The best poet - Who is good

[SolidSnake76]

who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who feels ignored?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy that works hard to be recognized?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who feels like a nobody?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who has big dreams?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who is tormented every day?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who is poor?

who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who has nobody in his life.
i will pay attention to that depressed boy.
because i am that depressed boy.

[EYO]

solidsnake78 went deep wit dat one

ok...i shall make another poem

*AHEM*

for many days passed
many knights clashed

deaths and wounded flesh
covered the feild
for their future was never fortold

now in our world
da same things happen
war and battles terorism too

why does this happen
wut was the cause
is there any reason for this many loss

ok......ma poem doesnt talk about drugs dis time......
and mooo1 urs is good...it rhymes

[SBYRD5]

Snake I know what it's like to be that boy....deep.



Constallations Of Mankind
Classical Music(It set my mind for this poem)

Love is printed in the stars is it not?
The same plot as Romeo and Juliet,
There stars were written to only end in tragic love,
But is it not better to have love than to not have loved at all?

We ask these questions to our inner self,
And sometimes share this with others,
But those you truely love you keep hidden,
In fear of being the victim of pain,

Isn't love it's on pain on the heart,
Cupid's arrow has it's way of striking,
The time you first wore your BIRTHDAY SUIT
Seems to decide your fate in those days...

We only consider stars beautiful,
Like Flowers that never wilt,
We often wish for a falling star to appear,
So we can have our chance to wish...

Wish for our inner desires,
Oh how we admire a companion,
To watch this wish asked for,and later recieved..

I have to go to sleep my eyes are burning

[Razz]

[quoteost_uid0="mooo1"]alright,let me show you how it's done.
Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise!
yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem.

Cow
There once was a cow from Main,
Who ate almost half of Spain.
He devoured the stores
and munched on the floors
And finally flew back in the rain.

well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried.[/quote]
Wow, what an amazing limmerick.
(in french accent)
Ah shallenj yiu to ah dooell!
*slap*


Cheese
Look in the holes of this cheese
It makes you fall on your knees
Once you get up
You will throw up
And after that, you will sneeze


muhahahah . . .

[EYO]

i got another poem......

"how u feel wen your high"

u feel so high
you think your higher dan the sky
den you try to fly
but you keep falling and die
and u still always try

"pass it on, and run"

wen you get it
puff and pass it

wen its your turn run and take da whole thing
wen they catch up say u wer joking
and wen dey fall for it run again

[SolidSnake76]

friends come and friends go.
but for me, they all just go.
why dont any girl just like me for who i am?
why am i always hated through my life?
why is there conflict in this world?
why cant i find peace?




why do pple hate and ignore me?

[EYO]

"wen i get high"

wen i get high
i look at da sky
it always looks pale
sometimes looking like a whale
and right next to me a can of ale

but one thing you must always
bring is a can of air freshner
so wen your parents come
they wont smell a thing
they will smell two things
and if dat doesnt help, run and say daddy did it...............

[Razz]

[quoteost_uid0="SolidSnake76"]friends come and friends go.
but for me, they all just go.
why dont any girl just like me for who i am?
why am i always hated through my life?
why is there conflict in this world?
why cant i find peace?




why do pple hate and ignore me?[/quote]
I don't hate or ignore you . . . and I'm sure not a lot of ppl hate you.

[darkmasterX]

razz its is the junk here


World War 3

yo its like every day is a strugle
cuz it is like i am a pawn
and soon i will be gone
so when i die no one will cry
cuz everyone will still be fighting on

days will go by and so many people will die
because diesese will mutiply
when i look in the sky
i see the blood of every man and woman
who died fighting they where the first

that god placed a curse on
but that was not the worse one
now listen to this verse
people are scared to converse
they will disperse

cuz when they hear the sound
when bodies hit the ground
it feels like i am bound
to this place every time
i breath it tastes like waste

so now i am on the front line
putting my life on the line
its like going down stairs blind
you never know when its going to end
and you never know what going to happen


this is my feeling

[mooo1]

[quoteost_uid0="Razz"][quoteost_uid0="mooo1"]alright,let me show you how it's done.
Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise!
yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem.

Cow
There once was a cow from Main,
Who ate almost half of Spain.
He devoured the stores
and munched on the floors
And finally flew back in the rain.

well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried.[/quote]
Wow, what an amazing limmerick.
(in french accent)
Ah shallenj yiu to ah dooell!
*slap*


Cheese
Look in the holes of this cheese
It makes you fall on your knees
Once you get up
You will throw up
And after that, you will sneeze


muhahahah . . .[/quote]
wow Razz.... I'm flattered..( what does that word mean?) anyway, thx! i tought mine was nothing compared to your poems, but thx. now i got another one.


The sun and moon
The time has come for us to rise,
For all the birds and bees and flies
The light is shining bold and bright,
The time has come for one more fight,
Every day goes by the same,
Every day we play the same game
Then all is quiet and the day is done,
Then the moon comes out, and takes over the sun.

I hope you guys like this one better than my other one. Heh, not bad for a thirteen year old, eh?