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marvel911 · 07-08-2004, 01:33 PM

Well the background is pretty nice. I think it looks very well done. but trunks stands out too much. You probably want attention on him, but he is too bright, even for having a sun shining on him. Plus, even though the sun is pointing at him at an angle, there is no shadowbehind him. Then the shadow across the rock down by his leg hardly casts a visible shadow on his leg at all.
Anyhow thats just my opinion if you were going for a realistic feel for the image
Overall another nice job done by Saijin, 9/10.

07-08-2004, 01:33 PM	#4
marvel911 Senior Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: The Northern Hemisphere Posts: 6,610 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): Thanks (Received): Likes (Given): Likes (Received): Dislikes (Given): Dislikes (Received): Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	Well the background is pretty nice. I think it looks very well done. but trunks stands out too much. You probably want attention on him, but he is too bright, even for having a sun shining on him. Plus, even though the sun is pointing at him at an angle, there is no shadowbehind him. Then the shadow across the rock down by his leg hardly casts a visible shadow on his leg at all. Anyhow thats just my opinion if you were going for a realistic feel for the image Overall another nice job done by Saijin, 9/10. __________________ [img:sig_uid]http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y226/mcclean/M911.gif[/img:sig_uid]