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Old 08-22-2004, 03:03 AM   #39
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[quoteost_uid2="girlNferno666"]^_^ very nice

heres one that goes out to those who have been forgotten and misused and abused much love to u all i know how it feel like *gives a huggle to them all*



Have you ever wonder where those things left over go
Those things left uncared for
Like pieces of a puzzle that have no use
Are those people who have been abused
No one hears the silent cries that we hide
The hurts we have inside
The darkness that consumes our souls
The things left untold
Things we've long to unload
Pain that scorches our souls
And burns our flesh
Like memories of being lashed
Sins of the past
Our only crime is being born next in line
In an endless cycle made before our time[/quoteost_uid2]
um i like all ur poems i know the other ones u did are better but um i personaly like this one the most. i give u props on all of them um ill try to do some also but i dont know if it will be poetry ill do something different something with no rhyme but with tendeness and all



Edited By jz3232 on Aug. 23 2004 at 03:12
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