Ear, eyes way out of proportion. The top of the ear and the eyeline should match up. Top of the left side of the head shouldnt bend out then in then out again. It should only bend outward going down to the chin. Hairline needs to be refined alot more. Nose is out of proportion again nose should line up with bottom of the ear. Also your nose curves downward looks awkward. Maybe actually creating a eye on this character would help it look better. Eye doesnt even have an iris ect.. but besides all that ohyah the chin isnt straight and besides that pretty good for begginner even in ms paint you should be able get proportions atleast somewhat right though.
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