Atomic man - Never heard of it.

It's some cartoon comic person im makeing. This is the story he was just a little boy rideing his bike one day in the spring the son was shine the girl's was looking at him into he bust into a truck carry stuff from some other place. He look up to it an he was shocked. He look's up takeing a deep gulp then walk's away from the truck. By geting hit by the truck he look to his hand's with some kind of goo. He ran home an look to his hand's he washed them then took a bath got ready for bed. Then when he got older(19) he remeber about the truck well known this man name: Rollute Meana. He Wanted to get the truck away an put it somewhere that the police the grovement will not even look. He got the truck hide it in a cave but suddely the truck fall's over crushing the man. But the boy was by the beach looking at this girl her name was: Jenny Sundel. So he smiled an as suddly he was hit by one of the barrows in the truck as known as the nuclear stuff was on his hand's he ran home this time he went in an rest. Suddly he woke up makeing this suit(kind of like spiderman's. But with a cap on it.) He start's makeing the suit cuz his mind was telling him. The nurclear got him stronger an faster then before, he put's on the suit then go's out side. He see's a snake trying to kill a rat. His hand's begain to bring light then he shock the snake with full force. Look's to his hand's then begain's to smile. then he say's " I'm I'm Atomic man". He go's off an run's fast saveing the world from evil an still likeing Jenny sundel to.

So how yout hink about that?

[Physicals r scary]

Quote: from Irvine on 4:28 pm on Dec. 7, 2001
It's some cartoon comic person im makeing. This is the story he was just a little boy rideing his bike one day in the spring the son was shine the girl's was looking at him into he bust into a truck carry stuff from some other place. He look up to it an he was shocked. He look's up takeing a deep gulp then walk's away from the truck. By geting hit by the truck he look to his hand's with some kind of goo. He ran home an look to his hand's he washed them then took a bath got ready for bed. Then when he got older(19) he remeber about the truck well known this man name: Rollute Meana. He Wanted to get the truck away an put it somewhere that the police the grovement will not even look. He got the truck hide it in a cave but suddely the truck fall's over crushing the man. But the boy was by the beach looking at this girl her name was: Jenny Sundel. So he smiled an as suddly he was hit by one of the barrows in the truck as known as the nuclear stuff was on his hand's he ran home this time he went in an rest. Suddly he woke up makeing this suit(kind of like spiderman's. But with a cap on it.) He start's makeing the suit cuz his mind was telling him. The nurclear got him stronger an faster then before, he put's on the suit then go's out side. He see's a snake trying to kill a rat. His hand's begain to bring light then he shock the snake with full force. Look's to his hand's then begain's to smile. then he say's " I'm I'm Atomic man". He go's off an run's fast saveing the world from evil an still likeing Jenny sundel to.

my cousin whos in 2nd grade can write better than you

[AXE]

Quote: from Irvine on 6:59 pm on Dec. 31, 1969
It's some cartoon comic person im makeing. This is the story he was just a little boy rideing his bike one day in the spring the son was shine the girl's was looking at him into he bust into a truck carry stuff from some other place. He look up to it an he was shocked. He look's up takeing a deep gulp then walk's away from the truck. By geting hit by the truck he look to his hand's with some kind of goo. He ran home an look to his hand's he washed them then took a bath got ready for bed. Then when he got older(19) he remeber about the truck well known this man name: Rollute Meana. He Wanted to get the truck away an put it somewhere that the police the grovement will not even look. He got the truck hide it in a cave but suddely the truck fall's over crushing the man. But the boy was by the beach looking at this girl her name was: Jenny Sundel. So he smiled an as suddly he was hit by one of the barrows in the truck as known as the nuclear stuff was on his hand's he ran home this time he went in an rest. Suddly he woke up makeing this suit(kind of like spiderman's. But with a cap on it.) He start's makeing the suit cuz his mind was telling him. The nurclear got him stronger an faster then before, he put's on the suit then go's out side. He see's a snake trying to kill a rat. His hand's begain to bring light then he shock the snake with full force. Look's to his hand's then begain's to smile. then he say's " I'm I'm Atomic man". He go's off an run's fast saveing the world from evil an still likeing Jenny sundel to.

Hahahahahahahahaahha! man that is the worst story i'v heard it needs to be atomic Boy not man hahaha *axe walks off*

[steventhebol]

Quote: from Irvine on 7:28 pm on Dec. 7, 2001
It's some cartoon comic person im makeing. This is the story he was just a little boy rideing his bike one day in the spring the son was shine the girl's was looking at him into he bust into a truck carry stuff from some other place. He look up to it an he was shocked. He look's up takeing a deep gulp then walk's away from the truck. By geting hit by the truck he look to his hand's with some kind of goo. He ran home an look to his hand's he washed them then took a bath got ready for bed. Then when he got older(19) he remeber about the truck well known this man name: Rollute Meana. He Wanted to get the truck away an put it somewhere that the police the grovement will not even look. He got the truck hide it in a cave but suddely the truck fall's over crushing the man. But the boy was by the beach looking at this girl her name was: Jenny Sundel. So he smiled an as suddly he was hit by one of the barrows in the truck as known as the nuclear stuff was on his hand's he ran home this time he went in an rest. Suddly he woke up makeing this suit(kind of like spiderman's. But with a cap on it.) He start's makeing the suit cuz his mind was telling him. The nurclear got him stronger an faster then before, he put's on the suit then go's out side. He see's a snake trying to kill a rat. His hand's begain to bring light then he shock the snake with full force. Look's to his hand's then begain's to smile. then he say's " I'm I'm Atomic man". He go's off an run's fast saveing the world from evil an still likeing Jenny sundel to.

And you say that i write crap on post. Oh well!