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AfterMath · 02-25-2003, 05:14 PM

roses are red violets are blue (are they or are they purple???)
this poem is soon over, i now kill u :buttrock: :buttrock: and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know

darkmasterX · 02-25-2003, 05:28 PM

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ost_uid0="AfterMath"]and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know[/quote]
poems do have to ryme what is wrong with you
that is the whole concept is on ryming scheme

Sportschick155 · 02-26-2003, 03:58 PM

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ost_uid0="darkmasterX"][quote

ost_uid0="AfterMath"]and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know[/quote]
poems do have to ryme what is wrong with you
that is the whole concept is on ryming scheme[/quote]
actually, darkmaster..u r completely WRONG! poems r really about the meaning behind the words itself..not the rhymes..a poem can b just as great wid a rhymes...did u just learn something?

darkmasterX · 02-26-2003, 04:55 PM

then its not a poem then it is just words that your are saying that sound nice.

Sportschick155 · 02-26-2003, 05:25 PM

naww..theres always a meaning behind a poem....U SHOULD KNOW THAT. u can make it sound nice with the words but the poem could just b completely pointless, no meaning...get it? i bet u dont.

darkmasterX · 02-26-2003, 05:34 PM

they have to ryme all poems have to ryme or they are not poems. sports you don't know i went though with my poems when people say that they don't ryme and this teacher in my school gets my poems copy righted and she says that they have to ryme sports i do know end of story.

Sportschick155 · 02-26-2003, 06:07 PM

alrighty.. :laughlong:

SBYRD5 · 02-26-2003, 06:49 PM

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ost_uid0="SBYRD5"]Umm I made this last year it was...well if she reads it she will know it's her...

MY LOVE FOR JOY(Umm I know what you like to be called..but it fits better here...)

The music in my head...

I've known you almost as long as a year now,
You seem to be like wine,
Each day your sweetness is more divine,
You really gave me a chance to come in your mind,

You and you alone are the only girl I think I have,
Ever loved,but never meet,I knew you were special,
From my first reply from you..and your friends are even cool
You seem happy and I want that to stay,

I realized one day I liked you to much..so I pushed away,
Yea that sounds foolish,and our bound slowly begin to
fade away like the memory of you was a dream,
A fantasy....but one day I woke up.....

I only had you on my mind that day....
I waited all day to just get a reply from you
But you never came.....

You know you helped me so much..
I felt lost and you said some nice..*snif*
Beautiful things to me...even though today..
I know what your body looks like,

I think your mind is your best feature,
I remeber you saying things like this to me...
"James what is your favorite flavor of icecream"
I would've said the same as you just to make you happy..

You told me people change...and your right,
But sometimes your feelings don't completly change,
For that someone...that someone you love...
You might not say it right nor express this love..

But love never dies...if it was ever there...
What I felt for you wasn't lust...but love..
I don't know what to think of you or myself now..
BUT I DO KNOW EVERYDAY AND EVERY PASSING SEC.

OF THOSE DAYS WE SPENT TO GATHER JUST TALKING I LIKED YOU FOR YOU.....I NEVER REALLY HAD A GOOD CONVERSATION WITH MY GIRLFRIENDS OR EVEN MY MOM.

You seem so cool...and your beauty is so divine...so
Baby girl I pray one day you will be mine....[/quote]
Darkmaster examine this poem..it barely rhymes but it has a touching point...aslong as the poem has a message it is a poem...

Actually Rapping is poetry just the rhyming scheme your thinking about...

darkmasterX · 02-26-2003, 07:06 PM

its does ryme go to poetry.com cuz i to lazy to explain it

SBYRD5 · 02-27-2003, 04:30 PM

Oh ok let me explain the type of poetry you are subscribing is rhyiming scheme..

Umm forceful statement poetry does not rhyme..

I wish the member asshole could come to this thread and show..

???

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02-25-2003, 05:28 PM	#42
darkmasterX Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 416 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="AfterMath"]and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know[/quote] poems do have to ryme what is wrong with you that is the whole concept is on ryming scheme __________________ eye for an eye will make the whole world go blind

02-26-2003, 03:58 PM	#43
Sportschick155 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Winnipeg Posts: 2,783 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="darkmasterX"][quoteost_uid0="AfterMath"]and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know[/quote] poems do have to ryme what is wrong with you that is the whole concept is on ryming scheme[/quote] actually, darkmaster..u r completely WRONG! poems r really about the meaning behind the words itself..not the rhymes..a poem can b just as great wid a rhymes...did u just learn something? __________________ whoever said the struggle would stop today, alota niggas are dead or locked away, teenage women growing up with aids, that's the life when you're living in the ghetto

02-26-2003, 04:55 PM	#44
darkmasterX Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 416 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	then its not a poem then it is just words that your are saying that sound nice. __________________ eye for an eye will make the whole world go blind

02-26-2003, 05:25 PM	#45
Sportschick155 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Winnipeg Posts: 2,783 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	naww..theres always a meaning behind a poem....U SHOULD KNOW THAT. u can make it sound nice with the words but the poem could just b completely pointless, no meaning...get it? i bet u dont. __________________ whoever said the struggle would stop today, alota niggas are dead or locked away, teenage women growing up with aids, that's the life when you're living in the ghetto

02-25-2003, 05:14 PM	#41
AfterMath Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 316 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	roses are red violets are blue (are they or are they purple???) this poem is soon over, i now kill u :buttrock: :buttrock: and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know

02-26-2003, 05:34 PM	#46
darkmasterX Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 416 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	they have to ryme all poems have to ryme or they are not poems. sports you don't know i went though with my poems when people say that they don't ryme and this teacher in my school gets my poems copy righted and she says that they have to ryme sports i do know end of story. __________________ eye for an eye will make the whole world go blind

02-26-2003, 06:07 PM	#47
Sportschick155 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Winnipeg Posts: 2,783 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	alrighty.. :laughlong: __________________ whoever said the struggle would stop today, alota niggas are dead or locked away, teenage women growing up with aids, that's the life when you're living in the ghetto

02-26-2003, 06:49 PM	#48
SBYRD5 Banned Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: North Carolina Posts: 6,549 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="SBYRD5"]Umm I made this last year it was...well if she reads it she will know it's her... MY LOVE FOR JOY(Umm I know what you like to be called..but it fits better here...) The music in my head... I've known you almost as long as a year now, You seem to be like wine, Each day your sweetness is more divine, You really gave me a chance to come in your mind, You and you alone are the only girl I think I have, Ever loved,but never meet,I knew you were special, From my first reply from you..and your friends are even cool You seem happy and I want that to stay, I realized one day I liked you to much..so I pushed away, Yea that sounds foolish,and our bound slowly begin to fade away like the memory of you was a dream, A fantasy....but one day I woke up..... I only had you on my mind that day.... I waited all day to just get a reply from you But you never came..... You know you helped me so much.. I felt lost and you said some nice..snif Beautiful things to me...even though today.. I know what your body looks like, I think your mind is your best feature, I remeber you saying things like this to me... "James what is your favorite flavor of icecream" I would've said the same as you just to make you happy.. You told me people change...and your right, But sometimes your feelings don't completly change, For that someone...that someone you love... You might not say it right nor express this love.. But love never dies...if it was ever there... What I felt for you wasn't lust...but love.. I don't know what to think of you or myself now.. BUT I DO KNOW EVERYDAY AND EVERY PASSING SEC. OF THOSE DAYS WE SPENT TO GATHER JUST TALKING I LIKED YOU FOR YOU.....I NEVER REALLY HAD A GOOD CONVERSATION WITH MY GIRLFRIENDS OR EVEN MY MOM. You seem so cool...and your beauty is so divine...so Baby girl I pray one day you will be mine....[/quote] Darkmaster examine this poem..it barely rhymes but it has a touching point...aslong as the poem has a message it is a poem... Actually Rapping is poetry just the rhyming scheme your thinking about...

02-26-2003, 07:06 PM	#49
darkmasterX Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 416 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	its does ryme go to poetry.com cuz i to lazy to explain it __________________ eye for an eye will make the whole world go blind

02-27-2003, 04:30 PM	#50
SBYRD5 Banned Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: North Carolina Posts: 6,549 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Oh ok let me explain the type of poetry you are subscribing is rhyiming scheme.. Umm forceful statement poetry does not rhyme.. I wish the member asshole could come to this thread and show.. ???