[quote ost_uid0="SBYRD5"]The neck is to large...ir builds into his back space like it's part of his back..making it appear hunchbacked...[/quote]
I see what you mean. Good observation.
The neck size is perfect. Of course, in art (and imagination) there are no boundaries to size or limitations. That neck looks great to me.
He is looking up, throwing his neck and head up, but you're right. The neck line should be shorter on his left side (which would be your right when you look at the picture) so it doesn't look so much like a hunchback or odd extention.
I still need some polishing up.
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I think it might look cooler if the shade lines all pointed in the same direction. Maybe if some areas were darker than others it might add some dynamic lighting.
About the shade lines pointing in a the same direction... I've done that before and it gives presence of light an awkward look on the subject. I was taught to shade away from the center of the face or an object. Still something I'm experimenting with so I'm not too familiar with shading in general.
And about shading areas being darker than others, that is an important issue I need some practice with as well. I don't have strong grasp of it yet. Thanks for pointing that out
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