Drawing done in pen

[Wave Master]

you can't see the shoulders o.0 and also the main problem is the neck its too long

[rabbitalien]

zpower... the reason the anatomy isnt correctly done and some things might b skipped, is that it isnt an american style of drawing, its anime... this reason being that anime overlooks general anatomy and jus gives it a more likable and clean pic... adding all those veins cartilage, muscles... sweat and blood might not make it that attractive. i think its kinda nice... but u need to work on casting those shadows...

[-NYCE-]

well in anime it is anatomically correct in most but it's all up 2 the individuals styles and the different uses of foreshortening but in this case i made mistakes that i couldn't erase cuz i used a pen CAN'T ERASE PEN!

[Elena]

Well, you did good. I could never draw in pen, it would look all smudged and stuff if I did. And that looks like it came from your imagination...which I don't have....yes the neck does look snapped but, It's All Good.

[bloodpack]

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i edited her work, now tell me which one has a broken neck and which has a proper posture...

point is, regardless of what type or art youre drawing, whether its anime or american style, you must treat the character as if they too can "feel", how would you feel if youre the one doing that pose, would your neck hurt? even its fiction, you it should have an essence of anatomical realism

[Battleaxe22]

point is, regardless of what type or art youre drawing, whether its anime or american style, you must treat the character as if they too can "feel", how would you feel if youre the one doing that pose, would your neck hurt? even its fiction, you it should have an essence of anatomical realism

Good point. However, I find you are taking away from some of the skill Jyn has demonstrated. Not that this was your intention, I sensed more ridicule than constructive criticism.

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-Chris

[bloodpack]

[quoteost_uid0="Battleaxe22"]

point is, regardless of what type or art youre drawing, whether its anime or american style, you must treat the character as if they too can "feel", how would you feel if youre the one doing that pose, would your neck hurt? even its fiction, you it should have an essence of anatomical realism

Good point. However, I find you are taking away from some of the skill Jyn has demonstrated. Not that this was your intention, I sensed more ridicule than constructive criticism.

Hot joint of the month- Pharoe Monch- New World Symphony
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-Chris[/quote]
well forgive me if thats the first impression although its not

-im not taking her skill away, if thats her style then its ok, im just trying to correct it, sharing what i know but its still up to her if she wants to follow

-no its not a ridicule

again pardon me

[-NYCE-]

I'MA A GUY!!!!!! I getwat u guys r sayin bout wats wrong can't fix this pic it's ova and done

aiight i'll say wun last thing conserning this pic the mistake happened when i messed up the left side when i was desiding wat clothing choice 2 use i drew this before determing the hieght of the shoulders cuz fo the pose i was gonna use the shoulders needed 2 be raised

p.s. I'm posting another pic i'm workin on tomorrow(for those that seen da 1st version of my angel fighter full scene complete well almost)

[evryoung8998]

yo i wish i can post the pencil drawings i make u'll stay in amazement, i'll show u one of these days i'll scan it and i'll show u. It's a whole bunch of DBZ DBGT characters dat i drew and some kingdom hearts, i'll be the best drawer in the forum if yousaw ma drawings. i'll show u one day,maybe tommorow i'll scan it and show u!!

[Zpower]

[quoteost_uid0="evryoung8998"]It's a whole bunch of DBZ DBGT characters dat i drew[/quote]
:laugh: dont bother.. j/k but really man drawing dbz is soooo old now its not even funny. If you're going to post fanart pleeeeeeeeeease do something other than dbz. Also its not that creative or imaginative or artistic to just draw characters people have already made...