Floetry/poetry thread - Singers,poets,writers gather.

[SBYRD5]

I'm afriad this isn't like the freestyle/flow/thread.

This is Floetry/Poetry.

Now what is Floetry.

It's R&B from the soul that his a style to it thats so real it brings life to the soul.Floetry yes true floetry can't be touched so I'm asking you if you have something be it a

Dream,
A Goal
Fantasy

Thats Floetic.


Poetry is a state of mind written on paper. True poetry doesn't have to rhyme or even make sense.

The purpose is to relief yourself of surpressing ideals...or thoughts so share them.

Be it positive or negative.

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
[color=purple:post_uid4][i:post_uid4][b:post_uid4] There is this young lady I know,
Her dreams are set high so if she falls she will fall among the stars,
Sometimes on her window she can feel the rain,

But her attitude to the pain is like a paintbrush that can change the color of the situation,
She may feel black and blue...but she always shows a passionate red,

Her humor often delights because of it's unexpectedness,
Humor may have a serious point,too,
About human weaknesses.
However, the serious point is usually buried under more than a few laughs.

But for now hatred is the poison and laughter is the remedy,
I suppose I'm her remedy.
She's very nice and kind like a little red riding hood.
She puts me in consideration like a snow man borrowing a hat.
So to me what she gives to me I try to comfort her back.

Composition....I guess two people through the same hurt can coup.
I suppose thats why our spirits seem to be on a similar flow,
I love her I'll never let her go.[/i:post_uid4][/color:post_uid4][/b:post_uid4]

(I'll really try to dig deep next time)



Edited By SBYRD5 on Dec. 26 2003 at 22:36

[SBYRD5]

No one cares huh.....lol :eh:

[Ludacris]

I have poems...........a bunch of poems...........but they all in french lol....... and I doubt U'll understand them :D

[Roll's Friend]

Dude I heard girls dig french man....I need to learn some.....so I can impress my girl..... :eh:

[darkmasterX]

i am hated for the monster i created
inside of me it has been waited and antisapated
all of your moves in a glance
its mind is so advance
one day i am gonna let it out
and its gonna screem and shout
and its gonna let some feelings out
i let it out today
it had alot of things to say
some of the things it said where mean some nice
so next time think twice
about what you say to me
now you seen the other side to me
now you see that i can be like ying and yang
one part good one part evil
watch the way you talk to me
cuz i might just let the evil out
show you what anger is all about...

SBYRD5: you got any more poems

[SBYRD5]

The heart is enriched in blue flames,
I've been poor and having eyes that are blinded by shame.
When I do open my eyes I can't see the skies I have glasses over my eyes.....

What I do see through this glass...
Is hate pain....and hearts black from green,
My passion is in orange....and my purity is like purple,

So divine the way life expands into so many directions,
All the while those in this life consider there fortunes to already be faded.

Never the conquences of those that commit the crimes there fortunes are already faded.

So why do we judge those that haven't even passed jusgement on themselves,

Society....is a bad varity...of foul morality

(THat was trash)



Edited By SBYRD5 on Jan. 02 2004 at 20:12

[marvel911]

Here is a song, that I give all credit to it's show..:
Can you name the truck with four wheel drive?

Smells like a steak and seats thirty-five!

Canyonero! (whip) Canyonero! (whip)

Well, it goes real slow with the hammer down,

It's a country-fried truck endorsed by a clown!

Canyoneroooo! Yah! (whip) (with singers) Canyonero! (whip)

(Announcer: the Federal Highway Commission has ruled the Canyonero unsafe for highway or city driving. )

Canyonero! (whip)

Twelve yards long, two lanes wide,

Sixty-five tons of American pride!

Canyonero! (whip) Canyonero! (whip)

Top of the line in utility sports,

Unexplained fires are a matter for the courts!

Canyonero! (whip) Canyonero! Yah! (whip)

She blinds everybody with her super-high beams,

She's a squirrel-squashing, deer-smackin', drivin' machine!

Canyonero! Yah! (whip) Canyonero! Yah! Yah! On,

Canyonero! Yah! Whoa, Canyonero! Whoa!
Thanks to the Simpsons..this song was brought to you today.

[SuperSonicX]

Feeling so emtpy inside
Like i lost all meaning to live
Things are become more and more
Hard for me to understand
I try and hold back
But cannot any longer
My sence of wats right
And wats wrong
Are now twisted
They both seem right to me
All the pain and regrets i must live with
Seem like it all happend yesterday
Deep down inside
I want to scream out
Cry out
Yet i cant
Something is holding me back
Lord knows i want to
Yet i cant
Maybe he is looking out for me
I hope so
Before i slip into....chaos

Im done...i use 2 be really good at write'n poems but i guess this one shows wat happend lol..

[Sportschick155]

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
Honey is Sweet
and so are U!



ohhhhhhhhhhh im good

[darkmasterX]

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
Honey is Sweet
and so are U!



ohhhhhhhhhhh im good
your real good :D

[Sportschick155]

:) ty

[SBYRD5]

Let's pretend for one night, I'm the man in your life
And we do the things that lovers do
All the loving u like
I give it to you just right
Theres nothing less than special when it comes to you
See what we have is understanding
That works so well for how we are
Cause neither ofus has the heart to fall in love all over again


Even though I'm not your man and I know you're not my girl
But let's just act like it's that way tonight
Now I know u got your friends and you know I got some too
But let's just act like you're my lady tonight

Now what I like about you
Is that you're always so cool and comfortable whenever I'm around
You're some one that I can talk too
No matter what I'm going through I call on you cuz I know you'll always be down
See what we have is so incredible
That we'll never find in anyone else
This thing that we share is so unbelievable
That I want you all to myself


Even though I'm not your man and I know you're not my girl
But let's just act like it's that way tonight
Now I know you got your friends and you know I got some too
But let's just act like you're my lady tonight

Oh, I know that we both have our separate lives
And we don't keep ties on each other
So you can have me
So that I can hold you until the morning comes
Then we can go back to how things was before

(Chorus)
Repeat 2 xs

Tonight
Tonight
Umm dada da badum, yeah

I like it (I like it)
I love it (I love it)
It feels good to me (it feels good to me)
So good to me (so good to me)



Edited By SBYRD5 on Jan. 04 2004 at 03:02

[SuperSonicX]

Why..why am i geting hurt so much
Wat did i do to deserve this
Why am i cursed like this
Its killin me inside
Everyday is like another poop
Always gotta put up wit ppl crap
Get mad at me for nothing
And yet callin me a jerk
Like is all my fault
Im sick of dat crap
The day when i find a gurl dat wont **** wit me
Dat will be a dream come true..........

[Bubble1]

heres 1 enspired by Aayne from Gatekeepers21

...Hustle and bustle tis the way of city life
It make me sick thinking of these morons.
I wish they'd all just leave.
Living inside me is a special gift,whose powers are unimaginable
People taken over an uncureable illness...hatred
For i must protect the fools from the ultimate nightmare..Death...
One day this power will eat me away like acid.
Tis the ultimate sacrifice.

I know it suks horribly. i never ever wrote anything good.All the ideas came from Gatekeeps21



Edited By Bubble1 on Jan. 05 2004 at 18:42

[Elena]

SByrD...Musiq Soulchild...I like that song then again i kind of like every song by him

[SBYRD5]

SByrD...Musiq Soulchild...I like that song then again i kind of like every song by him
Doesn't his songs make you feel .....I think it's odd I like his music....He's my favorite R&B artist and I think I got a style close to his...so yeah. :)

[darkmasterX]

musiq does make some hot songs like halfcrazy and love think thats the name of it