[quote
ost_uid0="SBYRD5"]Snake thats one wild story....
*will snakemeet death atlast or is this some piece of strape metal stuck on his face making this darkness....???
nope now snake has to save the world in 54 hundered hours.
Present Time And Hours
Snake returns to NASA base.....after beating the lifeout of some aliens
General of Arms=s..nake
*Snake kneels beside the fallen general*
Snake=......general...
General=Snake you can drop your pride....I'm dying.......I am your father......
Snake=I know that....hang on old man......
*Snake is silent as he has a flash back*
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Solid Snakes Flash back*Flash back sounds*
General(snakes dad)=Newman soldiers only the best of you will be chosen for this mission.......
*The rookies all looked afraid to die.....but one...*
General=What do we have here some kid with heart...
*Thinking even though he's my son I must make him have hell on earth*
Snake=*Stares his father in the eyes without blink*
General=You think your an ace......
*With that the general hooks snake in the face....and cuts snakes cheek and a little blood appears*
Snake=*Thinking=That one was free.**Snake still stares his father down*
General=*Thinking=He became a man.....* DISSMISS!!!!!
Snake=*Walking away and thinking*Father I will be a legend like the "Great Capitain America"......till then father.....
Flash Back Ends
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General=Good bye son......take this with you on your mission........DISSMISS
(Snake recieves something to help him in his assualt against the aliens)
Snake=Item accepted......farewell.......father
*Snake walks away leaving his father as he is because his father would like to die alone*
Snake=*A small tear appears on his face outside the base*
am I crying for my........F A T H E R
Well I'm done someone till what his father give him and sme one else make an adventure for snake
*REMEBER=He has to save the planet from an alien Invasion* ???[/quote]
your call you killed the purpose of my story....I made you sound cool oh well