well i cant comment on the gfx since im not good at it
but in regards to your drawing, you still need to work more about human physique
i mean, the steroid guy needs more work on his hands, its like a hand of a mascot or a cartoon character
draw some joints, make the nerves on the dorsum of the hand appear like you did on his deltoids
its called consistency, wanna make him cartoonish, then make him funny cartoonish
wanna make him seriously drawn character, then make him one
i noticed that you gave details on his upper body but you forgot to give definition to his lower limb, the thigh's vastus medialis, rectus femoris, vastus lateralis aka quads
i see his pants are not loosen and its properly contoured to his thighs so wheres the muscle?
i also noticed that his sword or ax is underneath his thigh, i mean what exactly were you planning to do with it? where do you wana place his weapon? i think theres been misplacement
wheneve i draw a character, i always imagine myself on my art, do i feel comfortable on my pose? does my drawer gave me a relaxing position? do i have spines when i stand?
these are just a hint, im not pretty good myself and yet still a lot to learn but your work is kinda inspiring, i commend you for it, gj
Edited By bloodpack on 1099399659
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