.:|james's art v.01|:. - Ms paint

BMXX · 12-26-2004, 07:07 PM

I posted this on BG, and I know most of you don't go there. So I'll post it here also.

If you can, please judge the work with no crucial slurs or anything more. This has been done by MS paint. Rate 1 - 10 with explain and comments on how to make the picture better. Judge... Great, Alright, Bad, Mediocre. You decide.

Edited By BMXX on 1104116919

Zpower · 12-27-2004, 12:26 AM

Ear, eyes way out of proportion. The top of the ear and the eyeline should match up. Top of the left side of the head shouldnt bend out then in then out again. It should only bend outward going down to the chin. Hairline needs to be refined alot more. Nose is out of proportion again nose should line up with bottom of the ear. Also your nose curves downward looks awkward. Maybe actually creating a eye on this character would help it look better. Eye doesnt even have an iris ect.. but besides all that ohyah the chin isnt straight and besides that pretty good for begginner even in ms paint you should be able get proportions atleast somewhat right though.

BMXX · 12-27-2004, 09:08 AM

Beginner... yeah okay...

Here's another one I did, y'all rate it. MORE PEOPLE RATE!

Edited By BMXX on 1104167434

marvel911 · 12-27-2004, 11:44 AM

In my opinion, the only real problem is that is ear is way higher than it should be, so that takes away the realism. Other than that the face is outlined pretty well, plus its all done in paint so that also adds to the score. Overall 7.5/10.

estset · 12-27-2004, 03:12 PM

Not bad for paint user

And you make the BG the same as the guy T Shirt =/ I give it 6.5/10.

BMXX · 12-27-2004, 07:04 PM

I decided to draw a Goku on MS paint. RATE. Don't view and just leave... rate!!! All three of the works.

{Predator} · 12-27-2004, 08:29 PM

all 7's thats good by using paint am not really good in that so i cant give u any advice but nice paint work

BMXX · 12-27-2004, 11:08 PM

Heh, okay thanks...

MORE COMMENTS. DON'T BE LAZY.

SBYRD5 · 12-27-2004, 11:57 PM

HMM

I suppose on the pc it's hard to draw.....

....

umm..man I'm a serious art freak....you don't want my opinion.

lain:

Pyromaniac666 · 12-28-2004, 10:04 AM

They keep getting better and better as u go, keep up the good work.

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12-26-2004, 07:07 PM	#1
BMXX Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Back in my home, USA Posts: 426 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	I posted this on BG, and I know most of you don't go there. So I'll post it here also. If you can, please judge the work with no crucial slurs or anything more. This has been done by MS paint. Rate 1 - 10 with explain and comments on how to make the picture better. Judge... Great, Alright, Bad, Mediocre. You decide. Edited By BMXX on 1104116919 __________________ [color=RoyalBlue:sig_uid]<span style='font-family:tahoma'>I'm Ecuadorian, biatch! Hehe-Haha Just found out; bleh... mexican pride. [img:sig_uid]http://bmx22002.250free.com/ART/sentij4gs.jpg[/img:sig_uid] [b:sig_uid]Profile upgraded: Sept 9, 2004 - May 1, 2005[/b:sig_uid]</span>[/color:sig_uid]

12-27-2004, 12:26 AM	#2
Zpower Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,038 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Ear, eyes way out of proportion. The top of the ear and the eyeline should match up. Top of the left side of the head shouldnt bend out then in then out again. It should only bend outward going down to the chin. Hairline needs to be refined alot more. Nose is out of proportion again nose should line up with bottom of the ear. Also your nose curves downward looks awkward. Maybe actually creating a eye on this character would help it look better. Eye doesnt even have an iris ect.. but besides all that ohyah the chin isnt straight and besides that pretty good for begginner even in ms paint you should be able get proportions atleast somewhat right though. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v84/Foster5k/jillandz.gif[/img:sig_uid] <s>rewopzmaI</s>

12-27-2004, 09:08 AM	#3
BMXX Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Back in my home, USA Posts: 426 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Beginner... yeah okay... Here's another one I did, y'all rate it. MORE PEOPLE RATE! Edited By BMXX on 1104167434 __________________ [color=RoyalBlue:sig_uid]<span style='font-family:tahoma'>I'm Ecuadorian, biatch! Hehe-Haha Just found out; bleh... mexican pride. [img:sig_uid]http://bmx22002.250free.com/ART/sentij4gs.jpg[/img:sig_uid] [b:sig_uid]Profile upgraded: Sept 9, 2004 - May 1, 2005[/b:sig_uid]</span>[/color:sig_uid]

12-27-2004, 11:44 AM	#4
marvel911 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: The Northern Hemisphere Posts: 6,610 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	In my opinion, the only real problem is that is ear is way higher than it should be, so that takes away the realism. Other than that the face is outlined pretty well, plus its all done in paint so that also adds to the score. Overall 7.5/10. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y226/mcclean/M911.gif[/img:sig_uid]

12-27-2004, 03:12 PM	#5
estset Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Canada Posts: 2,428 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Not bad for paint user And you make the BG the same as the guy T Shirt =/ I give it 6.5/10. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload5/drdoom5.jpg[/img:sig_uid] [img:sig_uid]http://nosoul4evr.cyberfuturism.com/images/xforce3d.gif[/img:sig_uid] http://nosoul4evr.cyberfuturism.com Click NoSoul4Evr site to learn about SFO more.

12-27-2004, 07:04 PM	#6
BMXX Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Back in my home, USA Posts: 426 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	I decided to draw a Goku on MS paint. RATE. Don't view and just leave... rate!!! All three of the works. __________________ [color=RoyalBlue:sig_uid]<span style='font-family:tahoma'>I'm Ecuadorian, biatch! Hehe-Haha Just found out; bleh... mexican pride. [img:sig_uid]http://bmx22002.250free.com/ART/sentij4gs.jpg[/img:sig_uid] [b:sig_uid]Profile upgraded: Sept 9, 2004 - May 1, 2005[/b:sig_uid]</span>[/color:sig_uid]

12-27-2004, 08:29 PM	#7
{Predator} Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 550 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	all 7's thats good by using paint am not really good in that so i cant give u any advice but nice paint work __________________ AKA StrifeZ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/EvilPredator/DF.jpg[/img:sig_uid]

12-27-2004, 11:08 PM	#8
BMXX Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Back in my home, USA Posts: 426 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Heh, okay thanks... MORE COMMENTS. DON'T BE LAZY. __________________ [color=RoyalBlue:sig_uid]<span style='font-family:tahoma'>I'm Ecuadorian, biatch! Hehe-Haha Just found out; bleh... mexican pride. [img:sig_uid]http://bmx22002.250free.com/ART/sentij4gs.jpg[/img:sig_uid] [b:sig_uid]Profile upgraded: Sept 9, 2004 - May 1, 2005[/b:sig_uid]</span>[/color:sig_uid]

12-27-2004, 11:57 PM	#9
SBYRD5 Banned Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: North Carolina Posts: 6,549 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): 0 Thanks (Received): 0 Likes (Given): 0 Likes (Received): 0 Dislikes (Given): 0 Dislikes (Received): 0 Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	HMM I suppose on the pc it's hard to draw..... .... umm..man I'm a serious art freak....you don't want my opinion. lain:

12-28-2004, 10:04 AM	#10
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