Moogle hunting thread - Kill the moogles! - Page 25

Roll · 10-14-2002, 07:46 PM

Sbyrd...
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*Roll was standing in front of the son of Balkar, and was now just looking at him. Roll was thinking of a way to stop him. Maybe a good swing with her Katana? No.... it had to be a stronger blow. Her limit Break, Slot!...*
Son of Balkar: Aaaahahahahahahahahaha! That limit break will have NO chance against me!
Roll: Wha- how did you know about the limit break?
Son of Balkar: I can read your mind, silly girl! You'll never win if I know what you're going to do!
Roll: We'll see about that! What if I DON'T think, huh?
SoB: Good luck.
Roll: Yeah yeah.
SoB: *chuckling* If you're not careful, you may be stung!
Roll: I got insurance.
SoB: Ou, you've got spice. Now let's... daintily.... give you pain!
Roll: Go for it!
SoB: Okie dokie! *He rushed, and hit Roll into a wall. She was damaged horribly, and couldn't walk normally now. Her side hurt a lot, and she had to hold it to be able to run or walk. She got up and ran away, and took her katana out. She eventually (without thinking...!) threw it into the air. SoB looked at it and laughed as it twirled in midair. It wouldn't be able to do anything at that hight, and Roll couldn't do anything with it being so far away. But then Roll thought of something faster than SoB could read (using a Limit Breaker X_x; ).*
Roll: Explode!
SoB: WHAT?!
*The Katana exploded, and the shards flew everywhere. They flew into the Son of Balkar, and he fell backwards. Roll smiled, and then turned around and looked at him. He seemed dead at the time, but he was alive, and well. He was just shocked, and he jumped up onto his feet*
SoB: I admit, you caught me with that one, so I'll give you a very large hint as a reward... We're inside your mind...
Roll: ...my... my mind? Wow... you'd think my mind would be more... exciting. Hey wait a minute. That explains why you could read my thoughts...
SoB: Finally go it eh? You're too slow...
Roll: Not really.. I mean, there was one thing you didn't think of.
SoB: I assure you, I know of all the tricks you can pull.. but go ahead, enlighten me.
Roll: *shy smile* You're in my mind.
SoB: I know. What's your poi- UUAAGHH!!! *was grabbed by Vines from underneath*
Roll: I control my mind. And there is nothing, and I mean NOTHING you can do to me in here that I can't counter. *gains a new weapon, called "Fusion"* Enjoy you're last moment, because you're never going to have one AGAIN!
SoB: Go ahead and kill me. You still will have one more threat. I mean, after all, this is ONLY your mind..
Roll: I don't care, because you lost YOURS! *stabs the sword through SoB's chest, and (somehow) he disappears along with the sword (Damnit!). Soon, a door appears out of no where, and hits Roll's foot.* Owies! Ou... where does this door lead too...*opens it, and is sucked through (AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRR

GH!) *

--in the real world--

*Roll started to open her eyes, only to see Piccolo get shot. She thought she was still dreaming, when there was an explosion that shot her forward, and gave her some pain.*
Roll:...that person... who was he? Why did he have to die... *tear*
Mind eater: Ahahahahahahahahaha! You shall all die! All living things shall die, as no one is a match for me! *Evil Laugh*
Roll: Shut UP!
Mind eater: huh?
Roll: SHUT UP! You killed some people, and I won't let you kill anymore, even if it means my own death!
Mind eater: (I'm sure it will...) Enjoy your last day on earth, HUMAN! *shoots a few ki beams at Roll*
Roll: No, you WON'T beat me like that! *Casts reflect, and reflects the blast at Mind eater, who just swallows them* (But how can I beat him? That man fell so easily.. and my reflect can only stand up for so long... and then again, I'm not exactly the strongest being ever... There must be a way..)
Mind Eater: You're very good... but not good enough! *begins to suck up the reflect*
Roll: (No WAY! Not fair...) *Looks around for something to use to help her; anything that she could use would be nice... and then she saw... Brooklyn and Nanaki laying on the ground unconcious. A tear was brought to her eye, and she was shocked. Then, suddenly remembering their message, and the message that Balkar gave her (Your heart is the key) she closed her eyes (At this point, the reflect was taken away, and another blast was sent at Roll, though, with little accuracy) and held her hands together in prayer. Gathering all of her thoughts and memories together for one final attack. She began to glow a blue aura, and also was floating in the air. She gathered her feelings and intentions, her love and anger, her strength and Ki, her knowledge and force, and finally her mind. She finally let her hands fall down to her sides, and a large Moon-like beam appeared behind her and just above her*
Roll: *whispers* Lonely Moon...

*The beam fell down very VERY slowly, and the mind Eater immediately jumped at Roll, only to be hit backwards by a strange barrier. The mind eater tried to eat the barrier away, but stopped, when it couldn't stand the feeling he got from it. He looked at the beam as it fell closer, and closer. He finally shot a beam at it, but it didn't do much. It only went into it and disappeared. It's speed increased though, and the Mind eater charged up all of it's MP and fired it ALL at the blast. The beams canceled each other out (with a large flash) when they met, and then Roll was back to normal, except that she had her final Limit Break up... it was just going to take some time to be able to use it...*
SSJKarma: (Is in Oozaru form) Rooaarr! (O.o

*SSJKarma seemed to know what was going on and attacked Mind Eater with all of his might (but then again... he might just be fighting the strongest fighter on the field..) and was firing Ki blasts, flailing his amrs and legs around, swinging his tail and hitting the Mind Eater Continuously. The Mind Eater was blocking, but couldn't block much longer. The attacks kept getting stronger, and stronger, until it finally broke through Mind eaters defence, and struck his HP status down. Mind eater, though (as he was being pummeled), attacked with a vine from his body, that cut SSJKarma's tail off. Before SSJKarma changed back (or even began to), he shot a large beam. It connected and depleted Mind Eaters HP so fast and well, that if it could've lasted about 1 minute longer, Mind Eater would have been dead. He finally regressed back to his normal self, and was on the ground. Mind eater grabbed SSJKarma and began to feed on his mind. But Roll had finished preparing her final Limit Break. She dashed at Mind eater, smiling, and performed Dankinken. She flew at Mind eater, continuing with her grin, and had a trail of Cherry blossoms behind her. She increased speed, and the Mind Eater tossed Karma aside, and was ready to counter. He shot a ki blast at the very last moment and hit Roll, but she just increased her speed. When she finally hit him, her arm went through his head. She took her arm out (GROSS-NESS!!) and stepped back. She looked at the Mind Eater as it froze and released some spirits. When it ceased to produce all of the spirits (including KHClouds), it fell over, dead, and Roll looked at it in triumph. She had defeated the monster.

>>10 minutes later<<

*Theme for this part... it's really good too!*
*Roll was shaking Brooklyn and Nanaki in an attempt to wake them up. SSJKarma was awake (and normal) and just straing at the monsters corpse. Roll was in tears and was very desperate and sad.*
Roll: Come on, guys, wake up! Wake up! Please wake up! Please don't leave me... I don't want to be alone anymore...
SSJKarma: ......KHCloud.....
Roll: *shaking harder* Please wake up! Please! I dont want you guys to leave me forever! Please wake up. Please.....
Nanaki: ..uh... Roll...?
Roll: *Hugs Nanaki immediately* You're alive! You don't know how happy I am to see you! But... Brooklyn... wake up... please... *still crying* wake up... for me?
SSJKarma: He is dead, girl. Give it up.
Roll: *Angered and still crying* No! He is not dead! I'll never let him be dead! Not even if I have to die for him to stay alive... *closes eyes as she hugs Brooklyn to herself* Please wake up... please... I....
Brooklyn: ...y...you what?...
Roll: You're alive! Oh my gosh, you don't know how happy I am! You are both alive! *Hugs them both and cries still, but out of happiness now.*
Brooklyn: ...hey... let's..go home now..ok?
Roll: Yeah.. *sniff* let's go. but this time *sniff* I'll take us home. *casts a new spell revolve and they all disappear in a flurry of Cherry blossoms. The cherry blossoms surrounded Goliath and Lexington, Hudson and Broadway, and SSJKarma too. They all disappeared and went back to their homes. Although, Roll stayed with Brooklyn and Nanaki and the other Gargoyles. They were all safe again, and maybe their lives could resume in a normal state... if that's possible.*

.mp3]Ending theme
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Yes, yes, I know, boring... but hey, if you think you can do better, you go for it! I mean, I am not the best writer in the world you know, and I am not going to write any good novels if I try. But, this isn't the end of the story.. yet. I plan to do the epilogue tomorrow.... when my eye finally heals (irl).

QUIET_KILLER · 10-15-2002, 04:48 PM

I give this girl named roll the thumbs award for making some long story :biggrin: It was also very interesting.I do wonder will sbyrd come back to help write and direct a story like this of epic proportions :lol: :biggrin: Sigh*I must have missed out on my store manager part but oh well.Some people were kind enough to mention that.Cough*I just hope one of them does another topic like this one.Also by the way I did enjoy readin this moogle business.Also could I get a possible part in the next one plz :biggrin:

TJ5 · 10-15-2002, 05:21 PM

Ok so ummmm I had my story going on still so what bad guy didnt die so I can kill them ?

lain:

Roll · 10-15-2002, 08:25 PM

They all did, Tj. So no more fighting! I'm going to write the epilogue soon... Oh, I hope you guys will enjoy it. I've spent 56 hours on it, so far. But that's probably because I was never satisfied with the ideas.. But dun worry. It'll be very interesting for everyone! ^-^

SSJKarma · 10-15-2002, 09:06 PM

i had so much idea to finish the whole thing up !
but your ending is just great and i guess i couldn't have done better !

anyway, i'll had something else to finish the story !
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*AFTER THE CREDITS*
BALKAR (standing where his son died):"at last !"
*2 giant ANGEL WINGS got out of him*
BALKAR:"i can now finally rest. thank you to all"
ROLL(after hearing the distant voice of Balkar):"hope you'll get your redemption"
NANAKI:"who are you talking to ?"
Roll:"no one !"
*as roll look at the MAGNIFICIENT blue sky, the screen fades out*

Roll · 10-16-2002, 01:56 PM

Epilogue moved to page 26. Go there if you want the REAL epilogue, and not the cut up one that was totally misplaced due to problems in the forum. Also, some of the links aren't working due to AngelFire not allowing Direct Linking. You'll all have to type in the urls for some of the links. If that is the case, do NOT look on until you get the link to work. Other wise, you've ruined the story. And make sure you listen to the whole song provided. It's essential to the epilogue.

mysticveggeto · 10-16-2002, 02:03 PM

wow good story thats was happy ending you guys should get an award you guys are magnifasent give around and aplose clap clap clap clap clap clap

Roll · 10-16-2002, 02:15 PM

lain: go away.

SiLent_BoB · 10-16-2002, 03:04 PM

hey thats a nice happy ending...but since im an evil guy(not really

) I want to use my character as the new villian,but only if its ok with you guys...but if you don't want to add on to the story.then im ok with that I'll just create my own.

TJ5 · 10-16-2002, 07:19 PM

Nice epilogue roll....

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10-14-2002, 07:46 PM	#241
Roll Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 2,647 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Sbyrd... ------------------------------------------------------------ Roll was standing in front of the son of Balkar, and was now just looking at him. Roll was thinking of a way to stop him. Maybe a good swing with her Katana? No.... it had to be a stronger blow. Her limit Break, Slot!... Son of Balkar: Aaaahahahahahahahahaha! That limit break will have NO chance against me! Roll: Wha- how did you know about the limit break? Son of Balkar: I can read your mind, silly girl! You'll never win if I know what you're going to do! Roll: We'll see about that! What if I DON'T think, huh? SoB: Good luck. Roll: Yeah yeah. SoB: chuckling If you're not careful, you may be stung! Roll: I got insurance. SoB: Ou, you've got spice. Now let's... daintily.... give you pain! Roll: Go for it! SoB: Okie dokie! He rushed, and hit Roll into a wall. She was damaged horribly, and couldn't walk normally now. Her side hurt a lot, and she had to hold it to be able to run or walk. She got up and ran away, and took her katana out. She eventually (without thinking...!) threw it into the air. SoB looked at it and laughed as it twirled in midair. It wouldn't be able to do anything at that hight, and Roll couldn't do anything with it being so far away. But then Roll thought of something faster than SoB could read (using a Limit Breaker X_x; ). Roll: Explode! SoB: WHAT?! The Katana exploded, and the shards flew everywhere. They flew into the Son of Balkar, and he fell backwards. Roll smiled, and then turned around and looked at him. He seemed dead at the time, but he was alive, and well. He was just shocked, and he jumped up onto his feet SoB: I admit, you caught me with that one, so I'll give you a very large hint as a reward... We're inside your mind... Roll: ...my... my mind? Wow... you'd think my mind would be more... exciting. Hey wait a minute. That explains why you could read my thoughts... SoB: Finally go it eh? You're too slow... Roll: Not really.. I mean, there was one thing you didn't think of. SoB: I assure you, I know of all the tricks you can pull.. but go ahead, enlighten me. Roll: shy smile You're in my mind. SoB: I know. What's your poi- UUAAGHH!!! was grabbed by Vines from underneath Roll: I control my mind. And there is nothing, and I mean NOTHING you can do to me in here that I can't counter. gains a new weapon, called "Fusion" Enjoy you're last moment, because you're never going to have one AGAIN! SoB: Go ahead and kill me. You still will have one more threat. I mean, after all, this is ONLY your mind.. Roll: I don't care, because you lost YOURS! stabs the sword through SoB's chest, and (somehow) he disappears along with the sword (Damnit!). Soon, a door appears out of no where, and hits Roll's foot. Owies! Ou... where does this door lead too...opens it, and is sucked through (AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRR GH!) --in the real world-- Roll started to open her eyes, only to see Piccolo get shot. She thought she was still dreaming, when there was an explosion that shot her forward, and gave her some pain. Roll:...that person... who was he? Why did he have to die... tear Mind eater: Ahahahahahahahahaha! You shall all die! All living things shall die, as no one is a match for me! Evil Laugh Roll: Shut UP! Mind eater: huh? Roll: SHUT UP! You killed some people, and I won't let you kill anymore, even if it means my own death! Mind eater: (I'm sure it will...) Enjoy your last day on earth, HUMAN! shoots a few ki beams at Roll Roll: No, you WON'T beat me like that! Casts reflect, and reflects the blast at Mind eater, who just swallows them (But how can I beat him? That man fell so easily.. and my reflect can only stand up for so long... and then again, I'm not exactly the strongest being ever... There must be a way..) Mind Eater: You're very good... but not good enough! begins to suck up the reflect Roll: (No WAY! Not fair...) Looks around for something to use to help her; anything that she could use would be nice... and then she saw... Brooklyn and Nanaki laying on the ground unconcious. A tear was brought to her eye, and she was shocked. Then, suddenly remembering their message, and the message that Balkar gave her (Your heart is the key) she closed her eyes (At this point, the reflect was taken away, and another blast was sent at Roll, though, with little accuracy) and held her hands together in prayer. Gathering all of her thoughts and memories together for one final attack. She began to glow a blue aura, and also was floating in the air. She gathered her feelings and intentions, her love and anger, her strength and Ki, her knowledge and force, and finally her mind. She finally let her hands fall down to her sides, and a large Moon-like beam appeared behind her and just above her Roll: whispers Lonely Moon... The beam fell down very VERY slowly, and the mind Eater immediately jumped at Roll, only to be hit backwards by a strange barrier. The mind eater tried to eat the barrier away, but stopped, when it couldn't stand the feeling he got from it. He looked at the beam as it fell closer, and closer. He finally shot a beam at it, but it didn't do much. It only went into it and disappeared. It's speed increased though, and the Mind eater charged up all of it's MP and fired it ALL at the blast. The beams canceled each other out (with a large flash) when they met, and then Roll was back to normal, except that she had her final Limit Break up... it was just going to take some time to be able to use it... SSJKarma: (Is in Oozaru form) Rooaarr! (O.o SSJKarma seemed to know what was going on and attacked Mind Eater with all of his might (but then again... he might just be fighting the strongest fighter on the field..) and was firing Ki blasts, flailing his amrs and legs around, swinging his tail and hitting the Mind Eater Continuously. The Mind Eater was blocking, but couldn't block much longer. The attacks kept getting stronger, and stronger, until it finally broke through Mind eaters defence, and struck his HP status down. Mind eater, though (as he was being pummeled), attacked with a vine from his body, that cut SSJKarma's tail off. Before SSJKarma changed back (or even began to), he shot a large beam. It connected and depleted Mind Eaters HP so fast and well, that if it could've lasted about 1 minute longer, Mind Eater would have been dead. He finally regressed back to his normal self, and was on the ground. Mind eater grabbed SSJKarma and began to feed on his mind. But Roll had finished preparing her final Limit Break. She dashed at Mind eater, smiling, and performed Dankinken. She flew at Mind eater, continuing with her grin, and had a trail of Cherry blossoms behind her. She increased speed, and the Mind Eater tossed Karma aside, and was ready to counter. He shot a ki blast at the very last moment and hit Roll, but she just increased her speed. When she finally hit him, her arm went through his head. She took her arm out (GROSS-NESS!!) and stepped back. She looked at the Mind Eater as it froze and released some spirits. When it ceased to produce all of the spirits (including KHClouds), it fell over, dead, and Roll looked at it in triumph. She had defeated the monster. >>10 minutes later<< Theme for this part... it's really good too!* Roll was shaking Brooklyn and Nanaki in an attempt to wake them up. SSJKarma was awake (and normal) and just straing at the monsters corpse. Roll was in tears and was very desperate and sad. Roll: Come on, guys, wake up! Wake up! Please wake up! Please don't leave me... I don't want to be alone anymore... SSJKarma: ......KHCloud..... Roll: shaking harder Please wake up! Please! I dont want you guys to leave me forever! Please wake up. Please..... Nanaki: ..uh... Roll...? Roll: Hugs Nanaki immediately You're alive! You don't know how happy I am to see you! But... Brooklyn... wake up... please... still crying wake up... for me? SSJKarma: He is dead, girl. Give it up. Roll: Angered and still crying No! He is not dead! I'll never let him be dead! Not even if I have to die for him to stay alive... closes eyes as she hugs Brooklyn to herself Please wake up... please... I.... Brooklyn: ...y...you what?... Roll: You're alive! Oh my gosh, you don't know how happy I am! You are both alive! Hugs them both and cries still, but out of happiness now. Brooklyn: ...hey... let's..go home now..ok? Roll: Yeah.. sniff let's go. but this time sniff I'll take us home. casts a new spell revolve and they all disappear in a flurry of Cherry blossoms. The cherry blossoms surrounded Goliath and Lexington, Hudson and Broadway, and SSJKarma too. They all disappeared and went back to their homes. Although, Roll stayed with Brooklyn and Nanaki and the other Gargoyles. They were all safe again, and maybe their lives could resume in a normal state... if that's possible. .mp3]Ending theme ------------------------------------------------------------ Yes, yes, I know, boring... but hey, if you think you can do better, you go for it! I mean, I am not the best writer in the world you know, and I am not going to write any good novels if I try. But, this isn't the end of the story.. yet. I plan to do the epilogue tomorrow.... when my eye finally heals (irl). __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Hikaru-2.jpg[/img:sig_uid] Perhaps.. I've overstayed my welcome..

10-15-2002, 04:48 PM	#242
QUIET_KILLER Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Matrix Universe Dimension F Posts: 1,370 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	I give this girl named roll the thumbs award for making some long story :biggrin: It was also very interesting.I do wonder will sbyrd come back to help write and direct a story like this of epic proportions :lol: :biggrin: SighI must have missed out on my store manager part but oh well.Some people were kind enough to mention that.CoughI just hope one of them does another topic like this one.Also by the way I did enjoy readin this moogle business.Also could I get a possible part in the next one plz :biggrin: __________________ Game Name:Quiet Killer/Mission Help Every and Any one in the Community/New emoticon master and quoter! www.maximumspider.com need help?http://nosoul4evr.cyberfuturism.com

10-15-2002, 05:21 PM	#243
TJ5 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Alone training to be the best sword fighter! Posts: 1,407 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Ok so ummmm I had my story going on still so what bad guy didnt die so I can kill them ? lain: __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://free.7host03.com/Tommy5/TJ5-misfits.jpg[/img:sig_uid] "Some run and hide. Some stand and fight. Which are you ?"

10-15-2002, 08:25 PM	#244
Roll Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 2,647 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	They all did, Tj. So no more fighting! I'm going to write the epilogue soon... Oh, I hope you guys will enjoy it. I've spent 56 hours on it, so far. But that's probably because I was never satisfied with the ideas.. But dun worry. It'll be very interesting for everyone! ^-^ __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Hikaru-2.jpg[/img:sig_uid] Perhaps.. I've overstayed my welcome..

10-15-2002, 09:06 PM	#245
SSJKarma Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Canada somewhere in the province of quebec Posts: 5,445 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	i had so much idea to finish the whole thing up ! but your ending is just great and i guess i couldn't have done better ! anyway, i'll had something else to finish the story ! ---------------------------------------------------- AFTER THE CREDITS BALKAR (standing where his son died):"at last !" 2 giant ANGEL WINGS got out of him BALKAR:"i can now finally rest. thank you to all" ROLL(after hearing the distant voice of Balkar):"hope you'll get your redemption" NANAKI:"who are you talking to ?" Roll:"no one !" as roll look at the MAGNIFICIENT blue sky, the screen fades out __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://membres.lycos.fr/imagesforum/Banner.gif[/img:sig_uid] "How did you escape my grasp ? no matter, i'll crush you now !" -DB : Lost Soul My Web Site http://membres.lycos.fr/xmvssf/

10-16-2002, 01:56 PM	#246
Roll Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 2,647 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Epilogue moved to page 26. Go there if you want the REAL epilogue, and not the cut up one that was totally misplaced due to problems in the forum. Also, some of the links aren't working due to AngelFire not allowing Direct Linking. You'll all have to type in the urls for some of the links. If that is the case, do NOT look on until you get the link to work. Other wise, you've ruined the story. And make sure you listen to the whole song provided. It's essential to the epilogue. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Hikaru-2.jpg[/img:sig_uid] Perhaps.. I've overstayed my welcome..

10-16-2002, 02:03 PM	#247
mysticveggeto Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 459 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	wow good story thats was happy ending you guys should get an award you guys are magnifasent give around and aplose clap clap clap clap clap clap __________________ marvel could all burn in hell oh and stan and marvel could eat shit to :biggrin:

10-16-2002, 02:15 PM	#248
Roll Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 2,647 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	lain: go away. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Hikaru-2.jpg[/img:sig_uid] Perhaps.. I've overstayed my welcome..

10-16-2002, 03:04 PM	#249
SiLent_BoB Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 224 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	hey thats a nice happy ending...but since im an evil guy(not really ) I want to use my character as the new villian,but only if its ok with you guys...but if you don't want to add on to the story.then im ok with that I'll just create my own.

10-16-2002, 07:19 PM	#250
TJ5 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Alone training to be the best sword fighter! Posts: 1,407 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Nice epilogue roll.... __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://free.7host03.com/Tommy5/TJ5-misfits.jpg[/img:sig_uid] "Some run and hide. Some stand and fight. Which are you ?"