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Zegar: "That's quite a sword Tudeki. You saved our hides."
Mizuki: "I'd say." Tacq: "You know Tudeki, I've heard of a sword much like yours. The powers from your sword match the description explained to me. He said the sword was created over 1000 years ago, by Suko the goddess of war. I also have heard it only works in the hands of her desendants." Jopia: "Cool!" Tudeki: "....." Tacq: "What else have you been hiding from us?" Tudeki: "....." Tacq: "What do you want with us?" Tudeki: "I guess I have something to tell you. The one who killed my father, the one you call Duraga... is a servant of the underworld, he is seeking out all of the greatest warriors on the planet... he is on a mission to kill anyone with significant powers. The lord of the underworld is trying to take over the planet. Duraga already killed my father, and brother..." Tacq: "This is not good news, but why are you here with us?" Tudeki: "After I killed the man who attacked my village, and killed my mother... I saw a spirit that told me to come to Thonia, the rest has come to me like a forgotten memory." Zegar: "But what is at Lake Kasp?" Tudeki: "I'm not sure." Mizuki: "We aren't far, we shall find out soon enough." Tacq: "A Trap?" Tudeki: "Almost certain, but I think he is there for some other reason as well." Mizuki: "I love traps!" Zegar: ":shocked: you scare me sometimes." Mizuki: " :laugh: " Jopia: "But wait... why did you bring me along...?" Tudeki: "When you bumped into me I saw my brothers face on you... and I sensed something amazing." Tacq: "If you are of Suko's Bloodline, why aren't you extremly stronger than us?" Tudeki: "I just found out the swords secret powers not long ago, my father never knew. I have no where near mastered the swords abilities, It holds a very amazing power... it is extremely hard to control. I wish I had more time to practice, perhaps the previous fights will have had some effect." Tacq: "You seemed to control the magic quite well... but from what I've heard, the sword has the ability to defeat anything in the right hands, man or god." Tudeki: "I'm far away from that..." Zegar: "You are young, give yourself more credit." Jopia: "Yeah, remember what you told me!" Mizuki: "That's a good wolfie, here's a treat." Corona: "Woof woof!" Tacq: "Hahahaha, Mizuki pay attention.... :laugh:." Mizuki: "What? Corona wanted a treat!" Zegar: "I'd say this is a little more important than feeding rover.... :angry: " Tudeki: "We should get going, time is wasting." Tacq: "Agreed." <Narrator> With new found information, the gang is now on a journey to save the planet! Find out what happens next, in the next EXCITING post!!! </Narrator>
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[ooc].....I was gonna say something, but I forgot what I was going to say.[/ooc]
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[OOC] Don't need to critique the new post, it brought much more excitement to the story. And a much more in-depth story plot. Oh yeah, stop using your banners in OOC posts
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[OOC]not gonna say anything as it is clear that you won't do a single thing about your character ! anyway... here it goes.[/OOC]
ZEGAR:{that guy is still following us ! why is he like that ?} MIZUKI:"you seem lost in your thought zegar, is there something on your mind ?" ZEGAR:"..." MIZUKI:"have it your way then !" *zegar looks above and to his sides* ZEGAR:{nothing, what's so special about this place ? i mean duraga wouldn't come in here without any reason !} TACQ:"here we are, the lake and its vast forest !" TUDEKI:"i heard that forest had dangerous creatures !" JOPIA:"but we have you to protect us !" TUDEKI:"..." TACQ:"everyone needs help at a time or another. let's camp here. night is coming fast and we still don't have any plans incase everything goes wrong !" ZEGAR:"with my experience on the battlefield, i must say it is NEVER going according to plan !" MIZUKI:"good night everyone" *and the gang goes to sleep* ZEGAR:{what is this all about ? what is my fate anyway ? i use to know it for sure, but i am just hesitating right now, why is that so ?5 days ago, i would have killed anyone if i had a problems with them, now i am... having feelings i never had before. what does that mean ?} ZEGAR:"blade of vengeance, guard this place and attack anything that goes to near us" BLADE:"yes, my lord !" *the blade execute the order !* ZEGAR:{hope everything will goes right this night !}
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Tudeki, and Zegar wake at the same time.... realizing that Mizuki is missing.
Zegar: "Can you sense her?" Tudeki: "Hmmm.... no. I just woke up Give me a few minutes."Zegar: "...." Tudeki: "Oh, you're ready for everything the minute you wake up??" Zegar: "Pretty much." Tudeki: "Well, maybe when I'm an old geezer, I'll have the same ability." Zegar: "I hear something...." Mizuki: "Stop fooling around you two, I was just getting some extra food." Tudeki: "Well, it's time to get up anyways... GET UP YOU TWO!!" Tacq: "WHAT?! We under attack??" Mizuki: :laughlong: Jopia: (In a half-asleep quiet voice) "What's going on Tudeki, are we under attack?" Tacq: "No, they must be irritating each other... and are passing it along. Damn you Tudeki and Zegar, I'm tired!" Tudeki: "We must get up, since it seems that Duraga is just waiting for us there, let's get some training in before we get going." Mizuki: "Sounds like a good idea, I also caught a couple of rabbits, and found a wide variety of nuts, berries, and edible roots. Can you cook, Jopia?" Jopia: "Yes, I can." Tudeki: "Good Jopia, you cook the meal... I'll train alone, after we eat, I'll train you." Zegar: "Tudeki, let's train together." Tudeki: "Sure, but I need some time alone too." So the gang gets up, and gets started on their training. Jopia: "I wish they made Tacq cook... I have to sit here by myself and cook these damn rabbits and roots. Atleast I have these walnuts to snack on :sly: " Tudeki: "Let's run another few minutes." Zegar: "Ok." Tudeki: "Can you keep up old man? "Zegar: "Come on, stop with the old man garbage." Tudeki: :laugh: Zegar: "Enough running. Now we really train." Tudeki: "Hmmm... Want to go weaponless first?" Zegar: "Of course." And so the fighting commenses! Tudeki: "I know I'm far quicker than you, but let's see who can hit harder." Tudeki gives Zegar a kick to the chest, pushing him back several feet. Zegar comes back, punching Tudeki in the face. Tudeki: "Good one" *grabs face* "Real good." Tudeki hits Zegar with multiple quick kicks to the face, followed by a double fist thrust to his stomach. Zegar: *coughs* Zegar lands a left jab, followed by a right cross, a left hook to the body, and a right uppercut to his jaw. Tudeki flies landing straight on his back Tudeki: "Oh my." Zegar: "Heh. I told you I'm no old man." Tudeki: "Ok, good spar... I think I should go weapon train alone, we might kill just each other..." Zegar: "Ok, I just hope we don't have to fight again some day." Tudeki: *Grabs his chin* "Agreed." Tudeki runs off. Zegar: {I can't believe how strong he is, I almost puked all over the place on that last hit.} "I hope we all live through this, so I can see that kid reach his potential." Tudeki: "How is the food coming along Jopia?" Jopia: "It's gonna be a while. What happened to you?!" Tudeki: "That geezer can really throw a punch..." Jopia: "I'd say." Tudeki: "Well, it's time for me to practice with my sword. I'll be back when the food is done." Tudeki runs off. He pulls out his katana. His sword becomes surronded with blue flames, and he stops in front of a big tree. Tudeki: *Slashes the tree* The slice goes all the way through the tree. And it falls over. Tudeki Slices the trunk into many smaller pieces, he lifts his sword, and the pieces go flying in the air. Jopia: "I really want to train, this is boring... What the heck?" The pieces of wood land all around Jopia, scattered. Jopia: *gets hit in the head with a piece of wood* "Oww!!" *grabs his head, and rubs it* Tacq: "Hey Tudeki...." Tudeki: "What?" Tacq: "Took me a while to find you, maybe I can help you." Tudeki: "How?" Tacq: "Well, I know of the magics the sword posseses, maybe if I explain them to you, you can use them." Tudeki: "Ok..." Tacq: "Well, what do you know so far?" Tudeki: "Well, I can do the blue ice... blue fire, blue lightning...." Tacq: "Is blue your favorite color? hahaha." Tudeki: "No, umm... the green spirit blast thingy." Tacq: "Well, there are alot more..." Tudeki: "How many??" Tacq: "Alot." Tudeki: "Ok, what's left?" Tacq: "Hmm... let's see... There's red shooting flames... yellow lightning from the sky. Umm... white spheres that cure..." Tudeki: "Let's try the cure thing first." Tacq: "Well, you're supposed to be able to feel out the magic, just get the one that makes the sword glow white. Tudeki holds his sword out, and goes into meditation. Tacq: "Hmm, what else was there... oh yeah, the white blizzard, and orangey-pink colored beam of super hot energy. That's all I know of." Tudeki's sword turns white. Tudeki: "I got it!!" *A bright glowing sphere comes out his sword* Tacq: "Ok, make the sphere fly into you." Tudeki: "Ok... Here goes." The sphere flies into Tudeki, and his cuts and bruises from his fight with Zegar vanish. Tacq: "Amazing." Tudeki: "Agreed. Whats next?" Tacq: "Try the sky lightning." Tudeki: "Ok..." About an hour later.... Tacq: "There's just one more left, the beam. Tudeki: "Ok." Tacq: {This is the most powerful one I've heard of, I wonder if Tudeki can even control it.} Tudeki, this one's strong, if you lose control.... Tudeki: "..." Tacq: "The beam doesn't stop, it will keep going foward if you can't control it. shoot it upwards." Tudeki: "Ok." Tudeki holds his sword straight up, and returns to his meditation. Minutes later- Tudeki: "Got it!" *his sword starts glowing orange.* The sword becomes too hot for Tudeki, and just as the beam starts he drops the sword. Tacq: "NO!!!!" The beam comes flying out of the sword and travels foward at a fast pace, leaving holes in big trees, and knocking down small ones. Tacq: "Look at what you've done!!" Tudeki: "Can I stop it?" Tacq: "Grab the sword!!!" Tudeki takes hold of his sword, it is still burning hot, and he winces in pain. Tacq: "Pull the beam up!" Tudeki's sword glows bright again. He struggles to raise the beam. Tacq: "PULL IT UP!!!" Tudeki angles the beam up slightly, and it slowly rises into the sky. Tacq: "......" Tudeki: "It was burning hot!" *shows Tacq his hands* Tudeki's hands are smoldered, and bleeding bad. Tacq: "You can just use the healing spheres.... who knows what kind of damage you've done now!!" Tudeki: ![]() Tacq: "No use feeling sorry for yourself now, heal your hands." Tudeki uses the curing spheres on himself. healing his hands. Tacq: "Go back and see the others, I'll see if anyone got hurt." Tudeki runs back to camp. <Narrator> Has anyone been hurt by the wildly misaimed beam? How is the training coming along for the others? Is the food ready yet?! Find out in the next exciting post! </Narrator>
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[ooc]I'll take care of this part, since you obviously think the world is supposed to be shaped to your liking. Plus, you're still making him Super Human with everything. Able to sense spirits... special powers... super strength greater than Zegars?[/ooc]
When Tudeki arrived at the camp, he saw Jopia lying on the ground, with Mizuki looking at him. She suddenly looked up an saw Tudeki. Mizuki: "What did you guys DO!" Tudeki: "Well...I..uh.." Mizuki: "Jopia could've been killed if that beam didn't miss him. Luckily for you, the beam hit the ground, which exploded and hit him heavily." Tudeki: "....." Mizuki: "Learn to be more careful. You might end up killing Jopia!" Tudeki: "....." Mizuki: "Ugh.....if you have nothing to say about this, then go back to training. Obviously you need work on a lot of things, like the seriousness of a weapon or attack." Tudeki: "But...." Mizuki: "GO!" Tudeki: "....." Tudeki finally left Mizuki alone with Jopia. After Tudeki left, Mizuki used a gypsy herb on Jopia, and as he lay unconcious, he healed slowly. [ooc] This is what happens when you make yourself all too powerful. With extreme magic swords, and Strength greater than everyone, and higher speed along with Vitality and Defence, you made yourself way too strong. Because of that, penalties will be happening to you because of Luck, which no one can raise at all. Only a specific few have high luck ratings.[/ooc]
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[OOC]He's not stronger than Zegar, Zegar kicked his ass in a hand to hand fight.[/OOC]
Tudeki: {I can't believe I hurt Jopia... How could I have done this.} {I guess I can't control the beam at all yet, only part of it went up....}Tudeki passes out in the woods from the exhaustion of his training, and from his sorrow of hurting his friend. Hours later- Tacq: *Splashes water on Tudeki* "Get up Tudeki, follow me." Tudeki: *gets up slowly* "What now?" Tacq: "Jopia woke up, he wants you." Tudeki: "Ok." When they get back- Tudeki: "Hey Jopia, are you ok?" Jopia: "Yeah, Mizuki took care of me." Mizuki: "You shouldn't try to do magic you can't control Tudeki!" Tudeki: "I know, but I was just testing it out." Tacq: "It's my fault really, I shouldn't have told him to try out something I thought he couldn't control yet." Mizuki: "Be careful next time... If that beam didn't split at the last minute, he'd be dead." Jopia: "It's ok, you didn't mean to do it." Tudeki: "I'm sorry." ![]() Jopia: "I'm ok Tudeki, can you train me now?" Mizuki: "You're still hurt." Tacq: "Use the Spheres." Mizuki: "Spheres?" Tudeki: "Ok..." *Tudeki's sword turns white, and a white glowing sphere comes out of it, and it flies into Jopia.* Jopia: "Wow!! The pain is gone!" Tacq: {I have a feeling these powers are taking more out of him than he knows...} "Tudeki, when you use the magic from your sword, do you feel weak afterwards?" Tudeki: "No... only after the beam." Tacq: "Don't use more power than you can handle, or it will take a toll on you." Tudeki: "Ok. I understand... I'm not strong enough yet to use the stronger spells without exhausting myself, right?" Tacq: "Seems to be so... just don't push it. Don't use the hard to control spells, especially the beam unless it's absolutely necessary..." Tudeki: "Ok, got it. Jopia, ready?" Jopia: "Yes I am." Tacq: "We have to find Zegar, and discuss some things, meet back here in an hour" <Narrator>What do they have to discuss? Will Jopia be up to the training? Find out in the next exciting post!</Narrator>
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[OOC] good idea roll, still i can kick his ass better then that ! [/OOC]
ZEGAR:"no need to find me, i was here even before the blast came in" MIZUKI:"i didn't saw you" ZEGAR:"i was over there, trying to figure out what kind of trap duraga is preparing for us ! glad my sword came in to help, or jopia would have had the beam head on" MIZUKI:"your sword ? it's your sowrd who deflected the blast !" *zegar start to explain a few things* *the screen blurs into memory of the past* zegar:"i was there during the night, i couldn't get to sleep knowing duraga's forces could have attacked us anytimes. so i asked my blade to protect this place" *zegar shows a giant drawn circle on the ground* Zegar:"so my blade protects whoever is inside. when the blast came in, my sword powered-up enough to deflect it, but the blast was too strong and the blast hitted the ground." *blurring back into the present* zegar:"but now my balde has to recharge her strenght. i have to let rest a little" *shows his blade hanging on his side* tacq:"that explain the strange energy i felt" tacq:{i know that kind of energy, it was used by BLACK MAGICIAN who wanted to rule this universe 5000 years ago. that kind of power couldn't be controlled, but he seems to know everthing about the blade. does that mean... i should learn more about that legend. i sens a terrible fate for him !} *tacq wasn't alone to be like that, mizuki seemed to have sensed it too* Jopia`:"does that mean we don't have any protection from now on ?" ZEGAR:"i'm afraid so ! we'll have to rely on each other for the next hours ! thanks to you tudeki, i now have to fight without my blade !" ------------------------------------------------------- action reaction TANTUM, you did an action, you made the reaction became worst then it were !
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[ooc]I could make it worse...but, I dunno. I think you've done enough already.[/ooc]
Mizuki looked at what she was cooking. So far, it seemed to be ok. The boys had ran off to have some fun, and she stayed behind to cook. Secretly, though, Mizuki was also practicing her magic and reading up on some spells and the histories of them. Today, she has engrossed herself in her book about the magics of the Water Sphere. While reading it, she stirs the pot of soup as it slowly cooks to it's best temperature. Suddenly, Mizuki's eyes go wide. She looks from the book, to the pot, and again to the book. Suddenly, Mizuki says some strange words, and the fire underneath the pot goes out. Mizuki looked into the pot, and saw that it was still boiling. She watched for 2 minutes...5 minutes... 12 minutes.... and finally at 30 minutes, Mizuki stopped looking at it, and she said some other strange words. Suddenly, the water stopped boiling. Mizuki looked around. She saw a couple of birds in the trees, chirping some song that was heard by only those who listened deeply enough. Mizuki also saw Corona laying by a bed of flowers, sleeping to his hearts content. At this she smiled and finally muttered another few words. Suddenly, a small bubble came out of her hand, and expanded itself. It expanded so large, that it covered the entire camp site. She walked out of the bubble, and hit it. It just shook for a second, and then went back to normal. Satisfied, Mizuki went back in, and finished the cooking. In about five minutes the boys came back. They looked at the bubble, and called for Mizuki. Mizuki rushed over to them, and saw their peril. They pushed, kicked, slashed, and punched, but nothing allowed them to go through. Mizuki went outside the bubble, cut a hole out, and closed the hole up when they entered. Mizuki smiled at them as they asked what it was. Mizuki: "It's a little water barrier I created with my magic. I think it should protect us..." Zegar: "Good. Because my sword still needs to rest, and so do we." Tacq: "I'm starved! What's for supper?" Mizuki: "Hm? Oh, we're having Soup!" Tudeki: "I was kinda in the mood for meat.. but.. this should do." Mizuki: "If you want meat, you'll have to hunt for it, and since it is getting late, I do NOT want you going out." Tudeki: "I can take care of myself..." Jopia: "Yeah!" Mizuki: "He sure didn't show it when he used the magic... whether Tacq suggested it or not. He should've known. Besides... I don't need him running off to get killed by who knows what. We have enough problems already." Underneath Mizuki's kimono, the pendant she wore was glowing a bright blue color. Unseen by everyone else, Mizuki knew she had completed her basic training under the water sphere, and was now able to do some basic healing, water-based magic attacks, and basic protection... [ooc]Finally.. I really am reading about these things, and I just finished that section. I'm moving onto the intermediate water sphere spells. I've been bored lately.[/ooc]
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Tudeki: "After we rest, we must go to Duraga."
Mizuki: "I don't think you should be giving orders anymore, seeing how you put everyone in danger." Tudeki: "I don't think it's up to any of us. Things are the way they will be. I'm not in control of what's going on, but the information I'm getting from Suko in my 'flashbacks' is all we have to go on." Tacq: "I agree, Tudeki is the only reason we know where Duraga is, and what's going on." Jopia: "I'll follow you to Lake Kasp Tudeki." Zegar: "Tacq is right Tudeki has all the information we have to go on." Mizuki: :angry: "Fine, but I'm still mad that you put us in danger for no reason." Tacq: "It wasn't for no reason. If Tudeki was able to control the beam, we could have killed Duraga from here!" Mizuki: "I guess you're right..." Tudeki: "Besides, I was going to shoot it straight up, but I dropped the sword at the last second, due to the extreme heat the beam created." Tacq: "He tried to pull the beam back up, but it was no use..." Zegar: "Luckily my sword deflected it" ![]() Mizuki: "Yeah, I guess you're right, but be careful next time." Tudeki: "I will, I don't plan on using that thing ever again." Tacq: "Well, we must go to sleep now, Good night." The gang goes to sleep. <Narrator>Will anything happen during the night? Find out in the next exciting post!</Narrator> [OOC] My guy is not physically the strongest(Zegar is), nor does he have the most vitality(Who does? Zegar??). He is the fastest, and thus has good defense... He also has the sword which gives him all those neat powers. But no one is dwarfed by Tudeki's power like you make it sound. It takes him a long time to pull off the powerful spells, and those ones drain him. Besides, I'm spicing things up alot with all the new stuff I added i.e. the story about Suko and the sword. And the part about Duraga becoming a servant for Lord of the underworld who is trying to rid the world of powerful fighters.[/OOC]
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