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~(shortys)~ · 10-11-2004, 08:57 AM

Like i said on Tm.

Much better than your other work. You have improved. but still you gotta work on those typos. Try to make the middle more interesting. Besudes that its ok.

10-11-2004, 08:57 AM	#8
~(shortys)~ Senior Member Junior Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: NY, manhhattin Posts: 280 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): Thanks (Received): Likes (Given): Likes (Received): Dislikes (Given): Dislikes (Received): Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Like i said on Tm. Much better than your other work. You have improved. but still you gotta work on those typos. Try to make the middle more interesting. Besudes that its ok. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v223/yami213/peca.jpg[/img:sig_uid]