Your custom character / the story - The story begins - Page 6

TJ5 · 11-11-2002, 01:33 PM

Hey custom character posters the story begins fill ur character in with the story any time u can chose good or evil but u cannot just simply kill someone off u must first consult the person who made the character and then see if they choose to be killed off - This is like an anime so some characters die.

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Narrator -
In the ruins of a destroyed south city stands a 21 year old man with an emmense power and a strong will to avenge the inhabitants of his city.

TJ - * powers up * I swear to you my friends family and people of south city I will avenge you by destroying the person or people who did this !

Narrator - TJ remembers the day clearly this is what happened long ago on that fateful day -

Man A - Who is that ?!

Woman B - Oh my god its one of the ......... * silenced *

Man B - OH my god He just killed her * runs * *then hit with a massive beam destroying 10 buildings *

Man A - RUn for your lives ! Try to save the children !

?.?.? - Leaving so soon ? * grabs man A and kills him instantly *

- At TJ's house - age 13

* loud battle sounds are erupting from the city as TJ is preparing to run from the city, screams echo in the night of the massacure upon south city *

TJ - * grabs short sword from closet and backpack with capsules in it, and runs for the door *

* door slams down *
Evil soldier A - Well lookie here its a little brat

Evil soldier B - Lets destroy him !

TJ - * pulls out sword * Get away from me stay back !

Evil solider b - DIE * rushes TJ *

TJ - you first * stabs him in chest unknowingly *

Evil soldier A - *powers up a beam * prepare to die foolish brat !

Unknown voice - Eat lead ! * shoots soldier in head *

TJ - Ahhhhhhh what the hell ?!

Unkown voice - Its ok TJ its me ricky !

TJ - ok lets get out of here !

Ricky - wait where are your parents ?

TJ - They went outside to escape, they thought I already got away

Ricky - Lets go !

Narrator - As TJ and ricky leave they see TJ's parents blasted.

TJ/ricky - Noooooooooooooooo !

TJ - * gets angry *

Ricky - * feels a strong power from tj * TJ r u ok ? I didnt know you could use energy !

TJ - *runs towards the soldier who blasted his parents and is knocked away *

?.?.? - I am no ordinary soldier kid I am the commander of Pre...

ricky - * starts shooting like mad at ?.?.? *

?.?.? - You dare face Wal....

ricky - * shoots him again *

?.?.? - * dissapears and then reapears behind ricky *

TJ - Ricky behind you !

?.?.? - *Grabs ricky by the neck and engulfs him in energy *

TJ - * runs up to ?.?.? and punches like mad but not harming him *

?.?.? - * smacks TJ away and finishes ricky off *

Ricky - TJ go get out..... * falls to ground lifeless *

TJ - * runs out of city gates * * sniff * my family and the whole city was destroyed ......... * sniff * This isnt fair... Why did I live ?

Narrator - as TJ walks down the path he comes to a military base called <^> .

TJ - *knocks on door*

Soldier A - * answers door * who are you kid ?

TJ - * i escaped from south city it is now destroyed *

Soldier A - Oh no......... * doesnt look like he cares * come inside.

TJ - * walks inside and goes to elevator *

Soldier a - come in the elevator .

narrator - As TJ goes up and up in the elevator he stops on a floor that says "presidential area"

TJ - what is this ?

Soldier - This is where president syphan is.

TJ - oh kewl I get to meet the president.

* door opens *

Soldier - * salutes * MR president This is a boy from south city claimed to be the last survivor.

President - Well Your a lucky boy to have made it out of that massacure .

TJ - thank you sir.

President - can u describe what the killer looked like ?

Tj - Long white hair, tan, eyepatch,

President - Oh ok I belive we can help you. * snickers *
Go to space colony zero and train ! then come back and join my army !

TJ - It would be a honor sir.

narrator - soldiers escort TJ to the launch area

Soldier - Ok your going to space colony zero some ppl are already there and are waiting for more fighters.

TJ - I cant fight.... with energy ..........

Soldier - U will learn how.

* TJ walks into launch pod and makes his way to space colony zero *

---- Present TJ age 21

TJ - Alright chuck lets go we have some things to take care of now.

Chuck - OK Cuz !

* they both walk down the path out of south city * And dissapear from sight *
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Ok add ur characters to the story u can either be evil or good or neutral. GOod luck with the story ppl

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11-11-2002, 01:33 PM	#1
TJ5 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Alone training to be the best sword fighter! Posts: 1,407 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Hey custom character posters the story begins fill ur character in with the story any time u can chose good or evil but u cannot just simply kill someone off u must first consult the person who made the character and then see if they choose to be killed off - This is like an anime so some characters die. ----------------------------------------------------- Narrator - In the ruins of a destroyed south city stands a 21 year old man with an emmense power and a strong will to avenge the inhabitants of his city. TJ - * powers up * I swear to you my friends family and people of south city I will avenge you by destroying the person or people who did this ! Narrator - TJ remembers the day clearly this is what happened long ago on that fateful day - Man A - Who is that ?! Woman B - Oh my god its one of the ......... * silenced * Man B - OH my god He just killed her * runs * then hit with a massive beam destroying 10 buildings Man A - RUn for your lives ! Try to save the children ! ?.?.? - Leaving so soon ? * grabs man A and kills him instantly * - At TJ's house - age 13 * loud battle sounds are erupting from the city as TJ is preparing to run from the city, screams echo in the night of the massacure upon south city * TJ - * grabs short sword from closet and backpack with capsules in it, and runs for the door * * door slams down * Evil soldier A - Well lookie here its a little brat Evil soldier B - Lets destroy him ! TJ - * pulls out sword * Get away from me stay back ! Evil solider b - DIE * rushes TJ * TJ - you first * stabs him in chest unknowingly * Evil soldier A - powers up a beam prepare to die foolish brat ! Unknown voice - Eat lead ! * shoots soldier in head * TJ - Ahhhhhhh what the hell ?! Unkown voice - Its ok TJ its me ricky ! TJ - ok lets get out of here ! Ricky - wait where are your parents ? TJ - They went outside to escape, they thought I already got away Ricky - Lets go ! Narrator - As TJ and ricky leave they see TJ's parents blasted. TJ/ricky - Noooooooooooooooo ! TJ - * gets angry * Ricky - * feels a strong power from tj * TJ r u ok ? I didnt know you could use energy ! TJ - runs towards the soldier who blasted his parents and is knocked away ?.?.? - I am no ordinary soldier kid I am the commander of Pre... ricky - * starts shooting like mad at ?.?.? * ?.?.? - You dare face Wal.... ricky - * shoots him again * ?.?.? - * dissapears and then reapears behind ricky * TJ - Ricky behind you ! ?.?.? - Grabs ricky by the neck and engulfs him in energy TJ - * runs up to ?.?.? and punches like mad but not harming him * ?.?.? - * smacks TJ away and finishes ricky off * Ricky - TJ go get out..... * falls to ground lifeless * TJ - * runs out of city gates * * sniff * my family and the whole city was destroyed ......... * sniff * This isnt fair... Why did I live ? Narrator - as TJ walks down the path he comes to a military base called <^> . TJ - knocks on door Soldier A - * answers door * who are you kid ? TJ - * i escaped from south city it is now destroyed * Soldier A - Oh no......... * doesnt look like he cares * come inside. TJ - * walks inside and goes to elevator * Soldier a - come in the elevator . narrator - As TJ goes up and up in the elevator he stops on a floor that says "presidential area" TJ - what is this ? Soldier - This is where president syphan is. TJ - oh kewl I get to meet the president. * door opens * Soldier - * salutes * MR president This is a boy from south city claimed to be the last survivor. President - Well Your a lucky boy to have made it out of that massacure . TJ - thank you sir. President - can u describe what the killer looked like ? Tj - Long white hair, tan, eyepatch, President - Oh ok I belive we can help you. * snickers * Go to space colony zero and train ! then come back and join my army ! TJ - It would be a honor sir. narrator - soldiers escort TJ to the launch area Soldier - Ok your going to space colony zero some ppl are already there and are waiting for more fighters. TJ - I cant fight.... with energy .......... Soldier - U will learn how. * TJ walks into launch pod and makes his way to space colony zero * ---- Present TJ age 21 TJ - Alright chuck lets go we have some things to take care of now. Chuck - OK Cuz ! * they both walk down the path out of south city * And dissapear from sight * ----------------------------------------------------- Ok add ur characters to the story u can either be evil or good or neutral. GOod luck with the story ppl __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://free.7host03.com/Tommy5/TJ5-misfits.jpg[/img:sig_uid] "Some run and hide. Some stand and fight. Which are you ?"