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(~BLADE~) · 05-31-2004, 12:50 PM

well from exeprinece the idea is creative however, the wrtitng needs improving polus don't use the same style all the time but for the first 5/10 second 4/10 good but neds improvment

05-31-2004, 12:50 PM	#4
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