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DX Zero · 12-20-2002, 04:58 PM

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ost_uid0="Dan Hibiki"]
It doesn't match into any traditional rhyme patterns, and I know my rhyming very well. It doesn't rhyme (except in a few places, but the rhymes are uncreative). Also, in case you haven't noticed, this IS a rap thread.[/quote]
you know...

they made me take english 9 ..
they taught me nursery rhymes,
with shua vowels and ending lines..
we started with la la lending chimes.
yall is jokes if u think u is cool,
cuz u broke the law fo' skippin school,
u be smokin and doing crimes,
well if ur flowing good then
you should be drinking booze and spendin' yo dimes,
don't be goin' to waste a man's time,
u still as fake as lipton lime,
just chill yo
try again at ur prime

12-20-2002, 04:58 PM	#43
DX Zero Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 2,139 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): Thanks (Received): Likes (Given): Likes (Received): Dislikes (Given): Dislikes (Received): Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="Dan Hibiki"] It doesn't match into any traditional rhyme patterns, and I know my rhyming very well. It doesn't rhyme (except in a few places, but the rhymes are uncreative). Also, in case you haven't noticed, this IS a rap thread.[/quote] you know... they made me take english 9 .. they taught me nursery rhymes, with shua vowels and ending lines.. we started with la la lending chimes. yall is jokes if u think u is cool, cuz u broke the law fo' skippin school, u be smokin and doing crimes, well if ur flowing good then you should be drinking booze and spendin' yo dimes, don't be goin' to waste a man's time, u still as fake as lipton lime, just chill yo try again at ur prime __________________ DX was here.