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Old 11-24-2002, 05:53 PM   #10
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Nice poem folks.

Mine is entitled: Once Upon A Midnight

Late in the eyes of the midnight blue,
Two brothers are running and stumbling;
From drinking, gambling and partying too,
They don't know what the hell is happening.

The shots they heard fired from behind,
cause them to run and stumble harder;
But finally one brother losses his mind,
and said to his brother, "Send my love to our father."

Tears dropped from both brother's weary eyes,
crying and hugging each other;
Confessions from a brother said that it's a price,
for what I did to his daughter.

I just love to write poems.
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