Yeah as you begin to write for many years. You notice that your writing goes thru phases. I have had about 3 or 4 meanie phases and several lesser meanie phases. Rejection phases, acceptance phases, contemplative phases, reminiscing phases, wishing phases, dreaming phases, damn man. poop gets soo deep. I prsonally try not to draw from one inspiration for too long. but i always find myself getting stuck on the subject of romance like many poets. but hey, i know i aint the only romantic in this world. So heres one i recently wrote. :hehe:
Pain picks at pleasure like painted passion from pressed lips.
All your anguish anger astonishment arms are out asking for answers.
Iniside it lies intertwined in illuminated illusions.
Numb and nodding nervously nursing noxious nubile narcotic need.
Innocently inclined to the inescapable isolated idea.
Silently sleeping surrounded by solemn sounds of solitude.
Left like dried leaves loosely lying as lonely as autumn's love.
Overly ope novertunred to a noverture of oncoming waves and oceanic tides.
Vindicated and voluptuous as violet, valued voraciously in volumes.
Enchanting elegance as eve enters early light's embrace.
P.S. Nice work girl inferno. I havent read all of it yet, but i liked what i saw so far. Caretaker and destroyer..hehehehe. i was reading that one like YOU GO GIRL!
P.P.S Yo im having a problem with spaces and such......and O's look at the line where it says a noverture of oceanic tides and al that poop> the O line, i corrected those typo's twice and they still switch back like that...same thing happened with the marquee on ym sig, i couldnt get them to stay spaced...every OTHER time i would edit it, It would take out the double spaces between words and also make some O's and B's lowr case.../shrugs it was odd. but it was one of the first things i noticed since the forum's make over.
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