfgang - Im not finished talking to you ! YOU PRESIDENTIAL SLIME BALL COME BACK HERE !

TJ - Ha ha ha cya around wolfgang

Wolfgang - Grrrrrrr Whatever !

* TJ goes back up to his room *

TJ - He said his power was close yet I dont feel his power.... Could the one who destroyed my city be near ? Naw..... I wouldve felt the power by now I was trained too well......
* TJ goes to sleep to get up early for his mission *

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Lets keep up the good work ppl :D

Gotta keep this on page 1 lol