Funny when I read it I only saw one mistake you called Roll Sakura,besides that it was awesome.
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*KHCloud teleports back*
KHCloud=Thinking=(Aeris would've done the same as me I hope she finds peace where ever she is.
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DarkPiccolo=Why did you save her.....
Pro.Hojo=He was following my orders,and may I say you are an interesting species.
Darkpiccolo=I'm Namekian
Pro.hojo=So your an alien
Darkpiccolo=Really, I consider you odd.
Pro.Hojo=So what is your connection to my creation?
DarkPiccolo=Oh SBYRD5 we served in SOLIDER,and later defeated that group of villians....hmmmm I recall you being there head Scientist.
*Piccolo gets in battle stance*
Karma=Moans...urrrrr hic*
KHCloud=Piccolo not now....We have to find a away to get the fighting spirit back in SSJKARMA.
Pro.Hojo=There is the "Fountian of Youth" he will recalm his soul but....he will never die......
Darkpiccolo=Listen I created the dragonballs of earth.If we collect all 7 we can ask "Shinron The Eternal Dragon" to grant one wish.
Pro.Hojo=Ok,my wish would be for the dragon to be my expirament.
KHCloud=Professor Hojo, that is a wasted wish if you do that he can never grant another wish.I say we wish for the departed Karma to recieve his life again.
DarkPiccolo=Why not wish for ulitmate power?
KHCloud=I don't need that I make my own fate were is the "Dragon Radar".
Karma=At the....*groans* Turtle Hermits.....padddddooohhh
KHCloud= everyone stay here I'll be back shortly.
Pro.Hojo=Bring back a "PlayBoy" I love to exmaine those comics.
Everyone else= ??? ??? ??? ummm
KHCloud=Later.
*Teleports to the Turtle Hermit's Pad*
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Meanwhile
????=I've gather all the Dragonballs and plan to make my wish ...HAAAAAAaaaaaa
Master Rohsi= Not if I can help it...KAAAAAAahhhhmmmmmmmeeeehhhhhaaaaaa
*The Hermit sends an amazing amount of power at the creature*
???????=Wait wait NOOOOOoooo.....
*The creature was defeated by the Hermit's power*
Master Roshi=Now for my wish....(Thinking=To have a thousand beautiful young women that only love me...hAAAHAAaa) :laugh:
*KHCloud teleports to the island*
KHCLoud=Oh no that old man is already making a wish.
*KHCloud runs toward the dragon and the old man*
Master=I wish for....
*Stopping master in his sentence KHCloud says his wish*
KHCloud=I wish for Karma to have his soul again...
Shinron=your wish has been granted....Farwell.
*With the last Glow of Shinron's eyes he seperates into 7 balls and scatters back around the world*
Master hermit=Foolish kid it took me a whole year to gether those balls....KAAAAAAmmmmmEEEEHHHAAaaaa
KHCloud=Later old man.
*See a PlayBoy in the Hermits loan chair KHCloud grabs the magazine and teleports away from danger*
Master Hermit=NNNNNNNNNoooooooo it was the swimsuite issue I'll hunt you down kid!!!!!!!!AAAAAAAaaarrrggggghhhh
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Ok, SSJKarma your back alive please feel free to tell your part of the story.
Ok, Roll after you tell your part of the story I'm going to bring my part into your part soon.