ok where to start... look at his left hand... the middle an index finger... so choppy at the top... make it more smooth... font is 2 big, bigger then it should be used at and the style is simple as well... bg is decent id say the best uve made so far... the banner is huge, i dunt like its size... the border isnt that nice... mayb a border that has 3 inches but every line would have diff color (ie. outter line black... middle line being a matching light color and inner line being black as well)... sum brushing areas seem repetitive but overall id say its the best one uve made so far. good job, keep it up...
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