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[SolidSnake76]

colonel: general bohemoth, i found this team outside the base.
bohemoth: *chuckles* snake, you got caught. take these men to the main control room. i let lord blofield decied there fate.
colonel: what about snake?
bohemoth: he's gonna get executed.

*moments later.....*

*snake is lead to a wide open area with alot of soldiers and he gets a good look around the exits.*

bohemoth: lets put this blindfold on. now men, raise your weapons.
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*at the lab, the professor notice something wrong with the cloning.*
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bohemoth: ready......
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jinkens: wait a minute......
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bohemoth: aim....
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jinkens: wheres the gem?
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bohemoth: fire!

*snake suddenly dissappers*

[TJ5]

Good storys pplz !

[apocolypse83]

Well im not in this but im just saying you are all very sad peeps who watch fake cartoon shows like that. I mean some of you guys are actually above the age of four (the level of maturity to watch that crap) and are still watching it! how perfectly lame :angryfire: :angryfire: :angryfire: :angryfire: :angryfire:

[TJ5]

Shut up ppl do what they want and u cant stop anyone

[AngelWings]

[ooc] ok one thing first apocolypse83, i dun watch those "fake cartoon" showz. and this story is original which i think no four year old can do. (nor they prob can't write either...but thatz a diff story) and also, writing this original story does not mean we still watch "fake cartoon" shows. ok this is not a topic for flaming so i'll stop [ooc]

(DevilishAngel and Karma's beams collide. Both are at the end, pushing their powers higher as the beams grow larger and the shockwave of the two beams crushing everything around them. Suddenly DevilishAngel turns back to normal [good self] and her power level drops slightly. Before Karma's beam hits her, she disappears and reappears in the sky, watching as Karma's beam explode.)

Angel- "What the..." (Looks around.) "Where the hell am i?"

(Karma, not realizing Angel has gone back to normal, teleports into the sky in front of Angel.)

Karma- "That was a quick escape, but it won't happen again." (Punches toward Angel face but Angel quickly dodges it.)

Angel- "Who the hell are you?!"

Karma- "Don't try that funny stuff again, it's not going to work." (Jump kicks Angel but Angel blocks that)

Angel- "I'm serious, who the hell are you?"

Karma- "Like I said, that stuff is not going to work!" (Throws more punches and kicks at Angel, while Angel dodges [or tries] to dodge them.)

Angel- "If...you just...tell me...who...the hell you are...and why you're fighting me..." (Her power level starts to rise.) "...Then...we...wouldn't have...to...FIGHT!" (Lets out a burst of energy and starts fighting back.)

(And the fight continues... :shocked: )

[ajtimbs]

[quoteost_uid2="SolidSnake76"][quoteost_uid2="ajtimbs"]hey i am not in[/quoteost_uid2]
make ur own damn part.

now for mines
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sarge: they came this way. hurry
snake: logan, c'mon.
logan: u wanna carry this missile launcher?

*snake and logan are running to the heliport, trying to stop a chopper*

snake: lets go to that vent.

*snake shoots it open*

snake: hand over the launcher.
logan: here. you carry it.

*they both crawl in and make it to the heliport that overlooks the amazon.*

snake: goodbye blofield.

*snake fires. a direct hit.*

logan: yes.

*gaurds come up from behind and open fire. they pump bullets into logans back*

logan: aaaaahhhhh. aaaahhhhhhhrrrrrrgggggg.

*he stumbles and fall from the heliport*

snake: logan. LOGAAAN!!
gaurd: get him.

*snake quickly runs to the other side of the heliport and jumps down into a river. he swims out and onto land, hiding in the jungle*

sarge :c'mon, i want a search team down there. he stole the plans for the boss's space station and destroyed the clone labortory. he must be killed.

*down in the jungle snake looks at his map*

snake: ok, i have to make it to borba. just head a mile and a half north and i meet up with colonel there.

snake begins the hike.............[/quoteost_uid2]
[color=blueost_uid2]ok i will lain:[/colorost_uid2]

[SolidSnake76]

what the hell r u doing?

[chun_ai]

making a part
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Flame- Hey! Wait up! Shouldn`t the sarge be on that side?
General- Oh, damn it, shut up, will you?!
Flame- Shutting up.
General- Wait Wait! Here they come!
Flame- Here who come?
General-Strider and the cheesecake!
Flame- Who the heck is Cheesecake?
General- Will you PLEASE keep your mouth shut?
Flame- Ok.
Strider- HEY! GENERAL! You promised us 1 mill. now, where is it?
General- Take it easy, Strider.... I`ve got the money...
General hands Strider the money
Cheesecake- Sir, the troops are approaching!
Strider- C`mon Cheese, lets bust out of this joint, then!
General- Wait! What about are deal????
Flame- Yeah, you two owe us some information....
Strider- Too bad! We leaving! Get your own information!
General- HeyHEYHEY! You get your sprry behind back here, Strider!
Flame- I challenge you AND Cheesecake there to a match!!
Strider- Alright... Fine....
Flame- You win, you leave without giving us your knowledge. I win, you give us the information... Deal?
Strider- Deal.


Fighting starts....

Flame- STRIDER! YOU HAD BETTER COME UP WITH A WILL! OTHERWISE, I`LL KILL YOU RIGHT HERE, RIGHT NOW!
Strider whimpers
Flame- Would you like to experience the same painful death as your little cheese friend?
Fighting goes on....

[SolidSnake76]

jinkens: lord blofield! the gem is missing!
blofield: THE WHAT?
bohemoth: lord blofield!
blofield: snake?
bohemoth: just dissappered!
blofield: no......bohemoth, I WANT MY GEM BACK! level the base and begin the invasion on earth, KILL EVERYTHING!
bohemoth: yes sir. EVERYONE GET ON A FREIGHT! WE MOVING OUT. colonel.
colonel: yes general?
bohemoth: have all your men board a ship and set the self-destruct sequence. snake wont escape now.

*snake appear in the control room.*
logan: what the hell?
snake: calm down. i not that clone.
logan: how can i be sure?
snake: logan. its me, snake.
logan: really?
snake: we are not tools of the goverment.
logan: or anyone else.
snake: fighting was the only thing.
logan: the only thing i was good at.
snake: but.
both: at least i fought for what i believed in.
logan: snake, i thought you were dead by now.
snake: not yet.
chuck: snake, we locked in.

*the control panel explodes.*

snake: damn. a self-destruct sequence. we gotta get out or we have a grave on the moon.
logan: snake, look at the screen. how did you get in here anyway?

*snake holds up the gem of gods.*

logan: your kidding.
snake: no i not. all the ships are leaving. and the self destruct is set to blow in 4mins. we gotta get on one.
chuck: how?
snake: stand back.

*snake breaks the door down with super human speed.*

snake: c'mon. we gotta keep moving.

[SSJKarma]

NICE !!!!!
except that atijimb was quoting someone, don't take his post in, there was no story in there !
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*suddently stopping the fight, karma teleported back to the ground*
ANGEL:"what the ?"
*Karma sits on the ground waiting for something*
*angel fly to the ground too*
Angel:"who are you ? why are you fighting me ? how have i got here ?"
Karma:"..."
ANGEL:"answer me !"
Karma:"seems you are not trying to trick me with this SPONTANEOUS GOODNESS"
ANGEL:"what ?"
Karma:"you came here by your own, i fighted you because you're EVIL. and my name is Karma ! now your turn, same questions !"

TO BE CONTINUED...

narator:"what an incredible turn of event ! will angel stay this way, or will she turn EVIL again... find it, in the next exciting post"