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Old 10-15-2002, 09:21 PM   #17
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DARKPICCOLO: i already see some TWEAKS to be done !
first : the monster aren't all dead, they are wining the fight and the soldier who are retaliting will soon lose the fights as there are too many monsters to fight but they are doing there best !

second: your entrance should be a little more precise in the ESCAPING of your character. like hoe did he get lose if he was in jail or something !

sorry this is a big OOC, but it will be the last one !
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