Floetry/poetry thread - Singers,poets,writers gather.

[SBYRD5]

I'm afriad this isn't like the freestyle/flow/thread.

This is Floetry/Poetry.

Now what is Floetry.

It's R&B from the soul that his a style to it thats so real it brings life to the soul.Floetry yes true floetry can't be touched so I'm asking you if you have something be it a

Dream,
A Goal
Fantasy

Thats Floetic.


Poetry is a state of mind written on paper. True poetry doesn't have to rhyme or even make sense.

The purpose is to relief yourself of surpressing ideals...or thoughts so share them.

Be it positive or negative.

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[color=purpleost_uid4][iost_uid4][bost_uid4] There is this young lady I know,
Her dreams are set high so if she falls she will fall among the stars,
Sometimes on her window she can feel the rain,

But her attitude to the pain is like a paintbrush that can change the color of the situation,
She may feel black and blue...but she always shows a passionate red,

Her humor often delights because of it's unexpectedness,
Humor may have a serious point,too,
About human weaknesses.
However, the serious point is usually buried under more than a few laughs.

But for now hatred is the poison and laughter is the remedy,
I suppose I'm her remedy.
She's very nice and kind like a little red riding hood.
She puts me in consideration like a snow man borrowing a hat.
So to me what she gives to me I try to comfort her back.

Composition....I guess two people through the same hurt can coup.
I suppose thats why our spirits seem to be on a similar flow,
I love her I'll never let her go.[/iost_uid4][/colorost_uid4][/bost_uid4]

(I'll really try to dig deep next time)



Edited By SBYRD5 on Dec. 26 2003 at 22:36