New tag after almost a year - Finally i make a new tag....

(~Death~) · 12-01-2004, 05:14 PM

well i took a long break from sfo
but now i have some spare time and decided to practice gfx again
im not that good at it but i think i can improve by showcasing my work
and getting rate and critisim by expert and moderate gfx artist i expect tips and comments to help me improve for the best

well been almost a year since i dont a tag here it is:

edited verion since no1 liked tha black in hulk

rate,hate,appreciate

-Death C[O_o]

*ps 100% brushed banner
no filters whatsoever
som bluring and smudging only

Edited By (~Death~) on 1102031098

evilhadoken · 12-01-2004, 05:33 PM

just dont like the Black thing almost covering Hulk up. other than that its good

8/10

marvel911 · 12-01-2004, 05:37 PM

The background is kind of neat, but yeah the black covering up the Hulk doesnt really add anything to it.

_dmx_ · 12-02-2004, 01:11 PM

Bad text the black brushing kills it and bg aswell.

Zpower · 12-02-2004, 01:40 PM

Better bg and fg(foreground), kill typo it sucks, better pic.

evilhadoken · 12-02-2004, 02:09 PM

forgot.......text sucks also and blend hulk a little and do get rid of that black spot on the left

estset · 12-02-2004, 02:11 PM

Nice use of brush. My rate is 6/10.

(~Death~) · 12-02-2004, 03:47 PM

any tips ppl?
i want very specified tips and suggestions
on how i can improve

rabbitalien · 12-02-2004, 04:45 PM

dunt cover with the brush so much... try adding an effect like in ur sig a bit of color variety in each stroke make it look thik an real... add a border... clean up the pixelations in ur banner especially around ur sprite, use a layer style with u font and make it more interesting dunt stik it right to the border...

(~Death~) · 12-02-2004, 08:25 PM

[quote

ost_uid0="rabbitalien"]dunt cover with the brush so much... try adding an effect like in ur sig a bit of color variety in each stroke make it look thik an real... add a border... clean up the pixelations in ur banner especially around ur sprite, use a layer style with u font and make it more interesting dunt stik it right to the border...[/quote]
finally a tips

thats exactly what i need

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12-01-2004, 05:14 PM	#1
(~Death~) Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 193 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	well i took a long break from sfo but now i have some spare time and decided to practice gfx again im not that good at it but i think i can improve by showcasing my work and getting rate and critisim by expert and moderate gfx artist i expect tips and comments to help me improve for the best well been almost a year since i dont a tag here it is: edited verion since no1 liked tha black in hulk rate,hate,appreciate -Death C[O_o] *ps 100% brushed banner no filters whatsoever som bluring and smudging only Edited By (~Death~) on 1102031098 __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/666death/storm.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

12-01-2004, 05:33 PM	#2
evilhadoken Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,617 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	just dont like the Black thing almost covering Hulk up. other than that its good 8/10 __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload9/v3_for_me.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

12-01-2004, 05:37 PM	#3
marvel911 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: The Northern Hemisphere Posts: 6,610 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	The background is kind of neat, but yeah the black covering up the Hulk doesnt really add anything to it. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y226/mcclean/M911.gif[/img:sig_uid]

12-02-2004, 01:11 PM	#4
_dmx_ Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: nj Posts: 1,502 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Bad text the black brushing kills it and bg aswell. __________________ http://gcritics.com/index.php?act=idx

12-02-2004, 01:40 PM	#5
Zpower Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,038 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Better bg and fg(foreground), kill typo it sucks, better pic. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v84/Foster5k/jillandz.gif[/img:sig_uid] <s>rewopzmaI</s>

12-02-2004, 02:09 PM	#6
evilhadoken Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,617 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	forgot.......text sucks also and blend hulk a little and do get rid of that black spot on the left __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload9/v3_for_me.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

12-02-2004, 02:11 PM	#7
estset Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Canada Posts: 2,428 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Nice use of brush. My rate is 6/10. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload5/drdoom5.jpg[/img:sig_uid] [img:sig_uid]http://nosoul4evr.cyberfuturism.com/images/xforce3d.gif[/img:sig_uid] http://nosoul4evr.cyberfuturism.com Click NoSoul4Evr site to learn about SFO more.

12-02-2004, 03:47 PM	#8
(~Death~) Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 193 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	any tips ppl? i want very specified tips and suggestions on how i can improve __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/666death/storm.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

12-02-2004, 04:45 PM	#9
rabbitalien Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,484 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	dunt cover with the brush so much... try adding an effect like in ur sig a bit of color variety in each stroke make it look thik an real... add a border... clean up the pixelations in ur banner especially around ur sprite, use a layer style with u font and make it more interesting dunt stik it right to the border... __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload8/money.jpg[/img:sig_uid] \|DeviantArt\|\|Neurotion\|

12-02-2004, 08:25 PM	#10
(~Death~) Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 193 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="rabbitalien"]dunt cover with the brush so much... try adding an effect like in ur sig a bit of color variety in each stroke make it look thik an real... add a border... clean up the pixelations in ur banner especially around ur sprite, use a layer style with u font and make it more interesting dunt stik it right to the border...[/quote] finally a tips thats exactly what i need __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/666death/storm.jpg[/img:sig_uid]