its not bad, one thing you could have done is, shown the energy building up between ryus palms making it somewhat fairly more realistic instead of it being drawn in from the left side, and prehaps a little pixi dust wouldn't have gone amiss aswell, to add to that the usual stuff like a border, and you could have added text but thats optional i guess
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