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SolidSnake76 · 11-14-2002, 06:18 PM

its so long and hard to keep up with.

ok i changed the character.

TJ5 · 11-14-2002, 06:28 PM

LOL its ok u can re edit ur post some other time when u have time that is..

SSJKarma · 11-14-2002, 09:42 PM

nice story up until now.
you damn wrote very long posts.
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GUARD1:*picks up the phone* "sir, we got someone in the vents"
?.?.?:"you sure about that ?"
GUARD1:"yes sir, it is larger than any rats we have !"
?.?.?:"set the base on ALARM Level 1"
**LEGENDS... Level 1 is finding the person, and it goes up to level 5 which is kill on sight with guard on every single floor**
GUARD1:"yes sir" *puts down the phone and set the alarm on level 1*
narrator: in the office above !
KARMA:"hmmm, who could be able to infiltrate a base like this one ? only specials agent had been able to, still he didn't even cared to be picked up by VENTS detectors. gonna have to find him and ask about it !"

TO BE CONTINUED...

SolidSnake76 · 11-16-2002, 12:47 PM

intercom: stage one alert.
chuck: how did you get here?
snake: the vents.
chuck: now you been detected. come into my room.

*chuck and snake go into his room. chuck pulls out a gun*

chuck: now snake, if thats your real name, why are you here?

*snake draws his gun*

snake: wheres tj?
chuck: i told you, he died on a mission.
snake: i dont believe you.
chuck: then dont.

*theres a knock on the door and it opens. snake turns around and get knocked out by chuck.*

chuck: take him to the cells.
gaurd: yes sir.

*chuck goes to syphan office*

chuck: sir i found the intruder. he's being taken to the cells.
syphan: what did you find on him?
chuck: a 45. caliber, beretta m-92-f, and this device.
syphan: stealth camoflage! who is this man?
chuck: he calls himself Solid Snake. he was here looking for tj.
syphan: the legendary solid snake? well i think i have a talk with him now.

*syphan goes down to the cells and enters snake's cell.*

syphan: well well well. the legendary solid snake.
snake: surprised huh?
syphan: not really. but why were you looking for tj?
snake: that you dont need to know.
syphan: of course. he's dead.
snake: i heard.
syphan: good you heard. now you either answer my questions or i will torture you.

snake sits on the bench, saying nothing.*

syphan: fine. be ready for a workout tomorrow.

syphan leaves the cells. snake looks out through the bars outside.*

voice: why ARE you here?
snake: who the hell?

snake turns around and looks at the cell arcoss from him, seeing a boy.*

snake: why are you in there?
boy: i dont know why.
snake: whats your name
boy: they call me wolfgang boy.
logan: snake.

*snake turns around to look outside*

snake: logan?
logan: i alive.
snake: how?
logan: snake, that was a clone.
snake: just get me out of here.
logan: calm down. i got acid.

logan burns the bars and snake slips out.*

snake: where and whats our e-vac.
logan: those two motorcycles and a blackhawk 5 miles from here.
snake: good. head back to the chopper and wait there, i need to head back inside.
logan: why?
snake: i got work to do.

SSJKarma · 11-16-2002, 08:37 PM

NICE one !
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GUARD1:"sir, the intruder has been found and neutralize, should i put the level to zero again ?"
KARMA:"no, i don't think our troubles have ended. still if this man came in that vent then he is clearly not gonna stop there. i want you to post 2 permanent guards in the cells section"
GUARD1:"yes sir !"
*the guard goes on with the orders*
KARMA:"i will guard the cells by myself, just to be sure of things"
*karma is in route to the cells*

[meanwhile in the cells sector...]
Snake:"the alarm is still on, we'll have to hurry !"
LOGAN:"yeah !"
WOlfgang:"hey, don't forget about me !"

TO BE CONTINUED...

TJ5 · 11-19-2002, 04:16 PM

Now this part is one of the best parts

well I dunno lol

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Narrator - Chuck is writing a letter

Chuck - * puts letter in base mail box * I hope KHcloud gets this. letter

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To KHcloud,

The presidential tournament is in 2 days and I heard that winston,wallzer,rocko and other strong ppl are going to participate. You should join, I am gonna try to win the tourney this year to make TJ and president syphan proud of me. GOod luck if u join.

sincerly,
Chuck
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* chuck hears the alert and rushes too the cells *
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Too be continued.

SolidSnake76 · 11-19-2002, 04:55 PM

now to make it good
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prison gaurd: hey.

the gaurd set off the alarm*

intercom voice: stage 3 alert.
snake: oh damn. get back to the chopper and hand me the M-16.
logan: but snake.
snake: GO

*snake kills the gaurd and gets into the elevator. he stops on the first floor and runs into chuck*

snake: hey
chuck: you? how did you get out?
snake: dont worry about.

*snake hears gaurds behind him, turns and jumps beside chuck and opens fire. chuck pulls out a desert eagle.*

to be continued.......

SSJKarma · 11-19-2002, 10:59 PM

oooooooo nice !
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*while both chucks and snake were both pointing guns at each other*
Karma:"go ahead agent chuck, shoot him ! that's what he deserves after getting in here !"
SNAKE:"listen to your heart kid ! you're not like him, i see it in your eyes !"
CHUCK:"... ... drop your weapon and surrender !"
SNAKE:"no can do kid. i let you the chance to get out of here alive, take it !"
Karma:"enough of this, kill him !"
LOGAN:"is this a private party or what !"
*logan starts shooting his machine guns*
*while chuck looks at logan for a brief instant, snake knock him off to the ground and run to logan*
*chucks stand-up and fires back*
*snake gets into the elevator with logan*
Karma:"so, he has a friend ! he is just delaying the innevitable !"
*karma open his right hand finger by finger letting go the bullets he just caught*
Karma:"we'll see each other again, snake !"

TJ5 · 11-20-2002, 04:10 PM

LOL

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Narrator - Chuck is getting mad

Chuck - YOU M)$#(*$(#* F)()@#$*@) I am a super human u hit me im gonna get you ahhhhh * throws tantrum * * breaths *
OK............ ummmm sorry about that.......

Karma - You are a complete idiot......

Chuck - No im not * beams the cieling * see I can controll my energy attacks..... Idiots cannot......

Karma - Ok fine your not an idiot your just immature

Chuck - Well ok then thats better..... HEY !

Karma - We have to find out more about this snake character and what he wants with TJ......... Ok ?

Chuck - Well OK I will try my best , Hey are you gonna be in the presidential tournament ?
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TO be continued.

Juggernaut · 11-20-2002, 07:02 PM

Lol I'ved had to type up 10 pages reports or something close to that. I've made to many long reports i'd post them but 1: Their to long, 2: I'm just lazy :laughlong:

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11-14-2002, 06:18 PM	#21
SolidSnake76 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Brooklyn NY Posts: 3,076 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	its so long and hard to keep up with. ok i changed the character. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v195/SolidSnake76/thevet.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

11-14-2002, 06:28 PM	#22
TJ5 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Alone training to be the best sword fighter! Posts: 1,407 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	LOL its ok u can re edit ur post some other time when u have time that is.. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://free.7host03.com/Tommy5/TJ5-misfits.jpg[/img:sig_uid] "Some run and hide. Some stand and fight. Which are you ?"

11-14-2002, 09:42 PM	#23
SSJKarma Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Canada somewhere in the province of quebec Posts: 5,445 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	nice story up until now. you damn wrote very long posts. ----------------------------------- GUARD1:picks up the phone "sir, we got someone in the vents" ?.?.?:"you sure about that ?" GUARD1:"yes sir, it is larger than any rats we have !" ?.?.?:"set the base on ALARM Level 1" LEGENDS... Level 1 is finding the person, and it goes up to level 5 which is kill on sight with guard on every single floor GUARD1:"yes sir" puts down the phone and set the alarm on level 1 narrator: in the office above ! KARMA:"hmmm, who could be able to infiltrate a base like this one ? only specials agent had been able to, still he didn't even cared to be picked up by VENTS detectors. gonna have to find him and ask about it !" TO BE CONTINUED... __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://membres.lycos.fr/imagesforum/Banner.gif[/img:sig_uid] "How did you escape my grasp ? no matter, i'll crush you now !" -DB : Lost Soul My Web Site http://membres.lycos.fr/xmvssf/

11-16-2002, 12:47 PM	#24
SolidSnake76 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Brooklyn NY Posts: 3,076 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	intercom: stage one alert. chuck: how did you get here? snake: the vents. chuck: now you been detected. come into my room. chuck and snake go into his room. chuck pulls out a gun chuck: now snake, if thats your real name, why are you here? snake draws his gun snake: wheres tj? chuck: i told you, he died on a mission. snake: i dont believe you. chuck: then dont. theres a knock on the door and it opens. snake turns around and get knocked out by chuck. chuck: take him to the cells. gaurd: yes sir. chuck goes to syphan office chuck: sir i found the intruder. he's being taken to the cells. syphan: what did you find on him? chuck: a 45. caliber, beretta m-92-f, and this device. syphan: stealth camoflage! who is this man? chuck: he calls himself Solid Snake. he was here looking for tj. syphan: the legendary solid snake? well i think i have a talk with him now. syphan goes down to the cells and enters snake's cell. syphan: well well well. the legendary solid snake. snake: surprised huh? syphan: not really. but why were you looking for tj? snake: that you dont need to know. syphan: of course. he's dead. snake: i heard. syphan: good you heard. now you either answer my questions or i will torture you. snake sits on the bench, saying nothing.* syphan: fine. be ready for a workout tomorrow. syphan leaves the cells. snake looks out through the bars outside.* voice: why ARE you here? snake: who the hell? snake turns around and looks at the cell arcoss from him, seeing a boy.* snake: why are you in there? boy: i dont know why. snake: whats your name boy: they call me wolfgang boy. logan: snake. snake turns around to look outside snake: logan? logan: i alive. snake: how? logan: snake, that was a clone. snake: just get me out of here. logan: calm down. i got acid. logan burns the bars and snake slips out.* snake: where and whats our e-vac. logan: those two motorcycles and a blackhawk 5 miles from here. snake: good. head back to the chopper and wait there, i need to head back inside. logan: why? snake: i got work to do. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v195/SolidSnake76/thevet.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

11-16-2002, 08:37 PM	#25
SSJKarma Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Canada somewhere in the province of quebec Posts: 5,445 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	NICE one ! ---------------------- GUARD1:"sir, the intruder has been found and neutralize, should i put the level to zero again ?" KARMA:"no, i don't think our troubles have ended. still if this man came in that vent then he is clearly not gonna stop there. i want you to post 2 permanent guards in the cells section" GUARD1:"yes sir !" the guard goes on with the orders KARMA:"i will guard the cells by myself, just to be sure of things" karma is in route to the cells [meanwhile in the cells sector...] Snake:"the alarm is still on, we'll have to hurry !" LOGAN:"yeah !" WOlfgang:"hey, don't forget about me !" TO BE CONTINUED... __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://membres.lycos.fr/imagesforum/Banner.gif[/img:sig_uid] "How did you escape my grasp ? no matter, i'll crush you now !" -DB : Lost Soul My Web Site http://membres.lycos.fr/xmvssf/

11-19-2002, 04:16 PM	#26
TJ5 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Alone training to be the best sword fighter! Posts: 1,407 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Now this part is one of the best parts well I dunno lol -------------------------------------- Narrator - Chuck is writing a letter Chuck - * puts letter in base mail box * I hope KHcloud gets this. letter ---------------- To KHcloud, The presidential tournament is in 2 days and I heard that winston,wallzer,rocko and other strong ppl are going to participate. You should join, I am gonna try to win the tourney this year to make TJ and president syphan proud of me. GOod luck if u join. sincerly, Chuck ---------------------------------------------------------- * chuck hears the alert and rushes too the cells * ---------------------------------------------------- Too be continued. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://free.7host03.com/Tommy5/TJ5-misfits.jpg[/img:sig_uid] "Some run and hide. Some stand and fight. Which are you ?"

11-19-2002, 04:55 PM	#27
SolidSnake76 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Brooklyn NY Posts: 3,076 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	now to make it good -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- prison gaurd: hey. the gaurd set off the alarm* intercom voice: stage 3 alert. snake: oh damn. get back to the chopper and hand me the M-16. logan: but snake. snake: GO snake kills the gaurd and gets into the elevator. he stops on the first floor and runs into chuck snake: hey chuck: you? how did you get out? snake: dont worry about. snake hears gaurds behind him, turns and jumps beside chuck and opens fire. chuck pulls out a desert eagle. to be continued....... __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v195/SolidSnake76/thevet.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

11-19-2002, 10:59 PM	#28
SSJKarma Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Canada somewhere in the province of quebec Posts: 5,445 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	oooooooo nice ! ------------------ while both chucks and snake were both pointing guns at each other Karma:"go ahead agent chuck, shoot him ! that's what he deserves after getting in here !" SNAKE:"listen to your heart kid ! you're not like him, i see it in your eyes !" CHUCK:"... ... drop your weapon and surrender !" SNAKE:"no can do kid. i let you the chance to get out of here alive, take it !" Karma:"enough of this, kill him !" LOGAN:"is this a private party or what !" logan starts shooting his machine guns while chuck looks at logan for a brief instant, snake knock him off to the ground and run to logan chucks stand-up and fires back snake gets into the elevator with logan Karma:"so, he has a friend ! he is just delaying the innevitable !" karma open his right hand finger by finger letting go the bullets he just caught Karma:"we'll see each other again, snake !" __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://membres.lycos.fr/imagesforum/Banner.gif[/img:sig_uid] "How did you escape my grasp ? no matter, i'll crush you now !" -DB : Lost Soul My Web Site http://membres.lycos.fr/xmvssf/

11-20-2002, 04:10 PM	#29
TJ5 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Alone training to be the best sword fighter! Posts: 1,407 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	LOL ------------------ Narrator - Chuck is getting mad Chuck - YOU M)$#($(# F)()@#$@) I am a super human u hit me im gonna get you ahhhhh throws tantrum * * breaths * OK............ ummmm sorry about that....... Karma - You are a complete idiot...... Chuck - No im not * beams the cieling * see I can controll my energy attacks..... Idiots cannot...... Karma - Ok fine your not an idiot your just immature Chuck - Well ok then thats better..... HEY ! Karma - We have to find out more about this snake character and what he wants with TJ......... Ok ? Chuck - Well OK I will try my best , Hey are you gonna be in the presidential tournament ? ------------------------------------- TO be continued. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://free.7host03.com/Tommy5/TJ5-misfits.jpg[/img:sig_uid] "Some run and hide. Some stand and fight. Which are you ?"

11-20-2002, 07:02 PM	#30
Juggernaut Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 253 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Lol I'ved had to type up 10 pages reports or something close to that. I've made to many long reports i'd post them but 1: Their to long, 2: I'm just lazy :laughlong: __________________ Death is nothing, I'm much more deadlier...