12-24-2002, 09:39 AM
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[ooc]SSJKarma=Alright, Karma your right your character did teleport away,but when I posted Karma moving at the speed of light I kinda meant he teleported.(I should've been more clear).
SolidSnake=When I was reading your post I found out that Choas Dragon has a father named Delrith Dragon(King of Dragons).When I read the post about Angelwings fighting Choas I thought it would be cool to include his father.
TJ5=Have you started another story?
Angelwings=Oh, I draw alot it's not the best picture,but we can understand who is in the picture,and the emotions in the picture so it's fine.(Your character is drawn the best)
I suppose I will do some editting now. [ooc]
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EDIT= Choas Takes Phoenix Prisoner
(Sorry for missing with your story Angelwings)
Phoenix's Capture/Chase To Lord Khan's Ship
KHCloud=How do we reach the spaceship,and find solidsnake?
*Everyone is silent for a moment*
Logan=We could follow the dragons to the spaceship,but how would we ever get them from attempting to kill us.
*Logan reaches into his pocket,and pulls out a lighter,and some C4*
Logan=Look we have to have a divergen...Phoenix you seem to be the strongest here.
Phoenix=Me
Logan=Yes YOU! You seem to be the only one of us that can stand up to the attack of those dragons.
Phoenix=I might can defeat Choas,but Delrith....he seems so powerful.
KH,Chuck= Thats true.
Logan=I don't need you to fight the dragons just distract them,and surive in the mean time we will us the C4 packets.We have to aim a direct attack at both of them.For it to count.
Chuck=Sounds dangerous,but it sounds like a winning plan.
KH=Hmmm How close do we have to be to use the C4.
Logan=We are going to send Phoenix in first with explosives to distract the dragons then we toss the C4 out of the hanger for a surpise attack.
KH=So we have to fly above them?
Chuck=Hmm I think this is to dangerous for phoenix maybe a I should do this.
Phoenix=I can handle anything mortal.I'll be your distraction,but be sure not to get spotted.
Chuck=I'll fly this ship so we can move in stealth.
KH=This is my ship Chuck!!
*Chuck and KHCloud have a staring contest,but is interupted when Logan speaks*
Logan=I'm flying this mission...sit down,and shut...upz.
KH/Chuck=Whatever..
*So the gang of fighters are informing each other on the set up of the attack when something makes the "The Whale"(The space ship) shake villiantly*
KHCloud=What the hell was that!!
Phoenix=It must be the dragons...
Meanwhile(outside the ship)
Delrith=You are my son I know you can tackle harder than that.
Choas=ARRRGGGgggHhhhh
*Choas Dragon tackles the "The Whale"(The space ship) again*
Choas=Phoenix...OH PHOENIX...COME OUT AND PLAY!
Delrith=I'm returning to the spaceship to see what torture has befallen this SolidSnake fellow.
Choas=Where is LiquidSnake?
Delrith=LiquidSnake is part of SolidSnake's torture program.
Choas=Thats rich being beaten to near death by your stronger self...that will never happen to me Choas Son Of Lord Of Dragons.
Delrith=Thats right.I'm leaving defeat those rebels,and make me proud.
Choas=As you wish father.
*Delrith flys away from the location of Choas*
Choas=Of course I'll defeat them,but I want to make this defeat hurt...HAAAA...YOU HEAR ME PHOENIX!!!!
Meanwhile(inside the spacship)
?? ?? ??=[echo]YOU HERE ME PHOENIX....
Chuck=What was that?
Phoenix=It's.....It's Choas.
*Phoenix begins to tighten her fist and starts to walk towards the air hanger door*
Logan=Your going to distract him right?
Phoenix=No...I'm going to defeat him...
Everyone(Besides Phoenix= :shocked:
*Phoenix flys out the space ship to confront the vile dragon*
Phoenix=Choas!!! It ends here!
Choas=Bring it on Phoenix!
*Both begin to power up,and seem evenly matched...is this part of the plan*
Phoenix="Cry Of The Phoenix"
*Phoenix transforms into a large fire bird and fly's toward Choas*
Choas="Physco Chrusher Beam Assult"
*Choas begins to shot beams of energy from his eyes,and mouth that seem to cover the whole sky with a light show*
Choas=You can't surive this attack no one has.
Phoenix=We'll see....
*Everything turns blinding white*
Meanwhile(Inside the ship)
KHCloud=This is our chance to fly above the battle.
Chuck=Yea, Logan hurry up.
*Logan is staring at the battle betweem Phoenix,and Choas with aww*
Logan=Amazing how can a girl move so fast,and with so much force.
KHCloud=First she wasn't a normal girl to begin with secound there is a spirit in her body controling her called the "Phoenix."
Logan=I know all that KH stop trying to be a smart ass I'm just inpressed with that movement.
Chuck=Nah, you just think Phoenix is hot.
Logan=Alright, I'll fly this damn thing above the battle get the C4 ready.
KH/Chuck=Right!
Meanwhile(outside the ship)
Phoenix=*Weezing* That wasn't that bad for something with such bad hygene.
Choas=My breath isn't....HEY!!!.
Phoenix=Take this..(Throws some C4 at Choas)
Choas=Ahh what the..
*Choas evades the attack and counters so fast Phoenix could not detect his movements*
Choas="Choas Distroyer!!!!!!!"
*A beam flashes from the chest of the dragon,and aims head on for phoenix*
Phoenix=Uh Oh....ARGGGhhh.....
*Phoenix is hit by the blast and now APPEARS unconiscious,and is now falling downward*
Choas=I win...HAAHAA again.
*Choas swoops down and catches Phoenix*
Choas=I'm going to take you back with your friends...Hey wait a minute... :shocked: where are those rebels.
*Choas looks around,but fails to see the ship above his head*
Choas=Oh well I'll just bring back Phoenix,and show her to dad...then he'll tell me the coolest way to kill her..MHAAAAA
*Choas begins to fly away*
Phoenix=(Thinking=This better work...oh I better us telepathy to tell the gang I'm still alive.)
Meanwhile(Inside the ship)
Logan=Why didn't you launch out the C4?
KHCloud=Logan he had Phoenix captured if the explosives got him it would've gotten her too.
Chuck=Yea....
Logan=Well it doesn't matter if you had dropped the C4 down on Choas she's died anyway..
Chuck/KH= ???
*Inside everyone's mind they all hear a small voice*
?? ?? ??=Oh really you think I would die so easyily Logan?
Logan=dubya tee eff!
Chuck=Did you hear that KH.
KH=I heard it,and I don't like ghost.
?? ?? ??=It's me phoenix listen I'm still alive I'm using telepathy to contact you right.
Logan=Hmm telepathy.
Phoenix=Follow Choas and me to Lord Khan's space ship guys...I'm losing my connection...HURRY...*Connection broken*
Chuck=Phoenix!
Logan=We better hurry.
KH=Indeed.
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To be continued
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