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mooo1 · 02-10-2003, 07:16 PM

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ost_uid0="mooo1"]alright,let me show you how it's done.
Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise!
yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem.

Cow
There once was a cow from Main,
Who ate almost half of Spain.
He devoured the stores
and munched on the floors
And finally flew back in the rain.

well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried.[/quote]
Wow, what an amazing limmerick.
(in french accent)
Ah shallenj yiu to ah dooell!
*slap*

Cheese
Look in the holes of this cheese
It makes you fall on your knees
Once you get up
You will throw up
And after that, you will sneeze

muhahahah . . .[/quote]
wow Razz.... I'm flattered..( what does that word mean?) anyway, thx! i tought mine was nothing compared to your poems, but thx. now i got another one.

The sun and moon
The time has come for us to rise,
For all the birds and bees and flies
The light is shining bold and bright,
The time has come for one more fight,
Every day goes by the same,
Every day we play the same game
Then all is quiet and the day is done,
Then the moon comes out, and takes over the sun.

I hope you guys like this one better than my other one. Heh, not bad for a thirteen year old, eh?

02-10-2003, 07:16 PM	#30
mooo1 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 457 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): Thanks (Received): Likes (Given): Likes (Received): Dislikes (Given): Dislikes (Received): Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="Razz"][quoteost_uid0="mooo1"]alright,let me show you how it's done. Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise! yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem. Cow There once was a cow from Main, Who ate almost half of Spain. He devoured the stores and munched on the floors And finally flew back in the rain. well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried.[/quote] Wow, what an amazing limmerick. (in french accent) Ah shallenj yiu to ah dooell! slap Cheese Look in the holes of this cheese It makes you fall on your knees Once you get up You will throw up And after that, you will sneeze muhahahah . . .[/quote] wow Razz.... I'm flattered..( what does that word mean?) anyway, thx! i tought mine was nothing compared to your poems, but thx. now i got another one. The sun and moon The time has come for us to rise, For all the birds and bees and flies The light is shining bold and bright, The time has come for one more fight, Every day goes by the same, Every day we play the same game Then all is quiet and the day is done, Then the moon comes out, and takes over the sun. I hope you guys like this one better than my other one. Heh, not bad for a thirteen year old, eh? __________________ Sometimes the biggest obstacle can be the smallest thing.