An actual rp! - An open rp for the actual rpers...

[Roll]

[ooc]I'm gone for two days, and this is what you guys post?


Tantum: Enough. This is a storytelling thread. You want to place in your own plot, go ahead. But clear it with us first, so we can put out a few bugs. Of course, you could leave a few secrets. But right now, your plans are one of the top reasons why all this fighting started.

Sbyrd: Thank you for trying to help. I just wish it could've worked.

Dragon: I thank you for respecting my wishes, even when they were unclear.

Razz: This is definitely not over. I've got some plans of my own that might spice things up a little bit. I just... have to get to the 7th temple. ^.^;

Karma: Please stop. Karma, I can understand you wanting to leave, but if you're going to leave, then leave peacefully. I mean, you're leaving me alone with them, and I'm going to have to deal with them now. Just look at what your constant fighting against him has caused. Now even Razz is getting tired, and I know him to be very patient (even if I don't see him irl.)

....Maybe this is why I felt it... [/ooc]

[Tantum]

[OOC] This is not my fault, and do not blame it on me. This is Karma's fault, because he says he wants one thing, and then turns around and gets pissed off when you do it.

I was not trying to make Zegar weak. Like Zegar said, he was faking it, and planned on sneak attacking Laros. Did you even read the whole post Karma? He said "He was falling into a trap" I didn't say it as if Zegar was delusional, but that he was serious. Zuko came along and tried to get Zegar to go off and find Duraga.

Karma told me he had plans with Duraga, which is why I did this. How can you people not understand this? Razz is the only one who understands, yet he is the youngest(right?). I must now assume the rest of you are crack babies, or have down syndrome. [/OOC]

[dragondude_r]

[ooc]Not that,Sbyrd.If Lotu was destroyed,we still had Roll's quest and my little journey.But,hey,now it gets to last even longer!And I am 12,Tantum.

*cough,then murmur*jack***...*cough*[/ooc]

ShoRyu charged forward,running on th mountain wall.ShinRyu followed him,but AnoKamiRyu turned invisible.Theyu continued onward until they reached a large,hay den.The hay was black,though,and there was swirling darkness-like water surrounding it.ShoRyu nodded and backflipped off of the mountain wall,shooting a few blasts at it.ShinRyu shot a few blasts of Ki as well,running behind it.But AnoKamiRyu didn't react,but stayed in the rays of the sun,invisible.The Ram burst through,brandishing black horns.Its fur was red and was on two legs,resembling a Were-Ram,with very stong muscles and fine toned abs.Yet a look of pure evil in its eyes.It ran forward,horns pointed ahead,about to knock into the mountain wall where ShoRyu was.Amazingly enough,it shook the mountain as it hit and made a dent large enough for a house to fit in.ShoRyu fell,but turned into a tiger as he hit the ground.He roared and quickly ran around the AkuMa,leaving his Zanzoken images.But the Ram followed the head image and rammed into it,sending it into ShinRyu.But ShinRyu caught him.They both turned into Dragons then and caught the Ram.ShinRyu was spinning it around and ShoRyu went where he sensed the charging ShinAnoKamiRyu (Shin when he is invisible or in his Rage form).They waited uintil the Ram was thrown in the air.ShoRyu went through i with much speed,wings suddenly razor sharp as a Wind Dragon,and as it was sliding in two,ShinAnoKamiRyu fired his blast of Light.The AkuMa baaa-ed Demonically and vanished.They received the rock that fell from the ashes and flew back to the Centaurs,visible and as Wind Dragons.

Centaur:"Many thanks.Now we may live in peace in the mountains again.Maybe the Dwarves shall even return from their Forge Island.Take the rock and go inform them,if you will."

AnoKamiRyu nodded and grabbed the rock in his claws.It blinked to the West and that's where they slowly went.

ShinRyu:"Dog,Pig,Rooster,Rat,Horse,Rabbit,Monkey,O x!Two down...*Counts his fingers*...8 to go,my brothers!"

ShoRyu nodded and AnoKamiRyu fingered his rock.

[Roll]

[ooc] Tantum, are you ignorant, or stupid? Take your pick. Both fit you well. Now listen to me. I never placed all the blamne on you. However, your plans to defeat LOTU with Zuko as the sole strongest doesn't allow much serious rping as far as battling goes. You see, when the battle begins, you've left Zuko as one of the only people that can defeat Lotu alone, while Tacaeus and Zegar have to either back off and go after something else, or they have to figure out a plan of attack.

As far as Zegar is concerned, if Karma did pm his plans to you, why don't you share the pm with us? That way, maybe we can figure out what went wrong in the first place. However, if you don't want to, then you should keep your theoretical comments to yourself and allow Karma to be upset with you, because you obviously don't want to take the time to try and even fix whatever is wrong or even change it a little bit. [/ooc]

[SBYRD5]

Narrator=The Clique return the the other side of the portal with many questions.Is Zuko still alive?Yanguz Gen the merchanery of the Black Dragons has found and lost his daughter in the same day....what and were is his future plans?
Gogan has become a very superior warrior...he has one purpose now to keep order.....Taceaus has a friend to take care of,and Zegar has to defeat...The Dark Priest,and ShinRyu/ShoRyu/AnokamiRyu...have there own little adventure,and who is this Mizuki?...To finding these answers...GOD...SPEED....god...speed...

Zuko's regeneration,and the saga continues...

***************Everyone is Teleported to the other side of the portal expect...LOTU and demons...duh*********

Gogan=(reappears)Hmm I can still sense Zuko's life force...but how?

Zegar=(reappears)I must defeat the Dark Priest....and get back the staff and....gem...

*********Taceaus and Razz reappear********

Taceaus=I would love to chat but my friend here is deepily injured...

Razz=I'm inpressed they all managed to survive.

******Razz passes out*******

Taceaus=Umm later....Zegar...stay alive..

****Zegar gives Taceaus a hard stare and gives a slow nod..and also begins to think******

Zegar=(Thinking)Today Taceaus you showed me something....maybe your not completely done being Tacq...

Taceaus=...I am....and tell me and Razz regroup farewell...

******Taceaus and Razz dissappear*********

Yanguz=(Appears)Hmm my daughter gave her life today...what makes me think is those young men...that came to her aid...perhaps they can tell me something of this Mizuki...

Gogan=Were ever you go Yanguz..you will have my respect you are an honorable man....

Yanguz=I may be honorable...but you..have changed..you seem to control your Ki..now...and you look so much stronger...Farewell I'm going to search for those warriors....ShoRyu,ShinRyu,AnokamiRyu...perhaps they can help me find her...farewell Zegar and Gogan..

Zegar=Farewell...remeber who you are.....

Yanguz=I always do...

****Yanguz walks in his direction********

Zegar=He wasn't that bad of a warrior he fought with a purpose...hmm I have my own now Duraga....your next...

*****Zegar deforms from his demon form..and runs toward the Dark Priest********

Gogan=Hmm I suppose I will remain guard her to make sure nothing...what the!!!!!!?????

***********Zuko's body comes through the portal...and lands on the ground*********

Gogan=I see he must know of the regeneration process....Zuko reform yourself so we can talk..

****Zuko begins pop up another head******


Gogan=So thats how you claim to be so powerful with such things you seem invincable.

******Zuko's head pops out his body..and he is gasping for air******

Zuko=I was careless someone of my rank was distracted....so did you defeat them..

Gogan=No we didn't have the strenght,and I realized the battle was fruitless...so did your men...for now...

Zuko=......So is Zegar and Taceaus alive...

Gogan=Amazingily yes...

Zuko=Good...I don't want them to know I am alive just yet...I have plans..

Gogan=Oh really.....

Yet to be finished....

[Tantum]

[OOC] Roll, when I said the rest of you... I meant the ones who were complaining. You've never started with me, so why would I call you a crack baby?

Also, My plan wasn't to defeat the LOTU w/ Zuko... he was just to hold him off, whilst the angels defeat the demon horde, and Zegar rid of Duraga, and got the staff and gem back.

A few days ago I cleaned 90 PM's out of my box, so that's an impossibility. [/OOC]

[Razz]

[OOC] What I would have done for the "rienforcements part" was this:
The angels would fight the demons for a while, but begin to whither. Tacaeus becomes desperate. Eventually, he calls Shin and Sho, and if they choose to come, they would. They'd make a kickarse entrance and just destroy demons like crazy, with a dragon clan (or two) aiding them. That was my plan.
And Tantum, yes I do understand, yet, I also understand Karma. You both have good points, and I agree with both.

And BTW, I thought Zegar was a kickarse chara. :buttrock: [/OOC]

[dragondude_r]

[ooc]That plan would have rocked.Of course,the Dragons alone wouldn't do all that;that would seem mockingly omnipotent *glares at Tantum*.But yeah,I would've been with it.And Sbyrd,you can make your entrance with them anytime,if you want.[/ooc]

ShoRyu turned to ShinRyu as they landed.It was obvious farmland,yellow plains and a few fields of various overgrown vegetables,almost twelve feet high corn for instance.

ShoRyu:"Well,well...if we're not in the land of Old Farmer John...Who do you think is in-???"

They heard a loud crowing and a rooster jumped from the corn field.It was about 30 feet tall and had obviously jumped from many yards away from the Dragons.It's talons were about as long as any normal human and it had two heads,the "beards" razor blades.

[ooc]Okay,you try making a description for a man-eating chicken![/ooc] :laughlong:

They heard a Demonic sqeal and a red pig raced from the pig too,amazingly slow.It had a neanderthal-like tooth sticking from its jaw,but otherwise it looked like a giant boar.It also had a mohawk running down its spine made from jutting bones.

Hearing a Demonic neigh,a horse figure appeared in front of them with immense speed.It had six legs and,of course,a Diablo-like red and black color,along with 3 tails.

ShoRyu turned to AnoKamiRyu,who in turn turned to ShinRyu.They shot Ki balls in to the ground and ran into the cornfield,hoping it would distract them long enough.The Boar waited for them to come out and the Horse chased after them.The Rooster jumped in front of them constantly.ShoRyu dawned his Lightning Dragon form,the smallest form,in which he was as tall as two fully grown humans.ShinRyu turned into a Tiger and ShinAnoKamiRyu turned invisible.

ShoRyu struck the Rooster constantly in its faces,but it still "cockadoodled doo" constantly,pecking at him.He dodged each hit and rammed into it,forcing it out of the corkfield.

ShinRyu Zanzoken-ed around the Horse and they both vanished,fighting at a high speed.In a few seconds,ShinRyu appeared many feet back,rubbing the kick-mark on his face into the ground and the Horse was reeling.It stopped,grinning Demonically.ShinRyu growled and roared upwards,the time slowing.He raced forward as the Horse seemed to be going normal speed and struck it from all corners.When he stopped,though,the horse double-kicked him into the ground and trampled him.They both stopped and jumped away from each other,bloodied.

ShinAnoKamiRyu looked at each of them and turned to the now charging pig.It couldn't see him but would hit him anyways with its wild bulk.He jumped on its back and in an invisible Rage form,stabbed it multiple times in the back.But the Spines raised and he was stabbed.He forced away from it and the trio was forced back to back as the Farm AkuMas charged,time-savoringly.

[SBYRD5]

[ooc]Hmm farm mythical beast..mehh...I'm game.Tantum...your character is alive you can post man.....Razz are going to give up...since SSJkarma...left?

Pfft...When I start something I try my best to finish it...Karma will be back...I promise you...[ooc]

Narrator=Now Yanguz begins a quest to sreach down three warriors.ShoRyu.....hmmm and ShinRyu,an also AnokamiRyu.
Those three seem to be busy with there side quest....Hmm AkUma..hmmm Yanguz Gen The Merchanery Of The Black Dragons will confront them soon....

ShinRyu,ShoRyu,AnokamiRyu

***Yanguz is traveling in an open area,and begins to climb an eroded hill*********

Yanguz=Hmm I can smell the roasting of a vegetable.....

*****Yanguz inhales the air and comes to the conclusion..it smells like******

Yanguz=Hmm..Somewhat like Corn that is roasting...I haven't ate for sometime now..perhaps I may invite myself to a meal....Hmmm what was that.....

*****Yanguz sees a fireball shot throw the air from over the hill he is headed for*****

Yanguz=I'm....SMELLING BLOOD NOW I BETTER HURRY!!!!!!!!!

******Yanguz climbs the hill to see*****

Yanguz=ShoRyu,ShinRyu,an AnoKamiRyu....are battling...it appears they could use some support....(Thinking=That roasting corn was the corn burning in the field....oh on the fire could spread....I have to stop the flames.....it would be a waste if the fire consumes the corn...)

To be continued...

[SBYRD5]

[quoteost_uid0="SSJKarma"][OOC]tantum... no need to apologize for anything... i told you in the PMs ! its RPG, we gotta deals with the situationregardless of the story we had chosen. but you cannot ask of someone to delete a post he make just because it could ruin your story ! the teleprtation almost ruined my pasrt of the story i was oming up with... so was gogan and yanguz, they weren't suppose to be there at all, but they hapenned, so i dealt with them in ! that's how RPG PLAYERS must play, or the story will fall short too soon ![/OOC][/quote]
[ooc]True statement lets continue our side quest...I was enjoying reading everyones.[ooc]