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Old 08-22-2004, 11:04 PM   #55
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very well done ^_^ nice imagery and feelings behind ur words in ur poems ^_^ heres another one for u all who don't mind reading my poems they're not that great so yeah



when time has past
and you have gone
and here at last i still stand waiting for that grain of sand to fall to mark that last moment with u
but in the end i'm a fool just dreaming away unreal dreams of you
when at last i'm left alone the ghost of yesterday haunts my home
your laughter rings like enchanted melodies in the night
your smiles like faded ambers
reminding me of a passion that once let me on fire
but like the ashes of yesterday and the sands of time u slip away
leaving me to face yet another day of not having u here with me
one last good bye one last touch one last sweet memory for my heart. . .


for those who have loved and lost
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