dear lord, you people are just taking cliches and sticking them together!
"its good, text is okay but its over blended
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oh yeah, like if you know what the flip you are talking about.
okay, ninja heres my part:
the color is good, but it can use some other dinamics. the bright part should not be white, yellow is a good color for bright. color balance it. also, you can use some better P2S blending to make the text look "chunli like" such as hand writing letters, with possibly a glowing chinese charector.
toodles.