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Wave Master · 09-11-2004, 05:34 AM

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ost_uid0="Saijin_Ryu"]Very sloppy in part's, those could of been improved on..
One of your best brushing piece's, but like i said some character placement's were off key.
And i can see a sampled pruss being stamped at quiet a few places..
You must avoid this, and make everything about a piece more unique.
The Text could also be re-thought, .. very much.
I see it as good, ... but to trained eye's, there's much to improve on.[/quote]
Ditto work on TYPO

09-11-2004, 05:34 AM	#15
Wave Master Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 849 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): Thanks (Received): Likes (Given): Likes (Received): Dislikes (Given): Dislikes (Received): Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="Saijin_Ryu"]Very sloppy in part's, those could of been improved on.. One of your best brushing piece's, but like i said some character placement's were off key. And i can see a sampled pruss being stamped at quiet a few places.. You must avoid this, and make everything about a piece more unique. The Text could also be re-thought, .. very much. I see it as good, ... but to trained eye's, there's much to improve on.[/quote] Ditto work on TYPO __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/WaveMaster564/BeckTag.jpg[/img:sig_uid]