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Saijin_Ryu · 09-11-2004, 02:47 AM

Very sloppy in part's, those could of been improved on..
One of your best brushing piece's, but like i said some character placement's were off key.
And i can see a sampled pruss being stamped at quiet a few places..
You must avoid this, and make everything about a piece more unique.
The Text could also be re-thought, .. very much.
I see it as good, ... but to trained eye's, there's much to improve on.

09-11-2004, 02:47 AM	#12
Saijin_Ryu Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Somewhere in England Posts: 4,082 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): Thanks (Received): Likes (Given): Likes (Received): Dislikes (Given): Dislikes (Received): Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Very sloppy in part's, those could of been improved on.. One of your best brushing piece's, but like i said some character placement's were off key. And i can see a sampled pruss being stamped at quiet a few places.. You must avoid this, and make everything about a piece more unique. The Text could also be re-thought, .. very much. I see it as good, ... but to trained eye's, there's much to improve on.